They Say Tragedy is an Oportunity in Disguse but I Can't Believe That

I don't care if you hate it

CHAPTER 1

"GO, GET OUTTA HERE!!!"

"WAKKA!!"

"GO!!!" Wakka turned, a look of desperation plastered on his face. Kairi shook her head.

"NO!!!" she struggled against Tidus.

"Come on we have to go!" Tidus tried to reason with her.

"Sora, Riku, and Wakka will catch up with us. Sora told me to keep you safe no matter what and thats what I aim to do." With that, he picked her up and threw her over his shoulder. He ran the length of the dock, dodging the strange creatures. He leapt off and looked around wildly. Suddenly, out of nowhere, Roxas jumped out. He slashed madly, clearing a path for Tidus.

"THE CAVE, GO TO THE CAVE!!" He screamed above the, now roaring, mass of creatures. He jumped and threw oathkeeper at nothing. Or at first it was nothing but a slender hand reached out of the mass and grabbed it. In a few seconds the mass thinned and Tidus could make out Namine.

"COME ON!!! FOLLOW ME!!!" Namines shouted before dashing off. Tidus chased after her.

Once they had gotten to the cave, Namine locked the entrance. She walked forward quickly. Pointing the keyblade at the door, she closed her eyes. A beam of light shot out and the door creaked open. Beyond it was a golden light.

"This should take you to Disney castle," said Namine.

Tidus put Kairi down and gave her a small push to the door.

"But I don't want to leave you guys, I want to fight!!" she looked desperate, tears rolling down her face.

Tidus smiled a sad smile," I'm sorry Kairi." He pushed her into the door just as the seal broke on the cave entrance. The last thing Kairi saw was Namine and Tidus being overrun by the creatures. Then it all went black. ​

 

nice story i cant wait for chapter 2!

 

OMG!! :glomp: your the only one who replied thank you!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm starting it and I just gotta finish typing it

 

...No one else has replied yet? Surprising. This kicks *** so far. I can't wait for you to post the next parts! Rep'd. 5 starred.

 

thanks you guys and sorry for the long wait but here is chapter 2!!! yeah!

CHAPTER 2

Kairi slowly opened her eyes, a large pain in her head. She looked at the ceiling but realized something. This ceiling was smooth and ornamently decorated, not the rough, dark wood on Destiny Island. SHe sat up but a hand pushed her down. Her eyes wandered over and she saw an egshausted(sp?) yet happy Sora.

"I'm glad you're finally awake, are you in pain?"

"Not too much, just a little headache," she replied, confused.

How had they gotten here? More importantly where was here? Suddenly she remembered the creatures and sat up.

"Where is everyone else?"

Sora's face seemed to stone.

He replied softly," Well Riku, Namine, Roxas, and Tidus made but....Kairi, Wakka and Selphie are dead."

He put a hand on her shoulder. She looked just like she felt, like somone had slapped her across the face.

"Dead?"she said in a whisper.

Tears swam in her eyes and she buried her face in Sora's shoulder. He hugged her.

"They died bravely and without regret, they died like heroes and I think thats how they wanted to go."

She nodded numbly.

"Lets go down to the hall, I"m sure the others will be glad to see you," Sora suggested carefully.

Kairi nodded again and got up. With Sora, she walked down the stairs and into the Great Hall. As they had walked down the stairs she had realized that they really were in Disney Castle. The doors swung open and all went quiet. The little group at the front, surrounding the throne turned. The group consisted of: Yuffie( who looked a lot less perky than usual),Tifa(with her gloves still on)standing by Cloud(who looked like someone had ripped his heart out and torn it to bits) Riku(I won't even tell you how badly he was hurt), Tidus(who was just as bad as Riku). Namine(her dress torn in places and cuts all over her) being hugged by Roxas(who was just as bad as Tidus and Riku). The group parted to let Mickey through. He didn't say anything but gave a deep bow. He then led Sora and Kairi up to where the others were.

"The meeting shall come to order," he said.​

 

It's actually pretty good

 

zomg!!! really? *squeals* yea I'll get right to work on the next chapter

 

EEEP I LOVE IT!!! :bounce: CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTeR 3!!!!!

grammar & punctuation errors annoyed me, but it was FRIKKIN MADE OF AWESOME!!!!! Keep it up! im definitely hooked!

~The Yeti

P.S. exhausted :noworries:

 

Your story.

You have a very good way with your theme. Very creative way of explaning it as it goes along as well.

 

yeah I am sorry about the errors but every time I corected one tiny little one the computer would freak and make me type it over again, ALL of it so I'll try to be better about that and now.......

CHAPTER 3

They sll were seated at a round table in a small, yet comfortable room off of the library(sp?). Riku gripped the arms of his chair.

"So you're telling us that those creatures were called soul eaters and that they take the souls of the ones they catch, making them puppets and the only way to get them back is to stab the soul eater in the chest with a sword thingy?" asked Sora.

"Its called a Haitou, I've seen them before." Riku said.

Mickey nodded.

"Yes, you'll find one for each of you on your beds, Riku will teach you how to use them."

They nodded and walked back to train.​

sorry its so short my dad is breathing down my neck so I gotta go for a little while bye

 

short but a great story. i really like it.