Traditional Art ...This is like..the best thing I've ever drawn...(minus the fact: no face LOL)

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Emo Pengwin, May 11, 2007.

  1. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    WARNING:

    This image is very large...
    It's a full sheet of notebook paper.


    So yeah, how I came to draw this:

    Me
    + bored
    + plus a little kid begging me to draw something
    + too many KH images on my computer
    + people goggling thier eyes out because a 13 year old drew this...(and now that 13 year old has a big *** ego)
    + too much lead in a mechanical pencil
    + trying to stay awake in Math class
    = Final Form Sora with no face...XD
     
  2. kevz2kool Twilight Town Denizen

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    nice, just outline a little darker
     
  3. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Yeah..I draw lightly..O_o

    Bad habit.
     
  4. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    Nice drawing just need to work on shading. Overall still a nice pic....faceless Sora included LOL.
     
  5. Joseki Traverse Town Homebody

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    Your proportions are off, especially on the hands. Draw darkers, and keep practicing. And it looks like you drew it off of something else, which I always frown upon. =(
     
  6. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I did...

    I took a picture, and drew it..-__-;;

    But you have to admit. For a 13 year old with no almost no creative ability..O_o
     
  7. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    I saw flaws in oathkeeper and oblivion but other than that great job.
     
  8. La Sofa ('_')-l3 No worries

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    Nice! But you need to draw darker. It hard to see.
     
  9. Hissora ahurhurhur.

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    Ehh, It's OKAY
    It needs to be darker.
    Two ways you could make it better is:
    1)Different pose
    2) Make it look like it's not copied

    :3
     
  10. Alice Banned

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    You can stop being a flaunting egotistic boaster now. ( ̄▽ ̄)ノ

    No, seriously. ヾ(-_-;)

    First, I'm going to second the hand problem that Darky's Bro stated earlier. Try to make them look more natural. Next, your lines are pretty jaggy. Sketchy is kind of a messy way to draw, but it's better than a polygonal figure. I'd also like to second DB's comment on the posing. Reference is okay, but highly discouraged amongst most artists unless it's a photo ref and you're trying to go for realism. Shading, depth etc. You get the idea.

    And I'll accept your bragging when you draw something in a pose you created where half the major anatomy isn't covered up by loose clothing. ;3
     
  11. Peyton Goddess Of Love ♥

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    I need to be able to see it fully before I can comment this.
    I can barely see it xD
     
  12. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    its better than i could...10/10!!!face it and darken the out line
     
  13. Cia (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*.✧*.✧

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    a little tough to see because it's not very dark but you probably already got that from above posts *^*.

    luulz, it's awesome. Great work! ^__^
     
  14. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    For starters = NEVER draw on lined paper! D: It by default ruins the drawing, so please don't ever do it again! In this case I see the lines more than the drawing itself ~_~

    It's not a bad drawing though~ just keep practising, yeah? Darky's Bro and Alice made some good points about the anatomy, so take in those remarks n_n

    Reference is okay WHENEVER YOU NEED IT. It is never discouraged, but rather encouraged. There is no shame whatsoever in using a ref. :/
     
  15. Alice Banned

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    Really? Because I'm sure there are quite a few people who would like to disagree with that statement back in /ic/. And there isn't necessarily 'shame', but there isn't any much credit in a picture that you didn't create. When I do non-photo refs I don't post them in forums. I don't really think of it as really anything to be flaunted. It's more of an exercise than a potential piece, in my eyes at least. Anyway I'll continue this in PM~
     
  16. RoxasNoxas Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Man. That is so cool!!
    I can draw kinda good anime characters, 'cept their bodies suck. But that is so cool!!!
     
  17. HOSPITAL STAT! i knock tits

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    There's no need, because I have a reply in a couple of lines:
    Which is basically what this guy did here, hence why we shouldn't give so much of a flying rat's arse what ref he used. I doubt this image here is meant to be a 'potential piece' - it's just a drawing. Like Emo Pengwin stated, it was made out of boredom so it's a bit hard to take him seriously. But unlike you, maybe others like to post their practice drawings up here. :/

    Look at it more of developping drawing skills and getting a good grip with a pencil.
     
  18. Joseki Traverse Town Homebody

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    I'm fairly positive there is a distinct difference between referencing and blatantly copying.