*******WARNING******** ------------------------------------------------------------------ The following is completely fan-fiction and a mere story to amuse Fans of the game. The writer holds no rights to Any games of Squaresoft-enix or of Disney. Due to the fact this article is not purchased and no profits go to it's author, no legal laws are broken. Please, Enjoy the following story. ------------------------------------------------------------------ A black booted foot calmly walks the steps of the castle that never was, and a Black hooded figure looks over a balcony to see a fellow Near-human Nobody, Named Xigbar, fall and speak with his destroyer. The, Xigbar is gone, belonging to nothingness. Were The figure to have a heart, he might have cared to see an equal destroyed, but all he can say is nothing. The Figure walks and continues until he has reached the top of the tower, He must hurry before Xenmas or The Sora boy can reach the top. The hood looks up to see the Large Heart shaped moon of Kingdom Hearts, glowing Omnisciently. On the floor of the open tower lies a dark ebony crystal, no larger than Unknown's hand. He walks forward to the crytal and picks it up, examining it for a short time. "It's about time...." he coldly says. "This is the redemption you promised?" He calmly exclaims to a masked man, his face hidden in wrapped cloth. "Indeed, Just merely hold it to where your heart would be, and look into the core of Kingdom Hearts." The masked man, DiZ cooly, deeply implies. "Why send me? This entire "Dimension", you call it, is still doomed. All I'm doing is righting all the wrongs in the mirror one." The hooded figure says darkly, turning the dark crystal over in his gloved hand. "Because, as us, the mirror Dimension is doomed as well, with the same fate, Should you go there, at least others won't suffer as we will. And besides, I found it quite interesting that there was no traces of a mirror version of you in this parallel side." The masked man says with little manner of interest. "Now go, your journey to the past and another world awaits, I would think you'd be gone already, with what that crystal you have has the power to do alongside Kingdom hearts." The masked man almost happily words, gesturing to the Large Moon almost close enough to touch at this altitude. "And you say my time is limited to do so?" The hooded man says, nodding. The masked Man merely nods back. "Fine, but becoming whole again won't make me forget "Here" will it, had to much "Fun" With these guys." The hooded man cooly says, almost pretending to laugh. "In that alternate dimension, you'll see them all again, and with the help of Sora, you can make them all whole again as well. Merely when they are disappearing into darkness, bottle an essence of them with the bottles I gave you." The masked man instructs. "What happens if I die the second time around before Sora can get to Here, in the then there? Then I'll just be a Nobody again, and not caring to help some adolescent save the worlds." The hooded man almost mocks. "Then simply not care and suffer as we might should Sora not Defeat Xenmas in this world." DiZ coldly remarks. The hooded man merely nods his head and with a flourish of the ebony crystal, it to his chest and his hidden eyes staring directly into the core of Kingdom Hearts. And just as that, the Hooded man is gone, leaving DiZ alone on the rooftop of the tower. "Now it is time to join the others,..." He says, eyes closed beneath his mask. "And justify that promise that This portal to Kingdom Hearts will be no more." He says, touching an odd weapon in his cloak. "Succeed, young Sebax." DiZ says grinning as he himself disappears to join the battle below. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A Short Intervel before the story I hope, as an author, you enjoyed the introduction. If you didn't fully get it, The hooded figure is a unknown Organization Member Sebax. No one is really sure of his actual number, and he was actually the most recent addition to the Organization as of the begining of Kingdom Hearts II. He is not nesseciarly Coanical, as he never exsisted in the game. I merely wished to share the story of a hero alongside Sora in a different demension.Now that I've told you about the lead character, let me illumenate how it fits into the second game without flaws. Should there be flaws, please, don't name them, this is simply a story and you have to post comments elsewhere in another topic I will start to discuss this story. This topic is Solely for the purpose of teeling the story. DiZ, of course, was the perfect fit for the role of the person who helps Sebax go back in time and to a different demension. Who Else knows the fate of worlds then himself? Plus nobody really knows where he was during the elapsed time at The castle the never was. It is easy to tell when the story begins, right after the destruction of Xigbar, near the start of Sora's journey to defeat Xenmas. The Suffering fate the world faced was that if Xenmas could not be destroyed, which even DiZ did not know even if the ORganization leader could be gone forever, and he was able to unlock Kingdom Hearts and eventually destroy all worlds in even a worse way than heartless infesting the keyhole to the worlds seperately.DiZ sent a Remaining Organization member back because, really, the trip with the Ebony crytal earlier mentioned, could only be made with somebody without a heart, and since Sebax was the last remaining lesser Nobody smart enough to do it, he was chosen by DiZ. And as for picking the number 14, it's I admit, Illogical on all acounts, there is no way to tell for sure if Sebax is number 14, as there is Coanical and Non-Coainical Organization lesser members, never even mentioned in games, Fan-Fiction, or in books. And as for the power of the Crytal alongside Kingdom Hearts, you can't really doubt that could happen because DiZ himself is involved, the Man who knows the inner working of Kingdom Hearts so well, he would know what works and doesn't work with it. So, now I invite you, to please, post no responses to this story, and Enjoy the illustious storytelling of a true fan of Kingdom Hearts. I will start off the storys by only going to Chapter 3, which is definately enough for one night, and assuredly a good start. As by which time, I'd be at Traverse town already. Also, I am going in worlds order according the order they are in in the Game guide book. Chapter One Destiny Islands Sebax, as he disappeared, he quickly reappeared in a sort of Dome, seperated from the rest of a Stream-like river, surrounding everything, only the sounds of the past and future being heard through the almost glassy material of the dome. Blue gassy Liquids bend and pass over the dome. Sebax watches, amazed and in awe. Suddenly, when the dome breaks a Barrier seperating the time lines, The dome bursts, leaving Sebax to fall into the time line stream. When he awakens, Sebax is in the Old street clothes he used to wear before his eminent death and transformation into a Nobody and Heartless. Sebax looks aroundat himself, looking at his tanned arms and black boots, not so different from the ones he wore as a Nobody. Suddenly, through an urge to prove that it's true, Sebax slowly raises his left hand, and gently puts it to his chest. On his fingertips he soon hears a thump, thump. Triumphantly he jumps from the ground to the air, Exclaiming, "I'M BACK!!" After this momentary glee, Sebax looks around at his surroundings, new and strange. He is obviously in some sort of Cave, with Markings all over the surface of rocks and walls, a large wooden door, with no lock or key or any signs of entrance or exit on it. He spots a small opening from the cave and creeps down, his Nearly Adult being to large to stand and walk out. He asks himself questions he forgot but knew already, it all just came back to him. He was currently at the age of seventeen, Tan skinned, Deep Brown eyed, Generally handsome by some standards. But what he couldn't remember was his original name. Only the name Sebax could come to him. In his left jean pocket he held the precious Ebony crytal that restored his heart and whole-self. And in a brown Mailmans bag, he didn't know how he got it, probably a little trick from DiZ, held the speacial Bottles that would help restore the Other Members of the Organization. They still have to be beaten first, one by one. Looks like I'll have to make sure Sora keeps on the same track he was in the original dimension, even though I intefer. Finally, he comes to the opening of the cave, scraping away the stray leaves and vines that covers the entrance. A strong beam of Light blares at Sebax's eyes. Covering his eyes, and blinking adjust his eyes, he stands up, now in an open area. He moves his eyes about in wonder of a tropical Paradise. Never before had he seen skys so blue, or grass so green, if he had before, he couldn't remember. A thundering waterfall and small pool lay to his left, echoing his ears with beautiful sound. He looks further to the sands and even further to the Ocean, as far as he can see another isle, less then forty miles off the edge of shore. He cooly walks forward, glazing all about. Surrounded so much by the Beauty of the area, he doesn't see a blue and white ball head straight for him and hit him hard in the head. As he falls to the ground, he yells, causing the children of the area to become aware he's there. A Tall tan-skinned boy, probably the oldest around, is first to come to his aid. "You Arligh', Sorry 'bou' that, Just training for blitzball, and I guess I went in over my head..." The young Boy says apologently. Then a scrawny girl in a yellow dress and brown pigtails races to help as well. "Wakka you knuckle head, you should be more careful!" She exclaims, barking at the tanned Skin boy. The boy called Wakka merely puts one hand behind his head, scratching, and says nervously, and yet wears a smile on his face, "Hey, I said I was sorry." Then a young boy, almost looking familiar through Sebax's starting-to-open eyes, runs up, looking worried. "Hey, are you OK?" He asks, spikey hair wobbling as he quickly falls on his knees to help the new stranger. Sora opens, by his own hands, Left eye open farther. quickly letting it droop back to normal. Sebax slowly starts to get up, sort of sitting on the ground, rubbing his head where the ball hit his head. The ball still under his underarm. Still rubbing his head, Sebax gets up, towering a bit over everyone besides the Wakka boy. "Here's your ball, Kid." Sebax grumbles, offering the ball back to its owner. Wakka quickly snatches it back, happy, yet gruntled. "Hey we're not kids, bratha', you' the same age as us." Wakka says, "Thanks anyway though." He quickly runs off with the Pigtails girl to the beach, the Girl first grabbing a pair of nanchucks she laid on the ground. Only the spikey Haired boy remains. "Yeah sorry that hit you, you OK?" The boy still worriedly asks. "Yeah..." Sebax groans, holding his head, not really paying attention to the boy.The boy merely grins and cradles his head from the back with his two gloved hands, leaning back. "Guess I don't know my own strength..." He grins. still rubbing and scrathing his head, Sebax stands to face the boy. Suddenly it comes to him, This is the Sora boy! "You, is your name Sora?" Sebax quickly asks, forgetting about his headache. With this, the young boy looks puzzled at Sebax, "Yeah, how do you know who I am?" Sebax merely shakes his head, "Nevermind." Suddenly the pain is too much to support, Sebax falls to his knees, drowzy again from not paying attention to the pain for even a second. Quickly Sora Grabs Sebax from under the underarm and begins to carry Sebax up a flight of stairs. Then Sebax Blanks out totally. He awakens to see a Yound Red-haired girl examing his head, Sora talking with another young boy, taller than Sora, with Silvery hair that goes behind his head. "Hey you guys, he's back!" The young girl exclaims, motioning to the boys. The two quickly rush over. "Where am I?" Sebax drowzylingly asks, lying down on a white tarp. "Destiny Islands, silly. Where Else would you be?" The young red-head says, at this point of view, hardly a red-head at all, more of a burgandy color to her hair. "Other worlds, that's where." The silvery haired boy cuts in, cooly walking over to Sebax closer. "Mind if we have that tarp back? We're headed to other worlds on a raft and need the sails." Sora pipes in from the back, trying to push the larger boy aside. In the struggle to talk with Sebax, both of the boys pushing their weight against each other, The taller boy wins, in a way, and they winde up on the ground in a clump. "Sure, no problem..." Sebax says, now fully awake, getting up and handing the cloth to the girl next to him. Rolling the clothe around in her hands the girl starts to talk. "I'm Kairi, and those two," pointing one thumb over to the sprawling boys. "Are Riku and Sora. We're trying to build a raft to get to other wordls, want to help?" Kairi says, a large smile on her face. Gotta keep these guys on track "Sure. Why not, what's left?" Sebax says, pretending to be glad to help, when slightly, he is. The boy by the name Riku knocks Sora square on the head with his shoulder and gets up. "Just the food provisions." He says calmly, then his face changes. "But thanks to a certain slow-poke, we'll have to get them tomorrow." He says, glaring a Sora, he merely just grins from his seat on the floor. "I guess you can stay in here for the night, nothing can make it up here." Sora implies, getting up, rubbing his own head where Riku clobered him. Sebax agrees with a nod and Kairi and him back the tarp to use as warmth for the night. As Riku leaves, Sora and Kairi leave the tree hut together. Sora comes back and looks inside. "Well, Good night!" Sora grins, waves and is back off. Sebax merely nestles on the hard wood floor, wrapping around in the tarp, now being able to feel cold because of his new heart. Looking up at the stars through a small hole in the roof, Sebax sighs through puffing up his cheeks and letting the air slowly escape. Finally it came![/B] Chapter two Destiny Island Part two Sebax woke up the next morning, head finally stoping to ache. He looked all around at the wooden tree cabin and streched, for once in the first time, needing to. In strecthing he realized that somewhere, One the the three others must have taken the tarp to make that sail for the raft they talked about. Fully awake, he climbed down the ladder, that young Sora must have had to have had help with carrying Sebax's dead weight up through, and down to the docks where he found the Young yellow dressed girl with pigtails. As much as his mysterious ego implied from being a former Nobody, he sprang up behind her and stated matter-of-factly, "Nice Weapon you have there." Hoping to have a shocked expression and hear the girl scream, he got a totally different approach to his approach. "YOU BIG MEANIE! WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO? GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK!?" The girl snapped, grabbing the nanchucks at her side, whopping Sebax square in the nose with it. "Hey that hurt!" Sebax said with a look of anger on his face, but secretly appreaciated the assualt because it brought back to his memorie he was much more vunerable human, than if he was a still a nobody. With the nanchucku now fully in her hand and ready for another attack she teased, "Wanna go, stranger?" This would have made Sebax laugh. Not for the fact he no longer couldn't, because now he could. It was more of the fact that the girl had proved herself with the quick assault to his nose. Checking his upper lip to see that he wasn't bleeding from the hit, he said back, sure of himself, and still nervous. "Sure, why not." As they both began at opposite ends of the white sand of the beach, Wakka walked by, Blitzball cradle behind his head. When he saw the fight about to unfold. "HEY! YOU GUYS, TIDUS! RIKU! KAIRI! COME SEE DE BIG FIGHT HERE BETWEEN SELPHIE AND THE NEW GUY!" Wakka yelled across the Island, running up to the sepreate smaller island nearby to get The boy Tidus. Sora, who nobody realized was nearby, was swimming in the warm ocean waters, collecting fish, Sora just stood in the water to watch while still hunting for the elusive fish. The girl, who Sebax guessed was the Selphie Wakka mentioned, made a teasing gesture with her nanchucku's, "You ready?" And thats's when it began. If it began. Sebax's ego made him forget that as a Nobody he had weapons and powers far beyond Selphie's. But as a regular person, no weapons to speak of. All He could mention was and uh-oh as Selphie thundered at attack, Nanchuku almost slapping into his forehead, like a viper striking. "Sebax, Use the Ebony Crystal in your pocket." Said a voice, low and cold in his head. Who was that? thought Sebax, then it came to him! "Master DiZ?" Sebax yelled confused into the wind, now everybody was watching, Wakka, and a blonde short boy he took to be Tidus. Even Riku was leaning against the small plank that served as a bridge between the lower and upper part of the small island. Another strike, this time directed at his arm, but Sebax was too fast. Before he was killed by a heartless nearly a year ago, he was a fast dodger, and theif for hire. He grabbed the nanchuku in mid-air and thrust it forward, sending Selphie spining out of control. This short pause in the battle enabled Sebax to reach for that crytal in his pocket, but when he reached in, it wasn't there. A look of shock came over Sebax as an even angrier Selphie came roaring at him. That last thing Sebax remembered doing was his mouth quivering in nervousness and gulping. Then, Black-out. When he came to, he was lying on his back, looking up at Selphie who had one finger dragging under her eye, to make her eyes bag, and had her toungue out, at him. Wakka and Tidus were slapping hands. And then Sebax actually saw that they were exchanging munny on a lost bet. Apparently Wakka lost because Tidus was leaping for joy, a long shaved stick twirling in a triumphant turn. Riku raced to help Sebax out, long before Sora came to shore, two fish on a sharpened stick, the last one caught in his mouth, and too large for him to get out himself. Riku was quick to get Sebax up and The fish, which wiggled violently as it parted from Sora's mouth. "Oh yeah, like we're gonna be able to eat that now." Riku said, serious, but Sebax's old instincts told him that Riku was really trying to fight back a eequallyviolent laughing attack. Sebax himself even laughed for the first time in a year, maybe even before that. After all, Sora did look pretty stupid coming up with a fish stuck in his mouth. As Sebax sat, relaxed on the beach, once again having to hold his head from another new ache, watching as Riku hit Sora over the head with the mouth-free fish. Then both of them came over to sit by Sebax. Then Sora collapsed back, on purpose just lying in the sand, morning still ripe. "Hey Riku, think when we're famous well have lot's of Fan-girls?" Sora said, grinning. Sebax thought almost for a second that Sora knew his fate already, but then it came to him, This is what adolescent boys are supposed to be thinking about. Riku grinned and gave Sora a punch in the vunerable stomach, sending Sora upstraight. "Yeah sure, then you'll get Kairi to share a Paupu fruit with you." Riku teased, almost naturally blocking a counter-attack from Sora. "Shut-up." Sora said, since his counter for the punching didn't work. "I take it both of you have feelings for the red-head?" Sebax said,grinning, more than happy to be in on the joke. Both of them yelled in unison, "No way!" Sebax grinned. "That's not what I've heard. Besides, what'd happen if something happened to her and you could do nothing about it." Sebax said, now a bit more serious. "I dunno." Sora said innocently, shrugging his long shoulders. Then Riku grabbed a wooden sword from his side, suddenly leaping up a making a huge swing with the weapon. Standing to face the ocean, back to Sora and Sebax, "That's not gonna happen." Riku said, more serious than ever. Then he turned his head and said, "Speaking of Kairi, she's expecting those fish Sora, we'd better go see her and see what else we need." Beginging to just walk across the beach Riku grinned and asked Sora, "How about another race, Sora?" A look of pure competition in his eyes. Sora simply looked on saying, "Nah, rather'd walk." Riku looked just a bit disapointed, but didn't show it, simply just straightening up and walking cooly. When the trio got to a door they each passed through and came to a more vegetation filled side of the island. In a corner near the door Kairi sat, hands on her hips. "And where have you guys been?" Kairi asked, a stern but funny look at on her face. "Getting the fish, By the way," Riku put his hand covering one side of his mouth, pointing with the other hand to the stake with the fish stuck to it. "Don't eat the fish closest to the point." Riku whispered to Kairi. But he said it in a loud whisper so everyone else would hear. And everybody, including Sora laughed hard. That's when Sebax took Sora down to a lower part of the island, not too far away, but not close enough for the other two to hear. "Sora, there's something I have to tell you. It's urgent...." But that's when Riku interupted, coming down below to the water under the gangplanks of a long crashed sea boat. "So, what's the name of the raft going to be?" Riku came, almost gliding with that same competitive grin on his face. "Plus we need to split up the rest of the Preparations for the trip." Riku said, then he glanced over to Sebax. "Your coming I'm guessing?" Sebax just glared back. "I guess I'll have to, can't let you kids just go sailing all over and get eaten by some hungry shark." Sebax said, jokingly. "Ok, then we'll have a race. Winner has to get the coconuts, second gets the Fresh water with a bottle and the seagulls eggs, and loser has to go scraping around to find non-poisonous mushrooms." When Riku mentioned third, he looked at Sora, who gave a dirty look back. "As a bonus the winner gets to name the raft. Deal?" Riku looked from Sebax to Sora. Sora said Deal first and then Sebax agreed. All three young boys started above, facing the gangplanks with missing planks. Kairi started the countdown. When she said "GO" all three were off, Riku in the lead, but only for a short while, Sebax quickly passed him. It was, unfortunateately a loose Gangplank that fell beneath him that caught him off guard and sent him plunging into the cold water below. Riku and Sora ahead of him, Sebax quickly got up, and jumped up far to reach the small cliff a short, but hard to treck through, because of the water, distance away. Both boys neglected a stairs that lead to a tower. Sebax quickly braced the ladder and reached the top. Grabbing a wooden stick that was stuck to a string that lead further down, he thrust out and landed on another tower, farther away, and a little bit ahead of Riku and Sora. When Sora tripped over the side the raft that had been there earlier, Sebax had a clear lead ove rhim, but RIku was still farther ahead, sliding down quickly after Riku, sebax jumped over each mossy rock easily, Sora, however, was having some difficulty. When Riku touched a tree with a star on top, Sebax quickly sprinted for it, being second to touch it. Then came Sora. Only one way left with such a close finish, the trees that were closely scattered across the earth. Jumping from palm to palm was easy for Riku, who was still in the lead, and easy for Sebax, who had strong, long legs. As for Sora, he stepped on a weak palm leaf and slide down the tree, unhamred but far behind. A close tie nearing the gangplanks with Riku, Sebax made a final sprint for the finish. But Riku made a faster sprint and won by a foot lead. Sebax next, and Sora last. When Sora finally arrived Riku said, "Ok, the names "Highwind"." With this, Sora gave another dirty look at Riku. Kairi Handed Sebax the empty bottle to fill with fresh water, not Ocean water, and told him to collect one Seagull egg from a palm tree. Getting both was a snap for a quick climber like Sebax, and he saw fresh water coming from a small hole when he landed in the water. Those already delivered to Kairi, He sat down on the raft with Riku and Kairi, While Sora went to the Cave Sebax landed in to find the last mushroom. When Sora came back, it was nearly dusk, and Kairi said we should all rest up, tomorrow was the day we went off to sea. Later in the Tree Hut, Sebax looked down to see Sora and Kairi sitting on the docks together, Riku already headed for the main land. The sun was setting and Kairi shoved off in a raft, and after her, with a short wave from Sora up to the Tree hut, Sora. Sebax used another tarp he found earlier, and a seagull nest patch pillow. Easily falling to sleep from the days earlier running.[/B] [/B]Chapter three Desting Islands part three[/B] Suddenly, BOOM!!, a huge meteor struck the island, waking up Sebax and causing the entire island to go into a flurry of storms. Immediatley awake and ready to save the raft that would have to keep Him and the trio on track to save the worlds. He immediatley raced down the ladder between tree and earth and was never ready for the shock of his life, or second one anyway. Thousands upon thousands of heartless shadows, appearing out of no where! Then the scream of a young girl pierced the night air. Kairi! Sebax immeditaley thought. Racing to the surprisingly dry waterfall and dried up pool near the cave, Sebax saw kairi kicking and screaming at a bunch of heartless attacking her. Surely, Sebax thought, if they get to her, Sora's journey is doomed! "Like I said Sebax, use the crytal." DiZ's voice calmly said out of no where. "although I'm sure you will find it in you right pocket, after Sora decided that you might crush it while sleeping on your left side." "What good would that do? And how do you know what happened?" Sebax yelled to the Unseen helper. "It will give you back all of your previous powers and weapons. Do you know nothing of Light and darkness? But the crytal's power will only work for you, should you, and you alone, hold it. In the hands of others, it only serves them." DiZ said, instructing, but still keeping calm and cold voiced, ignoring the second question. Then Sebax reached for his right pocket, surpringly, it was back! He immediatley grabbed it, swung it with his left hand and suddenly his old weapon appeared. A Long Black needly-tipped blade with a large round dot for a easy rotation handle. The weapon was made to look like a sound note, Sound being his power as a nobody. By now, the heartless were upon Kairi in a full dogpile. Time was of the essence. Sebax quickly and with such agility, he took the heartless by surprise. taking out four with an ariel sweep attack. Then plunging onto a fifth on the ground he began swinging at the dogpilling Shadows, several of them, releasing hearts back as he destroyed them all. He rushed to the ground to check the young girl's vital signs. Good news, she was still alive, but bad news, she was unconcious. Suddenly a flurry of Yellow jacket, blue saggy jeans, and silvery hair rushed by, followed by a sea of rushing blackness. While all of them were after the blur, one went off course to go after Sebax and Kairi. Unaware, but catching it at the last moment, All sebax had to do was rotate the handle in his hand so the the blade faced 140 degrees up to the back. When the heartless that had leaped at him landed, it landed directly in the blade, a fatal blow, and it released yet another heart to be judged. Carrying Kairi in his arms, Sebax swiftly leapt to the Small land hut near the ocean, the perfect spot to hide for the moment until he could locate Sora. Inside, he couldn't have guessed what awaited him, a black hole! Small but unfightable, Sebax and Kairi were swept away through it, into the unknown. The last sounds of the island land and water being swept away, the last sounds of a planet being destroyed. But then another sound made its self halfway, then broke, the sound ofa young boy yelling in shock. Then, nothingness. You picked it, now I dish it Chapter 4 Halloween town? Darkness filled Sebax's Eyes, not only when he blanked out, but also when he awoke. He suddenly leapt up, chill's for some reason trembling down his spine. Sebax looked to his left, there lay Kairi, finally starting to stir and show signs of being alive. Then Sebax looked all around, and Gulped. They were a cold, dark Alley way, with sevral small graves litered across the walkway. Strangely, Sebax and Kairi still looked normal, not changed by the world at all. There was a good and bad thing to that. Good, Sebax didn't want to think what he would be here and Bad, they would probably be eaten alive by some sort of creature if they didn't blend in. Then it came to him, the crystal. Taking a risk and breaking the crystal in two, he gave himself a piece and put the other piece in Kairi's skirt pocket. Suddenly, Sebax was forced into the air, his body floating like a feather, then followed Kairi's, doing the same thing. In a burst on Light, Both landed on their feet, Kairi broken out of Comatose by the bright light. Kairi had become a sort of Witch, Burgandy Hair turned Green, Pink and white outfit turned Black and orange. A long scraggley Pointed Witch hat on her tangled Ivory Locks. But when Sebax looked at himself, he was not so fortunate. Sebax had become a beast, A long brown snout, hunched back, Fangs as large as the blade he weilded, Body covered in Short and scraggley brown hair. His now Red eyes looked down at his clothes, His shirt totally gone, the hair covered it anyway, and his pants legs were torn up to the upper calves, because of the extra muscle he enheirted from his new form. Dark claws sharp as ice crytals, on long furry fingers and toes. Sebax checked behind him to acertain the worst. a tail.....A long.....bushy.....tail...... Kairi Giggled, besides being totally shocked, at the face Sebax showed when he wagged his tail to and fro. Coming back to reality, Kairi at last became scared. "Where are we?" She shuddered. "Is this...?" She began to ask. Sebax's voice finished what Kairi had to say, although not even recognizing his own voice, a dark and scrapy voice replacing it. "Yup, a different world." Then the gate ahead creaed open, slowly, alarming the two new arrivals. "Hide!" Sebax said, grabbing Kairi by the scruff of the neck with clawed hands, and hidning them both behind a tall pillar. A long, Lanky White Figure emerged, clanking as he walked, obviously he made of only bones. He was dressed all in Black and walked over to a small dog-house shaped gravestone marked, "Zero". The lanky figure did not look at the grave with saddness, but rather, with happiness, Sebax could see. "Come here, Boy." The lanky figure said, beckoning to the grave with one long bony finger. Then to Sebax's surprise, What looked like a dog with a blanket over it leapt out of the ground. Wagging a Transparent tail. Sebax noticed out of the corner of his eye that Kairi was begining to feel the skin on the back of the neck where Sebax's claws had found her. She drew back her hands to her face and screamed, causing the Alarm of the Skeleton-man, the ghost-dog, and Sebax. Apparently, Sebax's newfound claws were sharp too. Cutting deep enough into Kairi's neck that it caused her to bleed slightly. Hearing the scream the Skeleton and Dog moved closer to the pillar. Then The Skeleton's head popped over to have his deep, eyeless sockets look into Sebax's, then Kairi's. Kairi was on the verge of tears, and Sebax, was on the verge of wetting what was left of his jeans. Then the lipless bones that were the Skeleton's mouth moved and out came the words, "Welcome, my friends, to Halloween town." The skeleton said with a smile on his face. "I am Jack, Jack Skellington, King of the Pumpkin patch." The Skeleton said with a frightening flourish of his bony arms. "And this is my faithful companion Zero!" Jack, exclaimed, motioning to the Ghost Dog. "I was about tot visit Doctor-" He started wit much glee, which turned to a face of concern. Noticing Kairi's neck. "Oh dear, here, use this." Jack said, handing a green potion out of thin air. Kairi took it, skeptical. Sebax gave her a gaze that meant, "Don't worry, it will help." And with a single glug of the potion, Kairi's neck revived itself, growing back new skin, and stopping the bleeding. "Good!" jack said, his almost welcoming face back to grinning. "Like I said, I was about to visit the good Doctor, it seems he's invented some sort of flying craft." Jack happily said, motioning past the creaking gates. Once inside the "Doctor's" Lab, Sebax sudden;y felt the urge to lose his lunch on the dank floor. Inside were all sort's of Gadgets and organs and dead insects. And dead something else's too, that neither Sebax nor Kairi wished to think about. "Doctor?" Jack stated, looking to a large white pumpkin sitting in a black chair. Then the black chair whirled around to show a large domed, pale man, with beady dark goggles that covered his small eyes. "Yes? Oh I suppose you here about the ship, eh?" The doctor said with little interest, in a gravely old voice. "Come this way..." The doctor said, wheeling about to a small door. When The motely gang reached the end, a Lage ship, shaped like a Giant Pumpkin, awaited them. A ship with a large rotational laser cannon made to look like the brown stem on top, a large orange-tinted glass cockpit for one-giant Cyclop eye, and protecting shieled objects shaped to look like a scary smile. In the back were two large engines. Everybody's eyes, and sockets, widedened at the sight of the large ship. "Able to leave this world, and back again. This ship will help us prepare for Halloween by allowing the townsfolk small rides around halloween town." The doctor said, motioning to the Lage Ship. "But Halloween itsn't for mon-" Kairi began, placing her black gloved hands on her hips. Sebax quickly hushed her up by covering her mouth up, careful of the claws this time. "Yes, my firend here justs wants to ask if we can borrow it before the Festive event of Halloween comes." Sebax said with a sharp toothy grin. Jack brightened. "Well, of course, go right ahead. The doctor has just finished up it's second-to-last test, so it must be operational." Jack said, pointing from the doctor to the ship. "Second-to-last?" Kairi nervously asked, managing Sebax's furry hand to get off her mouth. "Oh don't worry, the last testers are due to be back to life in mere hours, and they were the lucky ones...." The doctor said darkly, yet gleefully. As nervous as it made him, they needed a way to meet back up with Sora. "We'll take it..." Sebax said, nodding his furry borwn head. Inside the New ship, the effects of the crystal wore off, and Sebax now had the normal amount of hair, and Kairi's was back to it'is original coloring. The doctor had given Sebax a breif tutorial on how to pilot the craft so with a slip of a switch and a push of the engine button, and one last look at the world behind them, Sebax and Kairi were off. Chapter five Twilight Town and Guard Amour The Pumpkin designed ship worked surprisnigly well, just not surprisingly fast. It was fast enough to get them to Traverse town in about six hours, but probably no time before. Having nothing else to do while waiting, Sebax decided to kill time and ask questions. "So, Did that last world Scare you at all?" Sebax asked, gazing over to Kairi and letting the auto-pilot take over. "Is that really a question??" Kairi asked with shock in her eyes, wheeling about in her spiny built black co-pilot seat. "I was turned into a Witch with Green Hair!!" Kairi said, taking her Red locks between two fingers. "Yeah, but at least you blended in. And for some, a witch couldn't be the worst...." Sebax said, trailing off. Kairi looked grimaced, remembering The beast Were-wolf Sebax turned into. "Sorry..." Kairi said, imediantenly dropping her tough-girl act. Sebax just merely looked out to space. "Don't worry abou the beast you saw on the outside.....You'd be shocked to see the past of my beasts from the inside..." Sebax said, anger whelling in him for the sharp Irony in his recent transformation. Kairi merely gazed in shock and confusion. Soon, both falling asleep in their chairs, which surpringly confortable despite their odd, mishapen appearence, A blast rocketed the ship. A short alarmed buzzed, sounding Sebax awake. "What the heck was that?!" Kairi exclaimed, looking outside the cockpit window to see what might have hit them. Another blast rocketed the ship, this time, small ships zommed over the top of the Cockpit screen. "Heartless bombers!!" Sebax growled, Remembering what the dreaded crafts looked like from Organization records. "We'll have to out race them!" Sebax yelled, grabbing back at the controls, tapping and switching as fast as he could. Unfortunatley, the round shape of the craft kept it from gaining forward momentum. They could take alot of damage though, which was at least one advantage of the bulky ship. "We have to look for some kind of weapon." Sebax said, now gaining his calm. "Well, what does this switch do?" Kairi confusedly asked, pointing at and pressing a large red button. Suddenly the bulk of the craft stopped, losing all momentum. Then in a split second, BOOM!! The ship raced off at lightening speed! Zooming past stars and worlds so fast, they only seemed like streams and blurs. Out of a convolsution curiosty, Sebax yelled "Traverse town!" at the control panel. Imediantly, the ship stopped with a great lurk! Thankful the Doctor had installed a safety device to the chairs, Kairi and Sebax looked in awe at a Large City sort of town, all on one world. Realizing that the ship also worked on a voice-command, Sebax suddenly remembered his mission. "Computer, Find target: Sora." Sebax yelled at the command panel once more. It was a gamble, but as he had learned from a duel with Luxord, everything's a gamble. Below, unseen by Kairi or Sebax, Sora had just been leapt upon. Although, not by Heartless, but rather by a Duck and a Dog. Sora looked around, dizzly. The two who leapt on him were the first to shake off the impact. Both of them uttering, "The key!" But at that moment, the Third District area of Twilight town was shut off of every exit, Huge pillars erupting out of the ground with small, Armoured Heartless, perched upon them. All three warriors, now on their feet, looked around in confusion and uncertainty. "Goofy! How are we supposed to Take out all these Heartless now!?" The duck, Dressed in a blue vest, and sagging blue hat, exclaimed, in a strange sort of voice. The Dog, tall and wearing a mismatch of Green, yellow, and orange merely scratched his head, opposite hand of which he held a large shield. "I dunno, Donald, Maybe we should ask him." The Dog said, pointing to Sora with his "Kingdom Key". Suddenly, The Heatless were upon them, hudling around the heroes until, they were completley surrounded. At this, The duck dropped his long staff to the ground, and jumped into the tall Dog's arms. "Yeah, big help he's gonna be." Crying and sobbing, now even harder to understand. That's when The Goofy Dog slumped on the ground, landing on his backside, Donald, the duck, still in his arms. Crying also himself. "And I'm the Captain of the King's royal guard. I'm sure sorry Donald, for that time I put-" Goofy said through flowing tears, sobbing so much, the tears were coming out in a comical stream. But he was cut short, by a voice over Mega-phone exclaiming, "Need help, Fellas?" Said the masculine and familiar voice. Looking up, Sora saw a Giant Pumkin ship descending and landing, right on a group of heartless, causing them all to disperse captive hearts. Leaping out of the craft were Sebax and Kairi, Sebax gripping his "Rotary Ballad" Sword, and Kairi weilding a borrowed "Double Return", a spikey and sharp bommerang weapon made to look like a double-note. As he landed, Sebax through a "Fourth Bomb." Capable of destroying four times the amount of area he could take out with any blade. Only a few Heartless were left, which quickly retreated, teleporting back into darkness. Evrybody enjoyed a good laugh, until a large boom shook the earth once more. A large Armour torso came hurtling out of the sky, followed by large Gloves, feet, and a smaller round head, covered in a vice. Landing right in front of quintuplite group, every gazed up in awe as the armour quickly shook and assembled itself. Each hero grabbing their weapon more tightly once more. The battle was feirce, but fastly taken care of. Donald striking the metalic Beast's feet with Fire magic. Goofy leapt up to the Gloved hands, sharp and spinning. With clangs and thumps of Goofy's sheilds, the Golves disappeared, along with both feet. Now it was time for Sebax and Sora to fight in Unison against the small round viced head. Using a attack formation, "Sound off!" Sebax hit first, thrusting his Sword into the vice. Then Sora quickly parryed at its head while it tried to shake Sebax off. Shaking and ready to be defeated, Kairi, was sling-shot into the air by Sebax and Sora, Catapaulting her, where she threw the "Double return", directly at the creatures toro. Sapped of it's energy, the Guard Armour broke apart, releasing a very large heart and a small ring, which landed in Sora's hand. After introductions all around, a tearful reunion from Kairi and Sora, the appearence of Two people, who introduced themselves as Leon and Yuffie, and a comical grin coming from Sora, The journey began. Each party quickly getting to their own ship after goodbyes. "So where to next?" Sebax asked through a communication system himself and an Older man named Cid installed quickly to Sebax's and Sora's "Gummi Ships", "I think I can make out a small planet out to the right, may as well start looking there For Riku..." Sora started off from the other end. "And the King!" Goofy and Donald quickly chirped in. Sebax looked over to Kairi, who still had to ride in "The Pumpkin Patch", the new name for the Halloween town ship, and she quickly a surely nodded. Sebax took the comm link and confidentley replied, "Lead the way, Kid." Chapter 6 Wonderland Finally reaching the planet closesest to Traverse Town on Radar, Both ships went down to surface. Landing, both parties Got out, to see a plain open field with nothing all that interesting to look at. Suddenly, a heartless appeared and caused the Alarm of Donald. Quickly chasing after the heartless, everyone else followed after Donald. Until the Heartless crept into a small hole in a cave. Donald just darted stright in, short enough to run. Everyone else crouched down and tried to catch up with the maddened duck. With a Yell, Donald fell somewhere out of sight, and before anybody else could stop, they themselves fell down a large hole in the middle of the Rabbit's hole. (Sorry, tons of homework) Just...Falling... Only, just...falling... The fall seemed to last forever to each party member, Sora and Donald upright waiting for slow impact, Goofy, Lying on his back, sleeping. Sebax was trying to do a few Air-spins to practice for battle with the "Rotary Ballad".
Bama, I glanced over you PM and thought i'd delve into this story, it seems good....but by me saying glanced I mean it's too blocky. Truth be told I read the first twenty or so lines. Aestetically speaking, I would edit this so that there is after each line there is a new paragraph to make it easier to read, and I would move your 'intervels' to the end of the post because it breaks up the 4th wall. I don't mean that in a bad way, just it might attract more readers.
No trouble No problem, I thought I'd have trouble with that. I'll try and edit it into more paragraphs, and maybe even enlarge the words so they're easier to read. Thanks alot for posting Destined. I'll fix everything but the intervals. I find they keep people in suspense to read the rest of the story, by keeping them busy catching up on small details they might have missed. Plus, it's easy to tell between the Intervals and the story, so you can just jump them if you want, becuase The intervals are block-written, and the story has several paragraphs. But I'll admit, making paragraphs in the story itself really made a difference. I, myself, could not even fully appreciate the story becuase I always lost my line and couldn't find it easily enough. Now, it's much easier, thank you Destined. A side note, just so nobody has to always jump pages to find all of the story, I'm keeping it all one post, it'll probably be long, but not confusing from this point. I'll just edit and add whenever I write so it's easier for readers. Still, feel free to post after this point.
