The Pure of Heart

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  1. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol, Flash backs are awesome!

    I am glad that my story is over so I don't have to type it anymore :)
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    that reminds me....... I have to go type up my story *growns* I wrote it on paper and now actually have to type it up. the joys of story making............
     
  3. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Wow! ::cheers for you:: I would get bored if I had to write it out then type. When ever I get an idea I just keep thinking about it or run to my computer haha.
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    I know this was short, but I thought what there was, was enough. I hope you all liked it. .... hehehe I love comedy, suspense, and drama!
     
  4. Rosey Chaser

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    Ya but i get most of my ideas when im sitting around during Pe (cant play. Injuries; TAKE THAT EDUCATIONAL SYSTEM) so i write in the note book and come home, stare at the computer, and then think "Wow i dont want to type..........."
     
  5. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    My friends and I make up things at school, and then I write them down on paper, then type them.
     
  6. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Ha..."Take that educational system" Now thats some good comedy you could put in a story. Well... I feel no need to write the stuff done, I have a good memory.... Yes I 'll say this: I HATE WRITING!!!!

    How ironic is that... haha and now I'm writing a story. (which I'm actually enjoying) I have never ever ever ever enjoyed writing until this story idea popped into my head.


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    If I used half the stuff my friends make-up/ do in my story. Well lets just say that be one hell of a comedy. You'd all probably wet your pants from laughing.... and I'm being serious.
     
  7. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    That was a great chapter. Can't wait for ch 7.
     
  8. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thanks. I'm not sure when it will be out though.
     
  9. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    OMg this was great u leave me n suspince now ima be thinkin bout it all week eh cant w8 till the next chap so great
     
  10. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thanks. Haha thats what I was going for in this chapter.... oooo the suspense :D
     
  11. Roxas The Hero Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Huh intresting, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

    Nice evil laugh muhwahaha
     
  12. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Ha...Let me try: Muwahahahaaa! OW! That hurts me throat... I guess I'm not used to being all evilness... Glad you're looking foward to the next chapter. It should be longer... I know one was short.
     
  13. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    The Pure of Heart (Chapter 7)

    New readers find my other chapters here:
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9312
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9430
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9922
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10444
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10674
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10898

    Reminder that this is rated: PG-13. Hope you all enjoy this chapter. We now take a different perspective to Sora in this chapter... since well Kairi had a little spill. So read, comment, enjoy ~_~ ^_^


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    Chapter 7: The Waiting Game… Such Sweet Sorrow

    “KAIRI!” Sora yelled as he ran over to the slender girl. She was lying at the bottom of the shack steps. “Kairi,” he said again praying that she would wake up. The young brunette shook her, “Kairi! Kairi! Open you eyes!” he yelled in despair. He sat there by her side wishing she would wake up. “Kairi,” he said softly, as a few tears swept down his face.

    He picked up her unconscious body, she was so light. His tears fell onto her face. He went to wipe them away with his hand. When his hand touched her face he noticed it was as cold as ice. He set her down, just long enough to take off his jacket and place it on her. He scooped her limp body back into his arms and ran out of the shack towards the camp. Still hoping she would open up her eyes; wishing to see those sapphire eyes again.

    As he was running towards camp he could hear laughter. Riku was the first to notice Sora. Riku looked up after hearing fast paced footsteps. “Back so soon So-,” but stopped once he had a full view of Sora holding Kairi, who was lying unresponsively in his arms. “What happened?” Riku yelled as Sora ran over. “Oh my god, Kairi!” Namine screamed as she looked up. She and Roxas had been sitting together next to the fire not noticing what had been going on. Roxas immediately grabbed Namine, who was sobbing, and gave her a hug. “We… we were running and…” Sora said panting. “Take it easy Sora. Just tell us what happened,” Riku said in an ever calm voice. “Namine, can you help her?” Sora asked with anguish in his eyes. “I can try,” Namine sniffed. “Sora?” Riku said. Sora looked at Riku who wanted to take Kairi over to Namine. “Wha?” Sora said still confused as what was going on. He was still holding Kairi tightly to him, never wanting to let go. “It’s okay Sora,” Riku said seeming to know Sora exact thoughts.

    Sora handed Kairi over to Riku, who brought her over to Namine to exam. Namine began working immediately and quickly to help her best friend. “You okay?” Roxas asked Sora already knowing the answer. “I’m fine…No, it was my entire fault,” Sora said quickly changing his answer. “So you going to tell me what happened now?” Riku asked. “Yea,” Sora said. Roxas walked over, sat down next to Sora, and patted him on the back. Riku sat across from Sora, as he began to tell them what exactly happened. Roxas knew Sora was acting somewhat happy, but inside he was breaking apart bit by bit. Riku and Roxas made conversation to keep Sora distracted, while Namine was working away. Sora was doing well for the most part, but Roxas saw in his eyes that; he may be keeping up with the conversations but he never once took his eyes off Kairi.

    Moments later Namine stood up looking rather worn out, but content. Sora swiftly stood up too. “Is she okay?” Sora asked inquisitively. “Yes. She’s lucky; she only blacked out and has a concussion,” Namine said slightly smiling knowing her friend was okay. “So she’s alright?” Sora said confused. “Yes, there’s nothing severe. She’ll most likely wake up in a few hours,” Namine said patting Sora on the back reassuringly. Sora’s eyes immensely brightened as he ran over and hugged Namine. “Thank you,” Sora whispered. “You’re welcome,” Namine whispered back hugging Sora. Seeing this, a pain immediately shot through Roxas’ “heart.” He didn’t know what it was, but he didn’t like it one bit. The pain passed as an exhausted Namine jumped into his arms. “You did great. It must have been frightening,” Roxas said affectionately to Namine lightly kissing her. “Yeah, but you there by my side. That made it all better,” Namine whispered kissing him back. “Ah! Come on you two! If you’re going to do that get a room,” Riku said teasingly. Namine just turned her head and stuck her tongue out then went back to kissing Roxas. Roxas pulled back for a moment to say playfully, “Aww… don’t be jealous Riku!” “Jealous… Puh-lease!” Riku said smacking Roxas in the head. Roxas made a heated face and was about to hit Riku back, but Namine quickly reacted by kissing Roxas deeply. “Ugh…” Riku said under his breath putting a hand on his head, while walking away.

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    Meanwhile Sora walked over to Kairi’s side, still unconscious. He put a few more logs in the fire and zipped his jacket up on Kairi. He knew she would be okay, but still longed for her to open her eyes. “Hey, get some rest man,” Riku said sympathetically placing a hand on Sora’s shoulder. “I will, but I’m staying out here,” Sora said. “I thought you’d say that,” Riku said smiling. “And because I knew that; here take these,” Riku said holding out some blankets and a pillow. “Thanks,” Sora said smiling for the first time in hours. “Don’t mention it. What are friends for?” Riku shrugged as he walked over to the “guys” tent.

    “Good night, Sora,” the blond haired girl said, poking her head out of the “girls” tent. “Hey, g’night Sora,” Roxas said popping his head out of the “guys” tent. Riku looked at Sora before going into the “guys” tent; words were not needed in their friendship. “Thanks and good night everyone,” Sora said into the darkness; only glow coming from the fire. Sora took his pillow and lightly lifted Kairi’s head and placed it under, then covered her with one of the blankets. Feeling how soft her burgundy hair was and taking in her beauty. Sora sat by Kairi’s side in the sand for hours watching, waiting, and hoping for her to wake up. His ocean blue eyes became heavier and heavier. He tried to keep himself awake, but it was no use. His view of Kairi was fading… he was drifting off. There was nothing better than falling asleep, to the image he fell asleep to. In his mind it was perfect.


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    Hope you all liked it. Suggestions / Questions--- comment or PM me.

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  14. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    Great chapter keep up the great work.:D
     
  15. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thanks! ^_^
     
  16. Spitfire I'm a little high, and a little drunk.

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    Really good chapter, thou I was unware there was a chapter 6. No one ever announced that to me....sadness
     
  17. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    =O Sorry... =[ :: points to chapter links::

    Any better? :(
     
  18. Spitfire I'm a little high, and a little drunk.

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    I realized it when it said she was falling...*didn't remember that at all*
     
  19. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    Ugh the horor i wanted to continue XD great job cant w8 till next chapter ganna be soo great
     
  20. Rosey Chaser

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    YAY!!!!!!!!!!! Awwwwww Sora loves Kairi (well we all knew that anyways but whatever) Good chapter as always!