The Seamstress of Hearts. (A Riku fanfic!<3)

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  1. Imiko Destiny Islands Resident

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    Of course it is! In fact, it's coming out today! =3


    ANNOUNCEMENT:

    Hello everyone! I noticed a shitload of spelling mistakes I should have noticed earlier, but sadly didn't. From now on all my posts will be attempted and checked for bad spelling Free-ness! As well as the fact that the new Chapters are going to come out in a different form, I'm going to code them differently.

    Thanks for keeping up, if you have even after my long interval of sudden disappearances! =D

    ENJOY THE NEXT CHAPTER!
     
  2. Juicy Chaser

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    I was a bit uncertain about your writing style at first- I've never read a fanfic where I myself am the main character before. But you've done a great job with it, and after reading the first few paragraphs it became less awkward in my head. Your grammar is excellent but like you said watch the spelling ;3

    Mind the spam in here guys ~ make those posts worthwhile!
     
  3. Imiko Destiny Islands Resident

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    ((P.s. This means they are going to be fancier. =3 ))
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    ~~~~~Season two;
    A new world.~~~~~~

    Chapter Nine:

    Where I was born?!?


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    This couldn't possibly be happening. It couldn't be real, no way in hell could something like this exist. If losing your home and Riku wasn't bad enough, now you had this on your hands as well! I mean jeez, this guy must be crazy! You were sitting in a nicely lit, stone room that looked like it was out of the middle ages. What the hell was with that? And to top it all off, the guy was extremely old and strange looking. He had wrinkles upon wrinkles, and apparently he knew your real mother. Feeling your left eye twitch with slight annoyance, you took in a huffing breath of denial as you opened your mouth to speak.

    " Okay, let's get this straight." You started out slowly, wiggling in your hard wooden chair lightly, " So I was born here, my mother was some sort of woman with the power too.. Sew the light back onto people hearts? So you called her the 'Seamstress'." You asked, looking around the bland square room at five men wearing dark blue cloaks with the hooks over their head, and two rather pretty looking maids standing wide eyed in the corner.

    "That is correct." Huffed out the old mans low, throaty voice. You frowned with annoyance and felt like glaring at him, or even possibly hitting him. How dare he ask such a thing of you, even when you've just lost everything that was ever precious! Including Riku....You felt the lump that had been threatening to grow in your throat finally rear it's ugly head as you swallowed rather harshly and continued on with your inquiries.

    " Great, so when these weird black things- erm, 'Heartless' showed up I was stolen away and you thought I was dead. Since my mother was the Seamstress you automatically think I got her powers?" You demanded the last part of the sentence rather viciously. Something in the old mans eyes shone for a moment before he laughed, which almost sounded like a cough to you, and replied.

    " You do have the ability. It was passed down to you by your mother." He said softly. Taking in a deep breath, you decided this was slowly making sense, and it would be good not to lose your temper now of all times.

    "Grand." You replied, lifting up your right hand and rubbing your temples lightly. " So now I'm back for some MAGICKAL reason, and I've got to do WHAT with the.. 'Kingdom Hearts'?" You asked once more. By now you had gone through this story three or four times, but each time you felt as if it was all a lie, some cruel joke they had been playing on you the whole time. You silently awaited for everyone to jump out of some corner and yell 'Just kidding! Now let's go home!' But so far, in the whole entire three hours you've been here, nothing.

    " You must help protect the Kingdom hearts from falling into Darkness. If that were to happen, all would be lost." He said rather plainly. You repressed the temptation to valiantly roll your eyes, you were angry, disorientated, starving, exhausted, and everything else that could be wrong with a person was most likely wrong with you.

    " And how am I supposed to do that?" You asked finally, slightly excepting the story you had just been told.

    " You shall find that out on your own, child. Until then, you shall stay here and train for the day you will have to confront your Other Half." He finished standing up rather wobbly and turning around, stalking out the door before you could demand to know what your 'Other half' was. You pouted lightly and crossed your arms, glowering over at everyone. Just then one of the pretty maids walked up to you as everyone else walked out of the room without a word.

    " Miss, we have cloths for you. A bath is running and ready, but by the time you're done supper should be on the table. You will be shown to your room. Shall we?" She asked with a nervous smile, and you nodded rather weekly from across the thick wooden table that stood flatly in front of you. Closing your eyes you felt a sudden wave of relief- a Warm bath, new clothes, a place to sleep, and some food. You couldn't ask for anything better. You stood up meekly and stepped around the table slowly, your skirt was ripped, as well as your shirt. Your bow was almost in shreds, and the Gods only know where your shoes were. They probably got swallowed up when you were sucked into the darkness.

    The memory stung fresh in your mind. Watching Riku disappear was one of the worst things that you had ever seen in your entire life. Your thoughts ran wild as you walked through the thick open door and down a small hallway. Light came in through windows, there were tons of them, they seemed to litter this place. Various plants ran down the stone hallway as well, bringing some life to the bland Grey walls. They reminded you of your Cave home, and your Rock door. This put the thought of him getting sucked away back into your mind once more. What was with that look on his face? Had he wanted to get sucked into the darkness? And what ever happened to Sora? Kairi? Well, There was one thing for sure. There was definitely other worlds out there, yup. Unless you were just having one long ass crazy dream. You turned a left corner and continued on your merry little way.

    " The Onsen is this way, Miss." The maid with light blond hair explained and snapped you out of your trance.

    " Onsen?" You said, suddenly everything else was erased from your mind in that moment. You were going to take a bath in an Onsen?!? That was so cool! You had never been in one of those before! You eyes widened with excitement as you glance around and searched your surroundings. There was a large wooden door right in front of you, and the Maids grabbed both the handles, bowed, and then pulled them open with a hefty creak. You took in a sharp gasp at the scene in front of you.

    ( Editors note:

    Anime-fy it in your mind. ;D )

    Your excitement gave you an extra burst of energy as the Maids left you on your own. Now you had time to think! The water was cool in the shallow end, and got warmer the deeper it got. You quickly pulled off your old, ripped clothing and threw it aside haphazardly. Looking down at your body, you frowned a little. You had bruises, scrapes and cuts. Your body ached, and your muscles silently begged for the relief of the Onsen. Taking careful steps into the water, you lifted your arms up for balance, you didn't want to slip. When your toes first slipped into the water, you gave a small shiver as the cold seemed to crawl up your body as you went along. It felt amazing, never-the-less. It wasn't until you got knee deep that the water began to get pleasently warm.

    " Oi, now this is nice..." You whispered as you leaned down and stepped fully into the steaming deep end. First time you'd had a decent bath in a long time. You felt your tight, over stressed muscles unwind and relax gently. You rolled your eyes up and slipped in with a groan. Suddenly, one of the cuts on you arms began to sting lightly, then steam. And to your utter amazement, it was...healing? You glanced down at the crystal clear water and saw that your other wounds were healing as well.

    "What the- what am I sitting in dammit?" You mumbled beneath your breath, breaking the calming silence with your voice. You decided to shrug it off and looked around, sitting on a rock was what looked like a bottle of shampoo and conditioner, as well as some soap. You smiled over at this, forgetting the strange occurrences and swam briskly over to it, grabbing the shampoo and twisting off the lid, bringing it up to your nose for a bit of a test smell.

    "Whoa! Smells like STRAWBERRIES!" You half yelled excitedly and poured a rather large amount into your hand. You put the bottle down and with your free hand you cupped some water and let it fly onto your head. With a happily hum you began to work the good smelling stuff into your hair.

    ______________________________________________((FF to when you're in your new room.))

    Your room was gorgeous! It was HUGE! It was a mix between Mid evil and Old Japanese style. You had a Futon instead of a bed, a rather comfortable looking one in the middle of a wooden floor. The walls were made of wood as well, everything in conjunction with the Onsen was made out of wood. You thought it was strange, how half the building was made of stone and the other half wood. But it's not like you were complaining, your room had a huge window, looking out to a beautiful garden with all sorts of plants and flowers. Your room has a Wall Climber plant that seemed to reach every corner of the walls, and a Vanity table right next to a rather spacious looking walk in closet. There was a Sakura Tree right outside your window, it was in bloom and some of the pink flowers leaned into your room pleasently.

    You had to admit, this big square room was the best room you've had in your entire life. A childish grin replaced your look of Awe as you ran towards your closet and pushed the door open all the way. No way, there was so much clothes! It was a good half the size of the room, and had wall-to-wall outfits. Pulling off the white Robe you had worn out of the Onsen you laughed openly as you began picking through various articles.

    It took you twenty full minutes to look through the whole thing, and at the very back of the Closet, you found the perfect thing. A silk black, Chinese style dress with white floral patterns and underwear and white stalkings to go with. On either side it was split, it looked gorgeous. Now it was time to try it on. You silently prayed that it would fit. And, as you pulled it over your head and moved your arms through the sleeveless holes, you realized it was perfect. Next you pulled on the Underwear and Stalkings. Smiling at how well it fit, you ran out of the closet and stared at yourself in the mirror.

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    You couldn't believe your eyes. This was the first time you wore something like this. Right when you were about to fiddle with your hair, a knock at the door interrupted you from your thoughts. You glanced over at the door and sighed, you'd deal with your hair later.

    "Come in!" You yelled at the door, looking to see who it was as the door slid open smoothly.

    "Pardon me, miss. But I'm here to fetch you for supper." Wow, was he ever good looking- WAIT! That voice! That face! No, it couldn't be... Oh, but it was!

    "D-doctor?!?" You yelled in shock as his eyes shone with cruel intent.




    CLIFF HANGER!!! MWUHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!! xD ​