The Twilight Angels

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  1. Riku Terra Banned

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    This is my first rp so im really sorry if it sucks Name: Abilitys: Weapon: Looks: Personality:
     
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    What is it about?
     
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    im so sorry i dont really know how to do this can somebody help me!!!!
     
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    ok the twilight angels have just recently appeared they are neither good nor evil they have come to find out who they are and will do almost anything to find out
     
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    OOC: Good start, you also want to put the age in there like I did. That and don't forget anything to do with history. Why not just throw a warrior type/occupation thing in there to see what happens? I'm just throwing out ideas here. :D
     
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    Name:Xelliniss Abilitys:Can teloport at will,summon a guardian that has five huge swords leviatating around it,can use dark firaga, and moves incredibly fast Weapon:dual blades hovering by him ones black and the other white Looks:has white spiky hair and an x scar on his face Characteristics:not very talkitive and not motivated but will fight when he has to

    thanks i'll try that

    age:21 occ:leader of the twilight angels
     
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    OOC: Also, you might want to line up the set up sheet so people don't get confused at what you're saying. Possibly like I did with mine. You know, where it goes

    Name:
    Age:
    Weapon:
    Appearance:
    Abilities:
    History:
    Yadda yadda: (Don't put this)

    Like that. Like I said, just shooting off ideas! :D again.
     
  9. Riku Terra Banned

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    i dont know how to

    I hope more people learn about this thread
     
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    OOC: Like so:

    Name: Then hit enter button.
    Age: Hit enter button.
    Weapon: Hit enter button.

    It's that simple. Unless you were referring to something else.
     
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    Ohhhh ok i'll try that
     
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    OOC: All I got by this point is make sue to have correct punctuation. Meaning put periods when needed. You don't need perfect grammar, just good punctuation.
     
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    Name:Xelliniss
    Abilitys:Can teloport at will,summon a guardian that has five huge swords leviatating around it,can use dark firaga, and moves incredibly fast

    Weapon:dual blades hovering by him ones black and the other white
    Looks:has white spiky hair and an x scar on his face

    Characteristics:not very talkitive and not motivated but will fight when he has to

    i hope this is better
     
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    OOC: Good. By the way, there were some mistakes you made, I fixed them for you. :D I'm that kinda' guy.
     
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    Thank a lot! I really needed that.
     
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    OOC: I do what I can.

    Oh yeah, and the OOC: thing is supposed to mean Out Of Context so that I don't sound like I'm spamming.
     
  17. Riku Terra Banned

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    Me and you are the only people.I hope I don't suck that much

    Oh I wish i wasn't so stupid
     
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    OOC: Well, I had the same problem when I started, and nobody was going to help me out, so I thought I'd be helpful and generous. Plus, you don't exactly NEED 1,000 people for an RP, two's fine, more people might start coming in to try it out. :D

    And you're not stupid to me. I'm worse, lol. :)
     
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    Thanks for all the help you gave me.

    I sure hope at least one more person would come.
     
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    OOC: No prob. Besides, I think this looks cool, and I very VERY rarely turn down new RPs.

    I did see ONE person, but he left 3 seconds later.
     
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