The Pure of Heart

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Thanks! :D I'm not sure when the next chapter will be out, but I know it won't be today... Slight chance by tomorrow. No promises though, sorry. :(

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Thanks. I just love toying with their hearts and emotions. So much fun! Hehehe. If anyone could catch it... well there something hinting to later events. ::looks up at the chapter:: I wonder who will notice it... ::smiles evily::

::shrugs:: Hmmm... ::walks away whistling:: :D

 

this story just keeps getting better and better with each new chapter....
continue the excellent job!:) :) :) I <3 it!

 

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Thank you very much! :o I'm glad you like it... it's nice to have someone new comment. Please contiue to comment your likes, dislikes, and suggestions! :D

 

Lol. So when is the chapter coming out? And are you saying i post on the same stories to much? *looks from side to side* So mabye i do.......

 

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Hopefully tonight.... as in soon! And no thats not what I'm saying. What I meant with someone new commenting it means more are reading my story ^_^ and if you want my story to stay alive then you all can comment your little hearts out! :D Comments... comments.... comments... lalalala comments.... ::starts to hum:: hmmmm...mmmmm...mmm...MMMHMHMMMMM!

::runs off to browse site and write at the same time::

 

YAY!!!!!!!! Im hoping to have mine up by tommorow.... hopefully.... POST IT AS SOON AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!! Lol. My story's like dead :)

 

Oh! I have updated the other chapters. Don't worry you didn't miss anything I just named the chapter. So if you have some free time check out their titles. Yes, it has arrived! Chapter 8 is here! We're now going back to Kairi's view... that last chapter will 98% chance of the first and last Sora view. Rmeminder this is rated: PG-13. So back to the story!
Comment any likes, dislikes, and suggestions. :D
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Chapter 8: The Pain Is Real

Kairi slowly opened her eyes. It was still dark, but the colors of the night rushed upon her. She found herself at the camp-site, on log next to the fire wrapped in a blanket. She felt something else on her, she looked and found at her surprise Sora’s small jacket on her. Kairi then attempted to pick up her head, “Uhhhh…” she said softly in pain. She laid her head back down unable to keep it raised from the pain. Her head was throbbing. Kairi thought deeply but could not recall what had happened. All she could remember was running, Sora, feeling like flying, and then nothing.

“I thought you might be up,” a familiar soft, sweet voice said. Kairi turned her head to see Namine emerging from the tent. “Hi Namine,” Kairi said faintly. Kairi just looked at Namine somewhat confused; she sure had great timing. Namine responded as if knowing exactly what Kairi was thinking just by the look on her face, “I hope you didn’t hurt you head too much. You know we’re technically a part of one another. I just know these things… call it a sixth sense.” Kairi just laid there in astonishment as Namine seemingly answered her thoughts, but smiled warmly at her friend.

Kairi’s head was throbbing again, the pain severe. She went to bring her hand to her head, but it was weighed down by something. She looked and found Sora fast asleep in the sand next to her, his hand wrapped around hers. Her hand in his, she liked the thought of that. She smiled, her mind wondering even further if he felt the same. “He’s been there all night…waiting,” Namine said noticing Kairi’s smile. “Waiting?” Kairi asked puzzled. “Waiting for you to wake up,” Namine answered slightly giggling at oblivious Kairi. “So what exactly did I do?” Kairi asked still drawing a blank at what had happened to her. “According to Sora you fell down the stairs in the shack,” Namine said with worry on her face. “Oh… so that’s what I hit,” Kairi said slightly remembering hitting something hard that hurt a lot and was cold. “Are you sure you’re okay?” Namine asked with concern. “Yeah, I’m okay. My head just hurts a little,” Kairi said smiling so her friend would not fret. That was a white lie; it hurt a lot, but she didn’t want anyone to fret over her. “Why don’t you get some more sleep?” Kairi said changing the subject. Namine shrugged and said, “I guess I will. Maybe like another hour… the sun will be coming up soon.” “Alright see you later,” Kairi said smiling. “I’m just glad you’re alright,” Namine said. She hugged Kairi and then disappeared into the tent.

Kairi then directed her attention toward Sora. He was asleep; sleep is supposed to be peaceful, but Sora didn’t look serene. He had a look of worry on his face. Kairi was upset because she knew she had been the one to make Sora feel that way. The more she thought, the more the pain increased in her head. She looked at the stars; aches rolling through her head. Her eye lids became heavy. The stars were there, then they would fade, and then they were there. The pain reigned on in her head; the stars would faded again, warmth of the fire was there then it was freezing, Sora… was there then vanishing. Again and again, the pain was real… too much to tolerate. Kairi let out a hushed moan, “Ahhhhh…” It was all too much. The pain, the thoughts, the memories; they sent so much pain through her head.

Kairi brought her free hand to her head. She could no longer take this. “It’s too much!” she said softly to no one. So much, it brought tears to her eyes. She could feel the pain taking over her; taking control. She felt like something was coming; she was succumbed by the pain. She gripped Sora’s hand tighter, absorbing his presence; feeling overwhelmed. She was glad he was there; she smiled faintly feeling the pain raise its ugly head. A surge of sharp, excruciating pain went through her whole body. Her eyes slowly closed…

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OH readers I hope you enjoyed! And hey if you read this could you do me a favor? If you read this story and you've never or only maybe commented like twice... COMMENT! I love your gals/guys comments!!! :D

Maybe some people are like me... I know! I'll start CAA: Comment Addicts Anonymous. Haha j/k... :D

 

awww so cute... but i hope she's ok :( *can't wait till next chapter*

 

Yup, this is pretty good.
You should keep on writing n_n

 

This is a really good story! when will the next chapter come out?

 

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the senses! I hope Kairi is okay and that sora is okay! KEEP WRITTING!!! (K you know what i think ive posted that everytime on your story........Ill just stop saying it) XD

 

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Hehehe you'll just have to wait for the next chapter. :D And thanks!

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Aww, thanks. I will keep writing... for now... :p

Thanks for the comment! :D

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Aww, thanks! ::blushes:: :o
Hopefully today; it might be a short chapter though ::shrugs::
BTW: I love your "waiting" sig, its sweet! :D

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Thanks! Kairi well... you'll just have to wait. :p Hey it never gets old... you can say it as much as you like! :D





Hmmm... I been thinking I might enter this into that new competition <---(sp?).
But I really don't think it will have a chance.... ::shrugs::
Sees ya on the flip flop readers! ~_~ ^_^

 

This is why I try to not read fanfics that are ongoing...I get so anxious about the next post, it's too horrible to go through the wait. <:3

Wonderful, though.

 

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Aww... well theres eight chapters here to read. And hopefully a ninth by tonight. No one is forcing you, but I do hope you continue to read this. :D

 

I have that same problem..... which might be why i wait so long in between my chapters..... make other people suffer.....:D

Fine i will say it as much as i want! KEEP WRITTING KEEP WRITTING KEEP WRITTING KEEP WRITTING KEEP WRITTING!!!!!!!!!! that was fun :D

 

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Hahaha... when is your next chapter coming out?:)

 

Gawd, I couldn't stop if I consciously wanted to. I'm already addicted. @_@

 

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Horray! I've caused someone to be addicted to my story... ::looks around::
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I WAS ADDICTED BEFORE YOU WERE!!!!!!!!!!!! *pouts* I think mine should come out tonight, I just need to type it up!:D

 

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Hahaha... Everyone can be addicted. ^_^ Sweet I'll be there to read it when it comes out.... :D





Dang story competition has three limit chapter... curses! :p