The Tale of My Loving Was In The Navy Forgotten Memory - A Ballad It began on a Lifeless Wednesday Midnight: I was the most Open Student around, He was the most Loving was in the Navy. He was my Forgotten Memory, My Loving Forgotten Memory, My was in the Navy. We used to Love so well together, Back then. We wanted to Ran together, around the world, We wanted it all. But one Midnight, one Lifeless Midnight, We decided to Ran too much. Together we Hugged a Someone like me. It was Expressionless, so Expressionless. From that moment our relationship changed. He grew so Clueless. And then it happened: Oh no! Oh no! He Loved a Me. Alas, a Me! My Forgotten Memory Loved a Me. It was Emotionless, so Emotionless. The next day I thought my Eyes had broken, I thought my Hands had burst into flames, (But I was actually overreacting a little.) But still, he is in my thoughts. I think about how it all changed that Midnight, That Lifeless Wednesday Midnight. My Hands... ouch! When I think of that Loving was in the Navy, That Loving was in the Navy and me.
I wish you would explain the premise behind this ballad. Were the grammatical mistakes such as "We decided to Ran too much.", etc. intentional? I think if I knew a little more about why you wrote this or why you used incorrect grammar if it was intentional would help me understand this poem more. It has the potential to be very nice if I knew some background info.
Actually I just used a site and entered some info. Though the story itself is about my uncle a little bit. But he's gone now.
