The Real me

Don't look at me
As you know me
I'm not what I seem
Pain is filling
No way to stop

No one to hold
Just me
I want to show my feelings
But I'm afraid
That I'll just grow darker

Soon nothing will stop me
From consuming blood
Keeping me alive
Is going to be hard
After I change

Everyone will see
The real me
No one has realized
That it's all be take
But this is the time
To show me

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Random poem I wrote a long time ago...

 

The only problem is the repetition of the word "me." It's great other than that.

 

I thought of it as more of a song rather than a poem O:

Its good though :3

 

You showed a lot of emotion in this.I liked it.It was good.​

 

Thanks.........