The render doesn't really go.... maybe if it was vectored, or maybe slightly crystalized. And, maybe use a more..... natural, flowing font..... Look up luner(or is is lunar..?) bar on dafont.com. Good font in many occasions. You have flow, and the effects give off a sense of unity, in my opinion. Also, you may want to tone down the light, and move it to the right a smidge. This could also use some well placed solid lines. A few filters couldn't hurt, as well as a few places sharpened a little bit. Maybe, you could get a splatter brush and brush in a few places in a color of your choice, or maybe black or white(Just make it flow!). You could also add the render and lower opacity to make it brighter, as well as add a few photofilters or gradient maps. Good job on it, in any case.
OH! I see, (it took me some time to findout what it was -_-) it's spiderdude, with a punch of colors poping out under him.(sorry) But I'm not really sure what to say. It's good, I like the colors. xD
