Not too proud of it. Thanks to Saxima for suggestions and so on, I half-assed it. Don't be too hard on it. Unable to use brushes... No excuses. Posting...
The circles a little confusing. I'm not a fan of that font, but that may be me. I also think that if the text were positioned differently it might not go so much against the flow of Miku's hair. The stock's a little big. It's cute, though, and I like the colours.
Couldn't do much with the stock, honestly. Well, I could have, but I was being picky already Would have had to do much more work to make it smaller. Meh. Thanks for the CnC. I will stick to critiquing for now...
I like it. lol, Even though I have no idea who the character is, I like the color and font, and I think the whole thing is pretty cool. And Thanx, now I've got Owl City's song stuck in my head. XP
I am quite nonplussed to see you post here. I must forewarn you, I am very meticulous with art so please try not to cry critiques. The things I like most about this piece are: 1.The picture has a general good composition. The face of Hatsune Miku is well suited for the overall visual representation of the piece. As a necessity, balance is also key. Therefore, I think the hair gives the piece a sense of necessary flow, as well as that required element of keeping the viewer's eyes moving. In total, this process fulfills the balance of the overall composition of the piece. 2. I enjoy the colors of this piece, be it intentional or not, they do work well together. Things that could use improvement: 1. The stock seems too faded. I am uncertain if that was you or if that's how it was. But either way, it is very distracting not having a strong and crisp focal point. The lock of hair by her chin especially irritates me. 2. I do not understand what's going on in the left hand side. The piece looks chopped up, if you desire to "fill that area in" with something visually appealing, either make the circles larger to a degree or make them more subtle. 3. If anything, I would say the title is not the right font I would use. It would most likely be better presented visually if the words where more in the left hand bottom corner. Hmm... I must confess, it was an interesting experience to critique your work. I hope you make more and share it with us. Good job though.
Surprisingly gentle for someone so meticulous. However, I must point out a contradiction between your being nonplussed and wanting me to share more. Which are you feeling, and why do you feel that way, if it was a process?
