.:The TwiLit Between:. Between Darkness and Light…lies Another World…Twilit by The Memories of the Lost Ones, Beings Shunned by Both Light and Darkness. …That Realm is called The TwiLit Between… **NOTE** Before some of you start complaining, please note that this takes place in an entirely alternate universe than Kingdom Hearts. I have NEVER played through a KH game before in my life, so trying to recreate something following the storyline would end in utter failure. This fan fiction simply chronicles the life of the next generation Organization in a completely different time/space setting. Just think of it as the Org’s alternate world life or something. I’ll cut the personalities as close as I can, as well as the motives. Please enjoy the fan fiction. I wrote it as simple as I could, just for you younger members! -Character Guide- **This character guide will introduce the main characters of the story. The list will be updated as more and more characters are introduced, so keep checking back.** Spoiler **Xixian** (Shi-shy-ann) Age: 13 Sex: Female Element: Flame Weapon: Extendable Finger Nails Personality: Quiet, Contemplative, Business-oriented, Hard Worker Relative: Axel Number: XI AKA: The Undying Blaze Xixian is the offspring of Axel in this alter-verse fiction. Unlike her father, she isn’t as cheery or laid back, but rather cold and sometimes calculating. Her cute appearance is usually used to elicit information from very prominent resources. Her element is flame and she has full control over such so much that she can produce a lasting fire constantly and consistently without tiring. She also wields long extendable and retractable fingernails as weapons. Her strength lies in intelligence, will, and endurance. Her weaknesses are only shown in her inability to have fun, so she takes things too seriously. **Jax** (Jayks) Age: 17 Sex: Male Element: Star Weapon: 12-tailed Whip Personality: Commanding, Boastful, Strong Leader, Wise Relative: Saix Number: II AKA: The Guiding Light Jax is the offspring of Saix in this alter verse fiction. Speaking strongly, he likes to be looked up to and in control of situations. When trouble is afoot he remains calm and instructs others on how to go about things. He is not above a good idle conversation, but actually believes the group should get to know one another on a personal level. His element is star and his 12-tailed whip represents each of the Astrologickal Signs of the Zodiac. His strength lies in the ability to inspire others and lead them into doing positive things. His weakness is prevalent in his vanity as sometimes he allows things to go straight to his head. -Stats- Spoiler **This is a place where I will keep track of the stats of the main characters as they go throughout the story. If you get lost on how your favourite character is doing, you can always come back here to check up on them.** Health denotes the physical status and wounds. Stamina denotes the fatigue level and how much a character can perform strenuous actions. Mood denotes a characters current emotion. Dyn denotes the currency a character holds. Location denotes where a character is located at this point in time. -More to be added as needed.- Spoiler -Xixian- Health: 100 (max) Stamina: 100 (max) Mood: Awed Dyn: 50 Location: Huelw Square - Fountain -Jax- Health: 100 (max) Stamina: 100 (max) Mood: Lethargic/Tired Dyn: 150 Location: Huelw Square - Fountain Prologue - The Blank Pages Between the light realm and the realm of darkness lies a thin sheath that contains a world in itself. This world, created by the myriad of memories left by those who are lost forever, is unbeknownst to most inhabitants save for the ones who live there. The beings who call this place home, the Lost Ones, are neither accepted by light or by darkness. Instead they are forced to forever roam the pathways of twilight. This world in which Lost Ones dwell is called The TwiLit Between. In an alternate universe, the last of the Organization XIII’s members fell to the hands of the key blade masters. Thus ends the era of Organization XIII and their plans to become whole once more by collecting hearts of others. Once their lives were snuffed they became nothing. From the realm of darkness and the realm of light, two beings were spat into the space between. These beings were neither human nor alien, neither a brother to void or to fullness. Each displeased with how the space sat dusty and empty of life, they sat out to populate the area by collecting the faint data strings of incomplete souls. Thus the Lost Ones were born from near nothingness. Each being only had a fragment of soul and heart, but a body made up of flesh and blood. Many of the Lost Ones mourned their existence, stating they would rather be nothing than forever lost. The two founders were donned with names, Lucridel and Asphifth. Lucridel, the being elicited from the dark world, held pity towards the Lost Ones who cried out. Taking on the form of a young boy, he decided to dwell with the Lost Ones in order to study them so that he could better ascertain their existence and find a solution to the problem. Asphifth, the being emerging from the light realm, felt that such an effort was pointless. This being believed that if the Lost Ones were to gain complete souls and hearts, that they would rebel. Asphifth was a winner of minds…the being influenced many Lost Ones to side with revering the founders as gods. Soon enough the entire realm was divided. Amid this constant struggle between the two factions, the Organization’s data was reconfigured enough to bring about their physical forms. In total, twelve Organization members were recovered: Xemnas, Xigbar, Saix, Lexaeus, Xaldin, Axel, Vexen, Zexion, Marluxia, Demyx, Luxord, and Larxene. The twelve collectively decided upon building ideal lives for themselves in this new realm whilst searching for plans to resurrect their souls into more complete beings. As time passed, the factions became more divided, eventually separating themselves into ten majour branches…half generally siding with Lucridel and half siding with Asphifth. Lost Ones still struggled to find a way to merge themselves into either the Light or Dark realms. In a golden year for the TwiLit Between, Lucridel discovered that the entire surroundings were indeed composed of fragmented memories of each Lost One, the pieces slowly converging in order to someday turn the place into a completed universe. Catching wind of this discovery, Asphifth and the groups of Lost Ones under the being’s control sought out individual pages of memories in order to rewire the entire pathway between Light and Dark. The war was just beginning… Bostun Aire, the largest of the divisions in which sided with Lucridel, housed the Organization and their now teenaged offspring. It was renowned for its successful businesses and beautiful scenery. Geniuses budded from the area and began creating artificial nature, learning how to manipulate the elements to their desires. In one of Bostun Aire’s well-populated areas, Huelw Square, a fate-twisting event was about to take place. For there beside a fountain for wishing…was a page on which nothing was written. ------- CURRENT CHOICE! Yes, the readers do ge to participate in the evolving storyline here. Whever I say CHOICE!, I will provide a few options. The FIRST person to comment to choose an option will be the one chosen. With this you will be able to sway entre scenes, interact in battles, and change character moods among other things. So be sure to keep an eye out for the CHOICE! in the storyline. Current CHOICE! (pending) Prevous CHOICE! A.) Chapter one starts out focusing on Xixian. B.) Chapter one starts out focusing on Jax. -CHOSEN! Choice A will be taken, chosen by Destined.- Xixian's plot beginning will be posted soon. Keep an eye peeled. ------- - Vexen ~ OTHER TWILIT BETWEEN GOODS ~ WallPapers: Wallpaper 1: Duo (Jax and Holoxe) Wallpaper 2: Icy Divine (Loxothel) Character Icons: Xixian
^.^ It's just a prologue but it's really interesting! I had to read it a few times to get the feel of it. Make sure when your writing to put not just effort into, but feeling also. And take your time. x3 Awesome job, and I can't wait for the rest! x3
wo. Now that is a prologue if i've ever seen one. i know you've shown us a bit of your writing style through poetry, but this is fantastic. I like how you are delving into a universe that you admit to not being fully aware about but you aren't letting that stop you. One suggestion i might make....as a writer, I like to let the story evolve through my thoughts and my creative style, and I don't usually like to let people dictate how a story should unfold. I'm not saying that you allowing the reader a level of interaction isn't a good way to open yourself to your audience but be careful. If it gets out of hand or you want to go left but the readers want you to go right, don't let the story be sacrificed.
Thanks. Yeah with the prologue I had to set the setting I wanted because I have no effing clue of anything KH-related, yet wanted a KH-esque feel without having to play the games to know what it was all about. I originally intended this to be a straightforward fiction, but I also love letting the audience participate a bit, making it more of roleplay-fiction than a straight-up fanfiction. It won't be solely dictated by the audience because I have set paths already planned for each choice. The choices I give merely determine which I will post up. So it really is a set story, but I like letting those who love to roleplay a chanc to feel as if they get to know the characters by direct interaction instead of just saying 'she did this.' There will still be elements of surprise as well. Still waiting to see if someone wants the Jax or Xixian branch to start us off. I've gotten some feedback via pms and chats, but none on the thread, and the thread is what counts, as far as I'm concerned. Haha. I may open the choices up on DA as well, where people are also following the story. It was a KHV-exclusive thing, but if I get more feedback from DA, I'll open it there as well. Thanks for the input. I'll take it to heart. I hope to have chapter one up as soon as someone helps me determine which route I should take.
Chapter One will be up Christmas. I've just had some gift arts and game arts (for competition) I've had to do, plus managing Game Company, so I've been running around like a chicken with its head chopped off... But myes, Chapter One will be up Christmas, plus a surprise that is TwiLit Between related following shortly after that. <3
I saw your comment on the CP of mine. About TwiLit Between becoming a game. You're going to mostly likely love the 'surprise' I have coming up then. I'm already making the RPG Maker VX-based walking sprites for something to show you guys. It won't neccessarily be a 'game', but I think you will enjoy it. The first installment will be coming to YouTube soon enough. Keep your eyes peeled.
