Three angels: Crossed Love I've been working on it for awhile, and it's finally arrived. The anticipated sequel to three angels Three Angels II: Crossed Love Hope my fans of the series enjoy this new insallment. It takes place six months after the Mike's big showdown, June 2009. Chapter 1: Home I felt as if I was dying in my sleep. The nightmare I was having, fire was surrounding my small area. The strange part was that the flames were not hot the entire room felt ice-cold, and as if mocking the laws of physics I’ve learned about, the cold pierced my skin, making it feel hot. I was actually on the verge of tears when I finally saw him, the dark king himself, Satan. I awoke in a screaming terror, sweat sliding down my body. It took me a few minutes for me to realize I was in my old room. “Mikey, is everything alright?†A feminine voice softly said as the room door started to open. Turning on the light, I saw the ex-angel and soon to be Mrs. Clare White. She was as beautiful as the day she become full fledged human. She came to my side to touch my forehead and then quickly backed off. “My lord, you have a fever Mike!†“Probably from the odd nightmare he was having.†Said Toka, one of my two remaining angels. One of the suckiest things about it was that Clare cannot hear or see her. Before I could tell Clare anything, Kuri my other angel came in my room with a hurry. “Get Clare out of here!†She yelled at me. “Your mom is back from the murder case already!†“Clare, go; my mother’s home.†I told her. A few months ago, it wouldn’t matter if I had a couple of girls in my room, but things were a little different now. Clare was six months pregnant going on seven. My mother, Officer Magritte White did not act well to the news of our new baby. We’re pretty lucky that she didn’t kick Clare out of our house on the spot. “Okay, I’m going.†Clare said. She gave me a small kiss on my forehead and hurried back to her bedroom which was just across the hall. I looked at my alarm clock and saw that it was almost three in the morning. I lied down in my bed trying to fall asleep again, but I couldn’t. Toka and Kuri didn’t need to sleep, so they would just explore around the apartment complex. In the morning, I saw my mom sipping her coffee, and I’m usually the one who wakes up first. I grabbed myself a quick Pop-tart before I sat down across from her. She gave me a dark glare, like the one when we told her about the baby. “Mike, if you want to marry that girl this December, be my guest. However, since you want to grow up and be an adult so much, consider it granted.†She took a big sip of her coffee before speaking again. “You are going to move out and buy yourself an apartment. You two both have very good jobs, and you have a life savings; so I don’t want to hear any excuses†Was she serious about this? Me and Clare work as waiters at a local restaurant ever since the baby news. Even if it has to do with Clare’s current state, it is still unfair for her to kick us out! She handed me a flyer to a room in the same apartment building as this one. It was located on the lower floor, the rent was $100 dollars a month, a two bedroom, two bath room, kitchen, and dining facilities. “You have until tomorrow to move out, understand? There’s cooking utilities there and you will have your old furniture. Cleaning facilities are public and located on the lower floor.†She handed me a key to the new room and started to leave out the door. I was lucky I still had my car, which I paid for. When Clare finally awoke, which was around ten o’clock, I explained to her about my mother’s rampage. We started gathering our things into our suitcases we used for vacations and started packing. I wanted to leave that night, never seeing that cursed woman ever again. While we were working, we discussed our job plans. We both had no choice but to work Monday through Friday. Kuri and Toka decided to stay out of my way during the day, trying not to make me any angrier. I even moved my television, bed, and Clare’s futon. After the death defying counter I experienced a couple of months ago, I started to work out three times a week. Mom came home once I was finished, standing with her boyfriend. “I came to help you if you needed it.†He said. “No thanks. I moved everything on my own.†I told them, not hiding my attitude. I and Clare left that house, forever. I didn’t look back, and I would never give her a final goodbye. I opened the door to what would be our new home, our home. Our small apartment had everything, except cable. That was another thing I had to work for, and I was able to get the guy to come in the next day. By nine in the evening I was worn out from all the work. Clare decided to lie down next to me on the bed. “The only perk… is that we can be together.†She said softly into my ear to calm me down. Small tears slowly rolled down her cheek before we fell into another slumber. She was the only reason for my existence. Chapter 2: Labor It was a week after we moved into the apartment. I awoke hearing small popping sounds in the other room. “Something really does smell good,†Kuri said to me. I went in and saw that Clare was cooking some huevos, eggs. I slowly rubbed her stomach and I suddenly felt a small push. I sat at the table, next to my beautiful girl. We were so close to having this baby. “Sam’s kicked a lot today.†She said. Sam was the name if it was a boy; Taylor was the one if we happened to have a baby girl. As it was our first child, we wanted it to be a surprise. I found our school books on our couch, which was originally Clare’s old bed. School had been into school for awhile, and we had the same classes, same periods, and sadly same homework. Since I was an over achiever, I’d graduate in the winter; as would Clare. “You look tired Mike, are you sure you’re okay?†She asked me after sipping her juice. “Yeah, sure.†I was at the hospital all night, helping out doctors. My dream was to become a doctor, so I needed all the early training; plus it works as community service on my papers. “I’ve just been worried about you. We’re already into our seventh month, July.†“Your right. What if the baby was as small as you were?†It felt odd that my future wife actually witnessed my birth first hand. It seemed a little strange when I first thought of it, but I guess it’s good that she knows what she’s going to experience. I was also thinking about our wedding day. It would take place the day after we graduate from high school in the winter. We probably wouldn’t have a honeymoon because there’s really no one who could take care of the baby. Our system for the past week was that I do all the homework after work while she makes dinner for us. We usually would eat food from the restaurant, when someone accidentally forgets to take their take out box when they leave. Once in a grave while, they would have a full steak in the white container. That Saturday night, Clare didn’t want to eat that food, but to actually go out to a different place. She had the oddest idea to double date with my friend Jason, but he wasn’t going out with anyone. I decided to ask Toka, which was a mistake. “Come on Toka, it’s just one night.†I tried to tell her. “No, I’m not going out with your friend. It’s nothing personal.†“Why then?†“Because, I don’t date mortals!†“I’ll go out with him.†Kuri said to me. “Really Kuri, are you sure about this?†I asked her. “It would be my honor to do it.†Kuri said. “I’m in debt to him anyway.†“What exactly do you mean by that?†“He was your only friend going through high school; he did a favor that I didn’t ask him for. Now I fell that this might be my way to pay him backfor the friendship he gave you.†The story for Kuri was simple. Kuri was my cousin who just ran away from home, which was in Huston, Texas. Jason seemed interested by Kuri just by the fake story I told him. He accepted to have a date with her right on the spot! Chapter COMMING SOON! PLEASE COMMENT!!!
Aaaaawwww cute!! Good chapter, especially the part that she is prego now! Do the other angels ever turn into human around her? Just curious . . . oh and FIRST COMMENT!!!
We'll i had to continue the story somewhere. XD I'm can honestly say that somethings that happend last story will happen in this one.
Yay!Tummer made the sequal.I've been waiting forever.Make more chapters now!!!Please?I'm joking,take your time.I give this a 9000/10 so far.Like usual.Keep going,that's what I always say to you.
Very good; your writing has really improved since the first one. The best part was definitly the first paragraph, with all the details coming together like that. Also, did you write in first person last time? I can't remember. Well, either way, I like it. =) Keep up the good work!
Sorry i haven't updated in awhile guys. I've been so busy with other stuff. Here's chapter 2. Chapter 2: Labor It was a week after we moved into the apartment. I awoke hearing small popping sounds in the other room. “Something really does smell good,” Kuri said to me. I went in and saw that Clare was cooking some huevos, eggs. I slowly rubbed her stomach and I suddenly felt a small push. I sat at the table, next to my beautiful girl. We were so close to having this baby. “Sam’s kicked a lot today.” She said. Sam was the name if it was a boy; Taylor was the one if we happened to have a baby girl. As it was our first child, we wanted it to be a surprise. I found our school books on our couch, which was originally Clare’s old bed. School had been into school for awhile, and we had the same classes, same periods, and sadly same homework. Since I was an over achiever, I’d graduate in the winter; as would Clare. “You look tired Mike, are you sure you’re okay?” She asked me after sipping her juice. “Yeah, sure.” I was at the hospital all night, helping out doctors. My dream was to become a doctor, so I needed all the early training; plus it works as community service on my papers. “I’ve just been worried about you. We’re already into our seventh month, July.” “Your right. What if the baby was as small as you were?” It felt odd that my future wife actually witnessed my birth first hand. It seemed a little strange when I first thought of it, but I guess it’s good that she knows what she’s going to experience. I was also thinking about our wedding day. It would take place the day after we graduate from high school in the winter. We probably wouldn’t have a honeymoon because there’s really no one who could take care of the baby. Our system for the past week was that I do all the homework after work while she makes dinner for us. We usually would eat food from the restaurant, when someone accidentally forgets to take their take out box when they leave. Once in a grave while, they would have a full steak in the white container. That Saturday night, Clare didn’t want to eat that food, but to actually go out to a different place. She had the oddest idea to double date with my friend Jason, but he wasn’t going out with anyone. I decided to ask Toka, which was a mistake. “Come on Toka, it’s just one night.” I tried to tell her. “No, I’m not going out with your friend. It’s nothing personal.” “Why then?” “Because, I don’t date mortals!” “I’ll go out with him.” Kuri said to me. “Really Kuri, are you sure about this?” I asked her. “It would be my honor to do it.” Kuri said. “I’m in debt to him anyway.” “What exactly do you mean by that?” “He was your only friend going through high school; he did a favor that I didn’t ask him for. Now I fell that this might be my way to pay him back for the friendship he gave you.” The story for Kuri was simple. Kuri was my cousin who just ran away from home, which was in Huston, Texas. Jason seemed interested by Kuri just by the fake story I told him. He accepted to have a date with her right on the spot!
In a few days bro. It's along process typing int, editing, ect... And then i have to do the same stuff for my other story.
Not bad...but I did notice a mistake in the 2nd paragraph. Other than that, it was an okay chapter. Honestly, it wasn't as exciting as some of your others, though. Oh well, I know from experience that it just happens every once in a while. =)
If Kuri ran away from Texas, then like, where is the actual story taking place? I think I might have missed it . . . ;)
Yeah, i never actually did tell the location of the story. For those who want to know, it takes place in Las Cruces, New Mexio. I know it's kinda far from Huston, but she could've taken a taken a bus.
