The Rose

Raffello came out of the bush. "Do I look dead to you?" He chuckled. "I kid." Rhixan nodded. "He saved me from the guards. They came to sell me as a slave and burn Raffello."

 

"good to hear it, those two other guards probably hit my trap already, i think we will be fine now," he said as he hugged Rhixan

 

Rhixan smiled. Raffello looked at Kaito. "Question. You dont even rank close to Rhixan. How come you were meant to marry her?"

 

"truth be told, i wasnt the one who requested it, i mean i thought about it, but i knew asking would turn it away, i guess fate seemed to work in my favor"

 

Raffello sighed. It seemed that Rhixan wasnt going to be his bride but Kaito's. Rhixan looked at Raffello. "Its okay." The lights around her had stopped flashing and pulsing. It seemed as if they had done their job of getting her back with Kaito.

 

OOC: i got nothin... should we call it part one completed and make a second story from this or should we continue this....

 

OOC: I dont know... Part one done?

 

OOC: sure, do you have any ideas we could do for part 2?

 

OOC: no...

EDIT: YES!

How about we delete our last posts and then just carry on with Llednar alive? Rhixan goes into slavery, Raffello escapes and has to go into hiding along with Kaito, Llednar gets lots of power etc, etc...

 

OOC: ok lets not worry about deleting, just start as if Llednar had succeeded

 

OOC: Okay.
BIC:

Raffello ran out, pulling Rhixan along.
Rhixan tripped up and fell to the floor. "Owch..."

 

a guard grabbed hold of her wrist "i got her! take care of the boy!" he yelled, the other guard continued to pursue Raffello

 

Raffello frowned. "Rhixan!"
Rhixan struggled in the guard's grip.

 

the guard chased after him


OOC: should we have Kaito and Raffello team up because only me having to save them could be boring for you lol

 

OOC: Oki :D
BIC:

Raffello looked ar Rhixan. "I'm sorry...." He turned and ran away.
Rhixan struggled more in the guard's grip.

 

the first guard led Rhixan to the dungeon, pulling her along with him.

the second guard was growing tired chasing the swift man

"you know of all the guards ive sparred with, your definitely one of the worst fighters when your angry" he said as he continued to dodge, he swung his blade at Llednar and their blades hit
Llednar bared his teeth as he grew impatient of the fight, he swung with all his strength and knocked Kaito's blade from his hand

 

Rhixan struggled again. "Let.... me..... go!" She tried to pull away.

Raffello turned to face the guard and went into his mind. Erasing his memories of the last hour, he came out. Breathing heavily, Raffello wiped the sweat from his brow.

 

the guard pulled Rhixan "you will follow me, we are going to watch Sir Twem execute that orphan, and your going to watch" he said pulling her there

the second guard stopped, he knew nothing of what was going on.....

Kaito got slashed in the shoulder, ripping his shirt "damn.... that one actually hurt" he said as he dodged Llednar's next attack

 

OOC: Whos the damn orphan?!
BIC:

Raffello smirked. "You have an order. Leave me and a girl named Rhixan alone."

Rhixan frowned. "Sir.... Twem?"

 

OOC: Kaito is an orphan remember :P and Llednar's full name is Llednar Twem in a mirror its Mewt Randell, he is a villain in final fantasy