The Pure of Heart

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  1. .Kairi. Kingdom Keeper

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    when will the next chapter come out? -waits inpatiently-
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    OOOOO I wanna go read it!!! *goes off to read*

    *waits impaciently for next chapter*
     
  3. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Sorry... my weekend was much busier then I expected.
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    ::gets smacked::

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  4. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    WOW!!!!ive just now stoped rading all the chapters so far and i think they are Fantastic!! please dont stop typing!!!!
     
  5. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you!
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  6. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    awwww! it still hasnt come out!
    *gets impatiant(sp)*
     
  7. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    It will be out SOON! ~_~
    I've been being lazy...
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    ::gets mobbed by readers::
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  8. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    *pouts*
    ive been wating paiently and you have been lazy!
     
  9. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    In the next two days... if not...
    you can all kick me...
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  10. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    but-if-you-die-how-will-the-story-continue?
     
  11. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    ::shrugs:: I guess its best if you not kick me then....
    ::gets mobbed by readers::

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  12. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    I haven't said anything for a awhile so I thought I'd check in and say hi.
    Also are you even close to starting the next chapter? Just curious and all that.
     
  13. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Yeah... this chapter has been taking some major imagination power... ::gets smacked::
    In other news....

    ...it will be out tonight...

    ::cheers erupt::
    ::readers start running::
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    ::gets mobbed once again::

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  14. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Great I'll read it when I see it.
     
  15. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    YAY!!!!!! its coming out!!!!!
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  16. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Is it really coming out tonight?

    If so how long?

    with time differance everywhere tonight might be tomorrow

    no hurry now though, procrastination gets us all
     
  17. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Ahh... lol
    Ok I've got an announcement to make
    ::graphs megaphone::
    It is complete...
    I repeat the next and newest chapter is COMPLETE!

    (and the crowd goes wild)
    ^_^ okay maybe only in my mind...

    It will be up in like 10 minutes or less.
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  18. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    YAY!!!! I cant wait! well, i guess i kinda have to.:D
     
  19. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    YAY

    I can stay up for 10 more minutes plus reading and commenting time

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  20. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Yes it is finally here: chapter 8. IF you can not recall what happened last I STRONGLY suggest you re-read the last chapter.
    So enjoy! Post or PM and comments, questions, suggestions, and concerns.
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    Chapter 9: A Scattered Dream

    Kairi felt cold. She felt as if lying on a sheet of pure ice. She gradually opened her eyes revealing a gloomy marble floor. She noticed it was dark, except for exactly where she lay; there was a hole in the roof which let the light of the moon shine right on her, and tiny bands of light came through cracks in the walls. Other than the ghostly moonlight it was utter darkness. She did not like this building; it had a feeling of darkness. The feeling so strong she felt overwhelmed.

    She picked up her head and looked around. Noticing the moon again she stared at it. She gasped the moon was in a heart-shape. Refusing to believe it Kairi rubbed her eyes and looked back. The moon was not heart-shaped, just a normal crescent shape. “My mind must be playing tricks on me,” Kairi thought to herself relieved.

    Kairi looked at her surroundings once more and faintly noticed a hallway at the far end of the globular room. The darkness seemed to be oozing out of the hall, as if tempting her to advance towards it. Kairi stood up noticing, with ease to her surprise, the ache in her head was gone and that it was extremely cold. She pulled her hood up and rubbed her arms wishing that she had sleeves. Kairi slowly advanced toward the hall in the dark; it was calling her, as if drawing her in. She made a few feeble steps toward, but her heart was telling her to stop while her body wanted her to go.

    “Curious?” a deep, mysterious yet sinister voice asked. Kairi whipped around and with her eyes searched for someone in the shadows. She searched quickly then noticed a bright orange, red eye staring at her. The eye glowed in the moonlight, seeming as if burning a hole through Kairi. Thanks to the tiny cracks in the wall Kairi could dimly see a rough figure. “Who are you?!?” Kairi spat out in fear. She heard footsteps as the figure seemed to draw nearer to her. Her head was screaming “RUN!” but her body was immobilized with fear. “My name is of no importance…” the figure said darkly. It approached the moonlight revealing a tall elder man, bald, somewhat pointed ears, white, pointed beard, and those piercing red, orange eyes; wearing a white trench coat, black pants, and high, sharp white boots.

    Kairi took a small step back, heart pounding. “Ah, now don’t be shy Princess,” the man said. Kairi was taken aback by this and stood weakly in shock that this man knew her. “Well, you are the Princess are you not?” the man teased coldly. “No need to hide Princess Kairi,” he said evilly as he smiled and pointed to her hood. Kairi just shook her head slightly trying to figure out how to escape. “Must we do this the hard way, Princess of Heart?” the man asked unemotionally. He raised his gloved hands into the air slowly and brought them down quickly; which caused a gust of wind to blow. Kairi brought her hands up and tightened her grip on her hood. The gale was too much though, her hood dropped and her hair whipped around in her face. The mysterious man then bolted his hands forward. The gust turned into a deadly windstorm that threw Kairi against the wall. As she slipped toward the ground the wind finally stop and the man chuckled.

    He paced back and forth as if stalking his wounded prey. He stopped and looked at her. “You have blossomed into a beautiful flower, Princess” he said as he grinned sinisterly. Kairi weakly looked at the man with frightened eyes, begging to let her go. “Who are you? How do you know me?” Kairi asked quietly. “Questions, questions, questions! Haven’t we gone over this already?” the man said aggravated. Kairi looked around knowing his patience was growing short, praying for an escape or someone to save her. “Oh no no no, Princess. There will be no rescuing or escaping.” the man said as if reading her mind and savoring this moment. “No, I don’t need to be rescued! I can help myself, I refuse to be the one needing rescued!” Kairi screamed with what little strength she had.

    The man began to cackle at Kairi’s statement. Kairi did not reply; she was trying to gather up as much strength as she could. “You can not defy me Princess.” The man said with a smile. “You may be powerful, but there is no escaping the truth!” the man said locking eyes with Kairi. “What?” Kairi asked in confusion. The man began his walk from the other side of the room, closing in on his prey. Kairi sat there in horror as she feared for her life, unable to find the strength to move. The man grabbed her by the neck and pinned her onto the wall, with incredible strength.

    Kairi was gasping for air as she stared at the man; the darkness seemed to be pouring out of his body. “No…” she spat out struggling to free herself. “Stop with the fidgeting!” the man yelled in irritation and tightened his grip on Kairi’s neck. She thought she was going to die right then and there. “All the things I haven’t got a chance to say,” Kairi said softly as tears swept along her delicate face. “No tears now. I wouldn’t kill you, Princess.” the man said. “You are of much too importance… but all flowers do have their bruises,” the man said coldly. With this he threw Kairi to the floor.

    “AHHHHHHHHH! Go away! Please just leave me alone!” Kairi screamed in pain as she slammed into the floor. “What do you want?” Kairi questioned attempting to get up, but her body just collapsed beneath her. “What I want?” the man said get ever closer to Kairi. “What I want is… Kingdom Hearts!” he said, darkness glazing over his eyes as they became a fiery red. Kairi was in great terror and perplexity in how she fit into this insane man’s plan.

    “PRINCESS!” a boy’s unfamiliar voice called out from the darkness. Kairi turned her head to the left as her chances of escape may have increased and her hopes rose. The man also turned with a look of rage on his face as he sought out for the boy whom interrupted his discussion. She saw a figure emerge in a black trench coat, he was charging at the man. Kairi desperately tried to see who the figure was. She looked towards the shadowy hallway to only be blinded by a brilliant illumination rising from it.


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    Hope you all enjoyed that chapter... took so much imagination I had to bust out my thinking cap. Haha j/k

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