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I decided to try a new style what do you think? CnC please

 

I like the use of green. The the lightning it pretty good. It is kinda hard to see what the stock is but it is still nice overall.

 

I don't like how the text sticks out so much. You could put it on Overlay and erase by 50% opacity or something. I like the style you're approaching (I'm trying to do something like that too), but I don't like the coloring.

>_>
8/10

 

nice, kinda creepy looking (no offence)
9.5/10

 

ok,i see what your trying to do.i would suggest that you blend in the text,dont have too much of your splats on your render/stock,add better lighting using a soft brush,and use colors that interact with one another.your getting there though.