Digital Art {::This is [YouR] HearT::}

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by SplitOverload, Jun 25, 2007.

  1. SplitOverload Chaser

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    My latest work:

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    I'm in hope for some criticism. I wanna' know how I can make this sig better :)

    Comments?
     
  2. La Sofa ('_')-l3 No worries

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    Nice. I like the blur effect. :hairy:
    xD
     
  3. Anderson (☞゚∀゚)☞ You've lost the game.

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    I think the text needs the most work in both size and placement. It's just so noticable. All I can say is just to add more effects. The effect seems to fill the whole tag.
     
  4. Spike H E R O

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    Well,the color scheme is nice.Sora's face is a bit too blurry,though.The picture's good,but the text is a bit hard to see(unless that was what you were going for).It's nice though.
     
  5. SplitOverload Chaser

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    I was going for that. Well, yeah. I wanted to change the way I put text, make it a bit different. Can you suggest me on where to put it?
     
  6. Chad Thundercucc The dharma of valvu; the dream of a clatoris

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    The white banner to the left sorta takes away from the beauty of it. The text is hard to see and is blocked a little and Sora is a bit too blurry. Overall, I like it. 7/10
     
  7. SplitOverload Chaser

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    Thanks for the compliment. I'll try to fix that in my next sig hopefully.
     
  8. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I like what you did,with the color in the right lower corner.And the scraps in the backround.Great job,love it.
     
  9. Cody Chaser

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    The stock does not go withh the background at all.
    If you took out the stock, I thinmk it would be an ok abstract peice, but the stock kills it. X_X
    The white on the left doesn't do much, and it just jumps out at me every time I look at this tag.
    The stock placement also needs some work, cause it's put smack dab in the corner like that.
    The text kinda works... although I think it would look better with a lowered opacity.
     
  10. Eclipse Hollow Bastion Committee

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    exactly,and scan lines?lol lower the opacity on them bro.if ya did want to add in a stock maybe place it in the middle.that stock has good flow if ya know how to use it.
     
  11. Gravity Chaser

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    Hmm...I like it, but I didn't actually see the text until I read Raito's post. That's a tad bit of a placement issue...but otherwise it's good.

    I also like the blur effect a lot...it's a tad bit confusing to look at at first, but it's nice. Great job. ^^
     
  12. SplitOverload Chaser

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    Thanks for the tip guys. I'll try to fix up my following sigs.
     
  13. Got-It-Memorized? Traverse Town Homebody

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    I really like it.
    The colours are nice, but I can't read the text.
     
  14. Tootsie coquí

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    Nice sig.
    The white bars on the left is the only thing I didnt like,nice colours.