The Pure of Heart

Thank you! Chapters 2 & 3 are out. Look for The Pure of Heart

 

Amazing Thread, Th Best One I´ve Read

 

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Awww! Thank you! ::blushes:: :o

 

How Many Chapters Are U Gonna Make?

 

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Right now I have no clue...all I can say for now is quite a few. Sorry I don't have a solid answer.

 

i like it!!!!!! *claps* you are a good writer. Unfortunatly i dont have that talent and all i can do i draw.............. I wish i could write like that. My problem is i can get half way though a story strong and then have no good ideas and completly drop it. I swear in my desk i have at least 10 unfinished stories. I NEED COMITMENT :)

 

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Thank you and keep trying. You could try writing an outline before the actual story. Then you'd have all your ideas planned out for it. I really don't know if it helps... I'm making up this story as I go lol.

 

The Pure of Heart (Chapter 4)

New readers find my other chapters here:

http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9312
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9430
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9922
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Hope you all enjoy this chapter. Its is very humorous. Just a reminder that this is rated: PG-13. Enjoy and please comment I <3 to read your comments.

Chapter 4: Privacy Please!

When the group reached the island they set up their small camp-site. Kairi and Namine set a small fire pit then surrounded it with rocks and logs for seats. Kairi hearing enraged voices looked up. “What are they doing?” Kairi asked aloud. The boys had only one job, to set up the tents; however they had made no progress. “Well, they’re supposed to put up the tents, but it looks like they just ended up throwing sticks in the ground and tying each other up in the cloth!” Namine giggled. “My thoughts exactly,” Kairi said giggling along with her. “Do you boys need any help?” Kairi shouted over to them. Riku looking frustrated opened his mouth to speak only to be interrupted by Sora. “No we’re good here!” Sora yelled over in reply. Kairi and Namine instantly looked at each other and nodded. “Yeah, they definitely need our help,” Kairi said as they walked over to the struggling boys.

“You may not think so, but you definitely need some help,” Namine giggled. “Well, I guess if you girls want to help so badly we’ll let you,” Riku sighed finally realizing that it was hopeless working with Sora and Roxas. “Have you tried following the directions?” Namine asked. “Well, that’s what we would have done if someone hadn’t lost them!” Riku said glaring at Sora. “What directions? I have no idea what you’re talking about, Riku,” Sora said trying to look innocent by just smiling and putting his hands behind his head. As Sora said this Kairi noticed a piece of paper on Sora’s pants; right on his butt. She giggled, “You mean these directions?” She went to grab them, but they didn’t budge. “Uh, they’re stuck!” she exclaimed as she tugged harder. After trying many times unsuccessfully she finally got them off. “Eww! There’s gum on it!” she screamed.

When she looked up she noticed Sora was blushing. She then realized what had exactly happened and felt her face starting to get warm. Sora broke this awkward silence by saying, “Oh! So that’s where my gum went.” Sora chuckled face still red. “Eww…That’s just wrong Sora,” Roxas said laughing, “Wasting a perfectly good piece of gum!” With the laughter Kairi felt her face finally cooling down. “Boys will be boys,” Namine sighed. “Yeah,” Kairi said, “What is it with males and directions?” “We just don’t mix, Kairi,” Riku lightheartedly said. “Whoa! Riku making a joke! This is going in my adventure journal!” Sora said laughing. “Shut-up!” Riku said crossly and slapped Sora on the back of the head. “Ow! Come on you have to admit this is a rare sighting!” Sora said playfully. “Sora, you should not have said that,” Kairi thought to herself giggling. WHACK! Riku smacked Sora again, only harder. Sora sat there in the sand holding his head while the rest stood there chuckling at him. “Good thing you have such a hard head, Sora! That last one could have done damage,” Roxas said. “We’ll just leave you boys to put up the tents,” Namine said. “Hopefully they’ll use the directions this time,” Kairi whispered. “What was that, Kairi?” Sora asked irritated. “Nothing!” the two girls shouted as they ran down the beach.

As it was getting dark the girls made a nice fire, while they boys were off getting food. The boys were out in the clear, blue water attempting to fish. Kairi and Namine both watched in amusement at the boys were trying and trying again to catch some fish. Kairi sighed, “This is going to take awhile. Are you even really hungry?” she asked her friend. “No, not really,” Namine replied. Kairi sat there in boredom thinking of what they could do. “Want to go swimming?” Kairi asked. “Are you serious the waters so cold now,” Namine said in disbelief. “No I mean at the spring, the water is really warm there,” Kairi said. “Now that sounds like a good idea,” Namine agreed.

The two decided it as best not to change in the tent, so close to the shore where the boys were fishing. They didn’t exactly want the boys’ boredom and frustration to cause their eyes to wander. Kairi and Namine grabbed their suits and ran for the hot spring. Now being farther away from the boys and an ample amount of bushes at hand they changed into their suits and jumped into the spring. “Ah, now this is better,” Kairi said. “Indeed,” Namine agreed, relaxing in the soothing water. Moments later the girls could hear the boys coming up from the shore shouting proudly about all the fish they had caught. Kairi and Namine both agreed that they should head back to the camp-site. So the two friends stepped out of the warm water into the cool air and began to change.

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“Hey look at all these fish we caught, Kai-,” Sora stopped abruptly when he noticed neither Kairi or Namine were at the camp-site. “Where did they go?” Roxas asked with a confused look on his face. “Maybe they went for a walk,” Sora guessed. “Well, they’re probably hungry. We should go look for them,” Riku suggested. “Yeah,” Sora and Roxas replied agreement.

They walked up and down the beach, but the girls were nowhere to be found. It was getting darker by the minute and the boys became troubled about the girls whereabouts. “Maybe they went over to the shack or the tree house?” Riku stated. “Maybe… We should go check over there,” Sora said getting anxious.

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They girls had gotten out of the spring, readying to leave. Namine was dried off and dressed; Kairi however was still in her swim suit. “I’ll just meet you at the camp,” Kairi said. “Okay, suit yourself,” Namine shrugged and walked off out of the bushes, as Kairi started to undress.

Once Namine walked out of the bushes she saw the boys approaching her. She smiled at them and waved. They noticed the slender blond and walked over to greet her. “There you are,” Roxas said relieved. “Where’s Kairi at?” Sora asked noticing that she was nowhere to be seen. “She back there,” Namine said pointing to the large group of bushes, “but she’s chan-.” Namine was the cut off by Roxas; who grabbed her, embracing her in a deep kiss. Namine tried not to be rude, but pulled away to yell… it was too late by the time she looked up Sora was already through the bushes. “This is going to end badly,” Namine thought staring wide eyed at the bushes where the young brunette had disappeared.

Sora walked through the bushes looking for Kairi. He turned to his left and to his surprise found her. He just stood their trying to say something or move, but all he could get out was an, “Uhhhhh…” Kairi thought Namine had maybe forgotten something, started to look up to ask her what was wrong. But the eyes Kairi met did not belong to Namine. The moment she saw Sora standing there dumbstruck; she grabbed for her towel, threw her duffle bag at Sora, and screamed at the top of her lungs, “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Get OUT you PERV!!!!!!! OUT, OUT, OUT!” Sora immediately covered his eyes and ran, more or less falling out of the bushes. As he ran Kairi saw that his face was beat-red, yelling a few “sorrys” here and there. Kairi quickly then changed, feeling: livid, embarrassed, and flustered.

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Hope you liked it, comment. Enjoy these happy moments, because well....I can't tell you that. ::smiles evily::

 

Indeed I liked it, saw the ending coming 3 paragraphs back to. Priceless

 

i like it so far *wait for next chapter*

 

This is really well done. Keep up the great work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 

Wow tht 1 was really good gets me so anxious for the next 1 XD this one was really good n funny hope u come out with the next 1 soon XD

 

I really like it!..-can't wait for next chapter-​

 

AWWWW! Thank you! ::hugs my wonderful Misfit family::


Comment readers. I <3 them!

 

Great Job!!

Hehe I saw that one coming :)

Nice job!

:) :D :) :D :) :D :) :D :) :D

 

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Yeah, it was pretty obvious...but the idea for the ending just popped into my head... I was laughing just thinking about it. As you can tell I enjoy writing the humorous scenes. (I think about every chapter has had like 2 or more... except maybe chapter 1 can't remember)

 

humor is good (unless it's like stupid or cheesy)

:)

I try to make mine funny but it usually doesnt work

 

I'll add or try to add humor into every chapter... but be warned enjoy these... cause well



I'd have to kill you if I told you... ::smiles evily::


HA! j/k


Please comment...

 

I liked it!! *gives thumbs up* Nice job!

And the ending...hilarious!

 

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Thank you. Yeah... I laughed while writing it. ha ha :D