Tides of war- Ch.1, States of confusion

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  1. kairigirl22 Destiny Islands Resident

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    Diana looked down at Panthera, he seemed at ease so she nodded. " What will you do with him?" She asked looking at Zane.
     
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    OOC: (Sorry, I'm still kinda' new at RPing. But I'm getting better.)

    Chronix went back inside and got on his computer. Even though it was midnight, Chronix didn't feel tired. Then, Chronix shut his computer off and instead got onto his bike for a ride around the countryside. Turning his engine on and riding out of the city, he noticed some guards and Princess Diana surrounding Zane. Chronix smirked and drove out through the city gates and into the countryside area. Usually, this allowed him to gather his thoughts. And his memory so far.

    ~Okay, my name is Chronix Ferisa Gear. I'm a seventeen and a half year old mercenary for hire, I used to work for a secret society, but I left because I don't like being a big shot. I was first class mercenary before I quit and became a for hire mercenary. My father was a knight, my mother was an angel, and they had me three years after marriage. I am five foot four I think. My sword was given to me by my old friend Max, just before he died. I met Jack today and have known Sero for eight and a half years. I joined the army at age fifteen and left at age sixteen because of a family matter with my cousin. I am now a bike riding mercenary, yadda yadda.~

    Chronix was busy with his thoughts when his cell phone rang. The ringtone was very odd, it was a mix of Sandstorm Techno and the normal ringtones. He looked at the caller ID. It was Sero. "Yes?" Chronix asked. "Okay, I know I said by morning I would be gone, but I figure leave at midnight, don't get to have fun in the morning, so I'm just letting you know I'm gone at five tomorrow, alright?" "Hmph. Fine." Chronix hung up and turned around to go back.
     
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    ooc: Oh really? That is actually a bit of a shock. I mean, I'm not sayen that you are perfect, but, you do seem good, besides a few easily mistakable things. But I didn't actually think that you were new at rping. Well then, since you are new at rping, then I just have to say, you are pretty good for a beginer.

    bic: "We'll lock him up in the dungeon and then we will question him. We're pretty sure that he has a connection to the disease that has been plauging your kingdom" one of the soldiers said to Diana, as they started to go on the move.
     
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    ooc yes good for someone who is new to rping

    Aya wacthed getting closer to them and soon was in sight but her face was hidden by the hood of her cloak "That wont be nice"
     
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    OOC: (Heh heh, I probably should have mentioned that. But, hey thanks! That's the first I've heard that one from anybody.)

    Chronix liked going around in circles in the countryside, so when he got back to the gates, he turned around and went out again. Chronix did something dangerous. He put his feet up on the bike's handle bars, leaned back in his seat, pulled out a book and started reading while driving with his feet, unaware that there was somebody watching him. Chronix had gotten to chapter 297 before he realized that he was being watched. Looking around at the person, he realized Jack was riding back to Mysidia giving him a really weird look and began laughing. "What? You've never seen a professional before?" Jack's eyes got wide, as he had heard from Sero that Chronix never smiled. And he was smiling right now. Chronix immediately turned around in the same position he was in somehow, and rode back to his house easily.

    OOC: (Yes, a long book, and Chronix has been practicing that trick since he got out of the army, so don't seem surprised that he can do that. Wait, was there something against fancy tricks like that?)
     
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    Diana watched as they took him away. " I wonder why he wanted our secret so much?" Panthera thought to her. " I'm really not sure. " She whispered to him.
     
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    THe soldiers carrying Zane kept moving, ignoring the woman, as other approached her, and said "State your buissness"
     
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    "I like messing with people" she removed showing her red eyes "It is my fav past time, and I hate your kingdom, it pains me to see that many people so damn happy"
     
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    "ITS A BLOODLING!" the soldiers began to yell, as they started to take out their weapons. They instantly assumed this due to her red eyes. "GIve up now, or else we will be forced to take action!" one of the soldiers said. The other soldiers carrying zane put him down, and took out their weapons as well, surrounding the strange woman.

    The soldier near Diana said "Please run"
     
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    "Wow is this is how human recat when they see a blooding I would love to see them right before they die" she threw a smoke bomb to the groud and when it cleared up she was gone

    ooc sorry but I got to go to bed now so byez
     
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    Panthera stood in front of Diana and snarled as she pulled out her dagger. " I won't run, I'm sick of these bloodlings." She said.
     
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    ooc edited my last post cause I got to go
     
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    The soldiers quickly ran to go and pick up Zane.

    "I apologize that our security isn't tighter. Please, follow us, and we will take you to the palace" the soldier said, as the soldiers began to surround the area, so that way when diana walked to the palace, she wouldn't get attacked AGAIN.

    ooc; I gtg as well. I will see everyone in the morning, ok
     
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    Diana nodded and followed then on her horse.
     
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    Jack had just gotten back to Mysidia when he found that there were some demons going through his town. "D*mn" Jack said, grabbing his spear and fighting them off. There were about ten there. When they were all gone, Jack said to himself "So, they've finally made it here. That means that Flounder will be next if they're not warned." Jack immediately got back on his bike and sped off back to Flounder to warn Chronix.
     
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    ooc: ummm, demons aren't exsactly a common thing to see, and it is usually quite rare, like angels. Also, whenever fighting, you might want to put detail into the fighting, instead of just saying that they fought.

    bic: The day had gone by, and they had finally reached the castle. The soldiers lead Diana to where her bedroom would be, which was towards the top of the castle, with a balcany to it. They took Zane down into the dungeon to be questioned.
     
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    Diana stood on the balcony with Panthera next to her. " What are we doing here?" She asked. " It's only for your safty." Panthera thought to her. She sighed, " I know, but why me? I mean there's hundreds of people dying back at home how come I got to get away?" " Because when your father passes away you have to run the kingdom." She sighed again. " I'm going for a walk." She said and headed out the door. Panthera followed silenetly behind.
     
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    Blade was walking around the streets
     
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    "TELL US!" the soldier yelled, as he wipped Zane on the back once more. Zane only remained silent, as he was whipped. He had a huge grin on his face. "Hey buddy, that the best you got? If you think that your gonna get me to tell you just by getting whipped, then you are terribly wrong. With a body like mine, I could stay alive for more then 3 days with a swords pierced through my stomach" Zane said, taunting the soldier. "Really?" the soldier asked. "I'm a freaken bloodling, what do you expect, idiot" zane said. "Oh, then I guess that we can move on to some more convincing methods" the soldier said, as a grin appeared on his face.
     
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    hello everyone, can anyone tell me what's happening?
     
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