The Pure of Heart

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  1. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    The Pure of Heart (Chapter 5)

    New readers find my other chapters here:
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9312
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9430
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9922
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10444

    Reminder this is rated PG-13. Read, enjoy, comment. This chapter goes out to my family, "Together We Misfit" , you know who you are.

    Aww man...I promised myself ::tears up:: Enjoy! ::runs to get a tissue::




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    Chapter 5: Picking Up the Pieces.

    Sora picked himself off the sand after falling through the bushes, face still beat-red, and stormed toward camp. “Well sounded like you two hit it off,” Riku said sarcastically smirking at Sora’s face. “SHUT-UP!” Sora yelled enraged and irritated. He pushed Riku to the side with great force; catching Riku off-guard, he fell to the sand. “Well thanks a lot for that,” Riku said knowing that he probably deserved it. Sora said nothing nor turned around to see what happened. He simple just walked to the camp-site and sat down next to the fire in a huff and started to cook himself a fish.

    “Great…” Namine sighed. “It will be okay. It was an accident… Riku and I will go and try to get Sora in a better mood,” Roxas said reassuringly to Namine. “Yeah, don’t worry Namine. Those two can never stay mad at each other,” Riku said gesturing Roxas towards camp. “Okay, go ahead. I’ll wait for Kairi,” Namine said. “Alright,” Roxas said. He gave her a hug before leaving with Riku to the camp-site.

    Kairi started to emerge from the bushes, feeling the same and her face burning even more. She saw Namine waiting for her and felt a little better that her friend, no matter what, was always by her side. As she approached Namine she realized her friend wasn’t her normal cheery self. She had a miserable, heartbreaking look on her face. Her normal joyful, piercing blue eyes were filled with sorrow and regret and reduced to a dull gray color. When she reached Namine; her friend started to speak, “I’m sor-.” Kairi then cut her off by holding up her hand. “No, please don’t say it. It wasn’t your fault,” Kairi said trying her best to make Namine feel better. “But I could have-,” Namine said weakly only to be cut off again by Kairi. “No you couldn’t have,” Kairi said hugging her friend. “…just an accident,” she added softly.

    After letting go of her friend; Namine asked, “Do you want to talk about it?” Kairi stood there thinking for a moment, “No, I think its best not to. I need sometime to think. So if you would, I’d like to be alone,” Kairi beseeched. “Alright,” Namine said agreeing. “I’ll be on the islet… thinking,” Kairi said. “You’re not having dinner?” Namine asked hoping Kairi would change her mind. “No…I’m not hungry,” Kairi stated, her words wandering off. “Okay, if you insist,” Namine said. Kairi noticed that there was still pain in Namine’s words. “But, take this back for me. Will you?” Kairi asked holding out the duffle bag. “Sure,” Namine said grabbing the bag and heading toward camp.

    Kairi walked slowly at leisure to the islet. When arrived she sat on the paopu tree. Kairi absolutely loved this tree; it has so many memories, good and bad. “And hopefully many more to come,” she thought to herself. She stared out into the ocean to the point of the horizon where is mixed with the night sky. The ocean reflected the light of the moon, giving the night a somewhat eerie but beautiful effect. The stars were shining so bright. Tonight they were as dazzling as the night Destiny Islands was brought back from the darkness; along with her, but without Sora. This memory came rushing into Kairi’s mind like a hurricane. She remembered how sad she was, for more than a year, then happy when he finally came back. All these emotions bumped around in her mind, it was so much chaos, and these emotions were all mixed up. She let a little of it out with a sigh… then a few tears ran down her face. She quickly wiped them away; she never liked her emotions to get the best of her.
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    Namine walked to the camp-site and sat next to Roxas. “Where’s Kairi?” Sora questioned, face still red and sadness in his eyes. “She’s over at the islet. But she said she wants some time to herself,” Namine said. She noticed the sadness in Sora’s eyes only seemed to increase. “Okay,” Sora quietly said in a gloomy tone. Sora looked over at the islet. Kairi was sitting on the paopu tree; arms holding her knees tucked into her body and her head resting on her arms. Sora noticed that she was staring out into sea; he wondered what she was thinking about. He would give her the time she needed, but still wanted to talk to her. “I’ll wait at least twenty more minutes,” the young key bearer thought to himself. His heart felt like it was filled with no light, but regret.
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    Kairi sat on the paopu tree thinking deeply about many things. She would concentrate on certain memories, but she could not handle the emotions that came with it. She would quickly diminish the thoughts and move on; even though she hadn’t squared them out with herself. She just wasn’t ready; especially under the conditions now, to go over her indecisive thoughts and recollections. She started out into the water, taking in its beauty, thinking of the last time she sat here with Sora and Riku. The discussion of how to leave; these memories just brought more sorrow. She did not want more sorrow; she couldn’t deal with it right now, Kairi pushed these thoughts farther back into her mind. She would stay put and with her friends, her true light.

    Her deep thoughts kept her unaware of the approaching footsteps. “Kairi?” a familiar voice sounded inside Kairi’s head. “Kairi?” the voice said again. “Kairi?” said the voice she had longed to hear for the past year and a half. Kairi finally realized that this was not in her head; the young key bearer was trying to get her attention. “What?” she asked distantly, getting sucked back into reality and out of her thoughts. “Are you okay? Did I really make you that upset?” Sora questioned with sadness in his voice. She looked over to see Sora standing next to the tree looking at her. “I’m fine… well sort of and what are you talking about?” Kairi said answering his question confused about the last part. “Okay. Well, you’re crying,” the brunette said gently. “Wha- Oh!” Kairi said bringing her hands to her face. She felt the damp tears starting to dry on her face, a few more slid down. She was confused, why and when was she crying. “I’m okay. I just got some… sand in my eyes,” Kairi said wiping away the tears.

    “Can we talk?” Sora asked shyly. “Sure,” Kairi said still sitting on the tree; letting one leg down to dangle. “Well… where to start,” Sora said slowly. “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to “barge” in on you. I feel really stupid and awful,” Sora finished. Kairi looked at him she knew he was being sincere. “It wasn’t your fault; it wasn’t anyone’s fault…” Kairi said. “I’m sorry,” Sora repeated. “It was just an accident,” Kairi said trying to make Sora feel better, but mostly herself. “I’m sorry!” Sora said in a very upsetting way. Kairi jumped off the poapu tree and said, “Apology accepted.” She knew he was as upset about it as her. She gave Sora a faint smile. “Okay,” he said and thinking, that’s the Kairi he remembered, while holding out his hand. Kairi looked at it for a moment and was about to shake on it, but something made her stop. Instead she hugged him, Sora was taken aback from this but finally realized what was going on and hugged her back. Kairi suspected her heart was the force that made her do it. “This feels right; protected, loved, comfortable,” She thought to herself, “Safe…” She wanted this to last forever, but her mind told her otherwise. She pulled away and looked at Sora. His ocean blue eyes, she could get lost in them. She almost did right at that moment, but quickly squeaked, “We should probably go back to camp…” She felt her face getting warm like before, but this time she realized it was her whole body. “Yeah, we should. They’re waiting for us.” Sora said still dazed himself. They started to make their way back to camp, faces flushed. Walking side by side, bumping into to one another every once in awhile, as if forced; like magnets.


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  2. Spitfire I'm a little high, and a little drunk.

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    Ahh, I loved it, was expecting something to happen but overall I loved it, can't wait for the next one.

    P.S. Mine editing skill, take that.
     
  3. Kiryu Setsuna F. Seiei

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    That was worth the wait. Great chapter, now waiting for the next one. 10/10.
     
  4. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    I enjoyed writing this chapter. I wrote the end half after... well I put some emotion in it.

    Expecting something, eh? You just never know... ::smiles evily::

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    Thank you! awww... well don't worry I'll inform you when it comes. 10/10, really? :eek:
     
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  6. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you. Remember to keep in touch. PM me whenever you want to talk.
     
  7. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    i give it 10/10 also *can't wait for next capter*
     
  8. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you. The next chapter maybe short....I'm not quiet sure.
     
  9. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    Wow the most Horrible thing i read *jokes*

    Real Version: OMG this is sooooooo goood i cant believe it cant wait for the next 1 the most beautiful thing i read :) keep up da good work ur doin good dont quit :)
     
  10. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Wow! thank you! I've never gotten that much enuthisasim( idk if I spelled that right) before! Ok don't worry I will keep writing.


    I just realized something... 5 chapters in and one day hasn't gone by! :D oh my...
     
  11. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    O_o mines is XD
     
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    Awwwwwwwwww. Your good at putting emotions in. I can only do that if im angery and if my charactors suppost to be angery........or i make them angery (yes i cant spell) Keep up the good work
     
  13. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    XD XD XD (smilely abuse)

    ::currently thinking of ideas for next chapter::

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  14. Roxas The Hero Merlin's Housekeeper

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    That was great im looking forward to reading the rest of the story!
     
  15. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thanks! Umm... I'm acutally going to have some time tomorrow! WOOOO! I can finally work on chapter 6.
    I apologize for the long wait between chapters.

    1) school and sports keep me busy:( (mostly the sports though)
    2) I'm making this up as I go (plus I have never really liked writing, but I'm actually enjoying this) :D
    3) again... BUSY! AGH!:( :( :(
     
  16. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    The Pure of Heart (Chapter 6)

    Any new readers find my other chapters here:
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9312
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9430
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9922
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10444
    http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10674

    This ones short, but I hope you all like it. Reminder that this is rated PG-13. This chapter goes out to... my family again, cause were back and better than ever! WOOO! haha. Enjoy and comment.



    Chapter 6: Fading Away.

    As they were walking back to camp Kairi got lost in her whirlwind of thoughts once again. She was thinking about what had just happened, and what had happened all day. She looked over at Sora; he was looking at her, but he quickly turned his head away. His face was pink still. Kairi wondered what he was thinking about. “Was he thinking the same thing as me?” she thought and secretly hoped.

    They were making their way across the bridge back to the sea-side shack. There was no sound, just silence. Not exactly awkward, but not a good kind either. Kairi stopped walking and turned to look at the islet. Sora was still walking, but then stopped. “Something wrong?” Sora asked a few paces ahead. “No. I just wanted to look at it,” Kairi said smiling. “Okay…” Sora said rather confused. She wanted to remember the past few moments.

    “Okay. Let’s go back,” Kairi said running past Sora sticking her tongue out at him. Sora stood there for a few seconds still a bit confused. “Hey, wait up! No fair you got a head start!” Sora yelled, but was smiling. Kairi could hear his footsteps quickening behind her. “No this is fair. You’re faster than me!” Kairi retorted back at him. She was running down the steps of the shack and turned around to see how close Sora had gotten. He was smiling; she knew he was going slowly so she would win. She has realized how much she wasn’t paying attention to where she was going until it was too late. Her foot slipped… she was falling. She saw Sora quicken his pace, his face turning into to worry and shock, yelling, “Kairi! KAIRI!”

    Falling…falling into nothing. His yelling grew softer and softer. His smile started to fade. She didn’t know what was going on. Everything was passing her so fast. She felt like she was almost flying. She hit something hard and cold. His voice…his smile…everything was going. Then everything went black.


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    So how did you all like that chapter? A bit different, I would say. Muwahahhaaa!
    Hope you enjoyed. And don't forget to comment. :D
     
  17. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Wow..
    i liked this one...
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    Keep writing!
     
  18. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Really Cool!

    I wonder what will happen next?

    So much suspense!

    Great job!

    (the falling into nothing part sounds a lot like something that Sora said...)

    Great Great Job!

    SECOND POSTNESS!
     
  19. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Yeah. I know. I started typing this... ::flash back::
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    ::typing:: lalalalaaa ::thinks:: Where have I heard something like this before? :: ponders:: Oh well... ::shrugs:: lalalalalalala
    END OF FLASH BACK
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    Yep thats what happened...
     
  20. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    LOL, Kairi..
    That's ok..I have flashbacks like that once in a while when people say stuff...-_-;;