The story of Sebax, Number 14

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The following is completley fan-fiction and a mere story to amuse Fans of the game.
The writer holds no rights to Any games of Squaresoft-enix or of Disney. Due to the fact this article is not purchased and no profits go to it's author, no legal laws are broken. Please, Enjoy the following story.
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A black booted foot calmly walks the steps of the castle that never was, and a Black hooded figure looks over a balcony to see a fellow Near-human Nobody, Named Xigbar, fall and speak with his destroyer. The, Xigbar is gone, belonging to nothingness. Were The figure to have a heart, he might have cared to see an equal destroyed, but all he can say is nothing. The Figure walks and continues until he has reached the top of the tower, He must hurry before Xenmas or The Sora boy can reach the top. The hood looks up to see the Large Heart shaped moon of Kingdom Hearts, glowing Omnescently. On the floor of the open tower lies a dark ebony crystal, no larger than Unknown's hand. He walks forward to the crytal and picks it up, examing it for a short time. "It's about time...." he coldly says. "This is the redemption you promised?" He calmly exclaims to a masked man, his face hidden in wrapped cloth. "Indeed, Just merely hold it to where your heart would be, and look into the core of Kingdom Hearts." The masked man, DiZ cooly, deeply implies. "Why send me? This enitire "Demension", you call it, is still doomed. All I'm doing is righting all the wrongs in the mirror one." The hooded figure says darkly, turning the dark crytal over in his gloved hand. "Because, as us, the mirror Demension is doomed as well, with the same fate, Should you go there, at least others won't suffer as we will. And besides, I found it quite interesting that there was no traces of a mirror version of you in this parrel side." The masked man says with little manner of interest. "Now go, your journey to the past and another world awaits, I would think you'd be gone already, with what that crystal you have has the power to do alongside Kingdom hearts." The masked man almost happily words, gesturing to the Large Moon almost close enough to touch at this altitude. "And you say my time is limited to do so?" The hooded man says, nodding. The masked Man merely nods back. "Fine, but becoming whole again won't make me forget "Here" will it, had to much "Fun" With these guys." The hooded man cooly says, almost pretending to laugh. "In that alternate demension, you'll see them all again, and with the help of Sora, you can make them all whole again as well. Merely when they are disappearing into darkness, bottle an essence of them with the bottles I gave you." The masked man intstructs. "What happens if I die the second time around before Sora can get to Here, in the then there? Then I'll just be a Nobody again, and not caring to help some adolescent save the worlds." The hooded man almost mocks. "Then simply not care and suffer as we might should Sora not Defeat Xenmas in this world." DiZ coldly remarks. The hooded man merely nods his head and with a flurish of the ebony crystal, it to his chest and his hidden eyes staring directly into the core of Kingdom Hearts. And just as that, the Hooded man is gone, leaving DiZ alone on the rooftop of the tower. "Now it is time to join the others,..." He says, eyes closed beneath his mask. "And justify that promise that This portal to Kingdom Hearts will be no more." He says, touching an odd weapon in his cloak. "Suceed, young Sebax." DiZ says grinning as he himsefl disappears to join the battle below.

 

OOC: wrong section buddy.

 

A short intervel before the story

I hope, as an author, you enjoyed the introduction. If you didn't fully get it, The hooded figure is a unknown Organization Member Sebax. No one is really sure of his actual number, and he was actually the most recent addition to the Organization as of the begining of Kingdom Hearts II. He is not nesseciarly Coanical, as he never exsisted in the game. I merely wished to share the story of a hero alongside Sora in a different demension.Now that I've told you about the lead character, let me illumenate how it fits into the second game without flaws. Should there be flaws, please, don't name them, this is simply a story and you have to post comments elsewhere in another topic I will start to discuss this story. This topic is Solely for the purpose of teeling the story. DiZ, of course, was the perfect fit for the role of the person who helps Sebax go back in time and to a different demension. Who Else knows the fate of worlds then himself? Plus nobody really knows where he was during the elapsed time at The castle the never was. It is easy to tell when the story begins, right after the destruction of Xigbar, near the start of Sora's journey to defeat Xenmas. The Suffering fate the world faced was that if Xenmas could not be destroyed, which even DiZ did not know even if the ORganization leader could be gone forever, and he was able to unlock Kingdom Hearts and eventually destroy all worlds in even a worse way than heartless infesting the keyhole to the worlds seperately.DiZ sent a Remaining Organization member back because, really, the trip with the Ebony crytal earlier mentioned, could only be made with somebody without a heart, and since Sebax was the last remaining lesser Nobody smart enough to do it, he was chosen by DiZ. And as for picking the number 14, it's I admit, Illogical on all acounts, there is no way to tell for sure if Sebax is number 14, as there is Coanical and Non-Coainical Organization lesser members, never even mentioned in games, Fan-Fiction, or in books. And as for the power of the Crytal alongside Kingdom Hearts, you can't really doubt that could happen because DiZ himself is involved, the Man who knows the inner working of Kingdom Hearts so well, he would know what works and doesn't work with it. So, now I invite you, to please, post no responses to this story, and Enjoy the illustious storytelling of a true fan of Kingdom Hearts.

 

wrong section but good story

 

Sorry

Ok, Then if this is the wrong section, where can It be moved to? I've looked all over the forums and can't really decide where to put it.

 

put it in the creativity Corner

 

And thanks

And thanks for brining this to my attention. I just started my account today and was unsure but eager to post my Fan-Fiction. I perused the forum sub-topics to find where I should have put it, but wasn't to sure, so I just directly put it in Role-play. Also, Nobody's perfect, I made a few spelling errors in the start and when I restart my story elsewhere, I put the edited version there.
You don't have to move this, just delete it if you wish, I have the begining already saved elsewhere on my computer and I'll just restart anew. Just tell me where to put it first please.
Also, thanks for appreaciating my Story.

Thanks, I Knew as soon as I posted a new reply Somebodyelse would say something, it's happened everytime so far anyway...:P

 

its cool, I did that when I first came here

 

Still

If anyone's still reading this part, I've posted my Fan-fiction in Creativity corner and (I don't know I if should have putthis one in Intelligent Discussion, so tell me if I'm wrong) I put The topic to post anything you like about my story in the Intelligent desgin forum.

 

dang Great story. I thought it was an rpg- I wanted to join.