The Pure of Heart

Aww! Thank you. I like it when someones excited about the next chapter! I'm thinking it will be out tonight or tomorrow. Well... I guess I'll get off in a bit to work on it. I only have like one papragraph done lol!

 

OMG so good keep up da good work ur doin great this is so exciting cant w8 till the next chapter hope its great :D

 

Aww, that was actually really cute. That bit about the clouds was priceless!

So completely Sora. xD And man I'm right up there with Kairi, all those shirtless cuties? Yummy. ;)

Can I offer one bit of advise? Press enter, please! Inbetween speech and paragraphs? It would make it alot easier to read. XD

Keep up the good work.

 

Yes I like the cloud part too, I thought it was totally like Sora to say that lol. Yes....T to the A to the S-T-E-Y.....Boys you Tasty! lol. Ok I'll try, I'm used to writing like this... I blame teachers lol.

Thank You! Hopefully chapter 3 will be out today I couldn't work on it yesterday. I was making a movie with some friends. Its going to be hillar.

Self: must get to work on chapter and use comments
::runs to Word to open file::
::Trips::
Self: Ow!

 

The Pure of Heart (Chapter 3)

Sorry everyone I know I know... it's been awhile. I have been very busy and haven't been able to work on it at all. BUT now I do so heres the next chapter, hooray! WARNING: remember readers this is RATED PG-13. Please do not complain about a certain scene because you've already been warned. Enjoy and COMMENT! LOL It's a long one. :)
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Chapter 3: The Foreign Room.


“What to bring?” Kairi asked herself. “Well, I’d say clothes are always a good thing,” Namine said sarcastically. Kairi jumped at the sound of this; Namine always seemed to pop out of nowhere. “Very funny, Namine. You scared me, besides I know to what to bring I just feel like I’m forgetting something,” Kairi retorted. “Oh, well, maybe it’s a certain something that you’re forgetting to tell a certain someone. Hmmmm?” Namine asked teasingly. “Come on Namine I’ll tell him when I’m ready.” Kairi said somewhat annoyed. “That’s what you said the last time,” Namine chuckled. Following this remark Kairi bent down on her knees pretending to beg. “Aw, don’t make me do it Namine. Please?” Kairi said making the most “poutiest” face ever. “Well, I guess I’ll let it go this time,” Namine said sighing trying to hide her smile. The best friends could no longer keep up their fake seriousness and started cracking up at each other.

“Well, you really should tell him,” Namine said persistently. At this remark Kairi picked up her fluffy, pink pillow and chucked at Namine. She did this both out of aggravation and fun. Alas she just missed her as Namine ran for the door. Namine then poked her back in the door exclaimed, “Ha you missed!”, while sticking out her tongue. Kairi readily armed with another pillow, threw it at Namine’s head. “Ha, bulls eye!” Kairi burst out when she realized she had hit her target. Feeling justice served Kairi grabbed her bag and tossed Namine hers, “Ready to go?” Kairi asked. “I was the one waiting for you.” Namine acknowledged. “Oh well,” Kairi said innocently as she shrugged. The two then walked out of the house to get their friends side by side.

The first stop was Riku’s house. As the two friends approached the house they noticed Riku was already outside waiting for them. Riku looking rather displeased stated, “I’ve been waiting for a half an hour!” “Sorry,” both Kairi and Namine said rather sarcastically. “What have you two been doing for the last hour?” Riku questioned. “Getting ready to go camping silly!” Kairi replied. “Why does it take you an hour to grab a sleeping bag and some clothes?” Riku asked. “I don’t know. Maybe we talked most of the time,” Namine said. “Yeah, Riku, time flies when you’re having fun.” Kairi stated giving him a sour face. “Ok, then what in the world could you possibly talk about for an hour?” Riku said getting irritated. “Oh you know girl stuff,” Namine said. At this statement the two girls turned at each other smiling turning into laughter as they remembered their pillow fight. “Wha-What is so funny?” Riku questioned. The two friends just continued laughing. Riku just shrugged and said, “Fine…I give up.” With Riku ahead of them the girls continued to giggle as they headed to get Sora and Roxas.

When they got to Sora’s house the girls had finally stopped laughing. The friends half expected Sora and Roxas to be waiting since they had taken so long, but they were nowhere to be seen. So the three went and knocked on the door which was immediately answered by Sora’s mother. “Oh, why hello everyone! Those boys… I have no idea what their doing up there making such a ruckus. Why don’t you all just go up there and get them?” she said inviting them in. The friends’ attention was then directed toward the stairs where there was much yelling and screaming. “Thank you,” they all said as they headed up the stairs.

Many thoughts popped into Kairi’s mind, but there was one persistent one. “I’ve never been in Sora’s room,” Kairi whispered to Namine. Namine just looked at her and giggled. Kairi getting rather mad at her, since it was a very private thought she had just shared with her. “Oh yeah… you’ve probably been in Roxas’s room hundreds of times,” Kairi said in frustration. Kairi looked up and saw that Namine was hurt by this remark and immediately wished she could take back this remark. Kairi was about to apologize, but Namine seemed to noticed that she didn’t really mean it. Namine just slightly smiled and whispered, “Eww! Kairi don’t be a perv.” Namine just lighted pushed Kairi. “Sorry, I know… Roxas is better than that,” Kairi said in all honesty. Namine just looked at her with her kind, soft blue eyes as if forgiving her. Kairi was glad Namine was so forgiving. Her heart rate started getting faster as they were up the stairs and, Riku leading the way, headed towards Sora’s room.

The yelling was getting louder as they approached the door. The sight they found was of Sora and Roxas wrestling and yelling at one another. Riku interrupted this chaos by exclaiming, “Well if it is Tweedle-Dee and Tweedle-Dum at it again!” Sora and Roxas instantly froze when they heard this. Sora had Roxas is a head-lock giving him a noogie, while Roxas had his foot smashed up against Sora’s face. It was certain an odd but familiar site to see. After noticing Riku wasn’t the only one there both immediately let go of one another and brushed themselves off. “Hey!” Sora said rubbing his face where Roxas’ foot had currently been, leaving behind an imprint of the shoe. “Hi,” Roxas said rather dimly rubbing his head in pain. “Umm… Are you ready to go?” Kairi asked amused by the boys’ actions. “Yep,” both said unenthusiastically still in pain. They each grabbed their duffle bags, and they group was headed out the door.

They group of friends were headed down the road to the boats that would bring them back to the island they hung-out at for years. Everyone one was having light conversation until interrupted by Kairi. “There’s just one thing I want to,” she said. Everyone asked, “What?” “Well what were you two fighting about?” Kairi asked in confusion while pointing at Sora and Roxas. “Well…ummm,” Sora stuttered. “Well, we were fighting over a…” Sora said then mumbled the end. “A what?” Kairi, Namine, and Riku all asked together. “A cookie,” Sora and Roxas said in unison looking embarrassed. “Okay then… That’s a stupid thing to fight over. Uh, who won?” Riku asked in bafflement and just to be sarcastic. “Well,” Sora started to explain, “We kind of smooshed it will we were wrestling,” he finished as he put his hands behind his head giving his friends that smile of his. The group started to laugh; even Sora and Roxas, as they continued walking towards the boats, at their friends’ stupidity.
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They haven't even got to camping yet! Hope you enjoyed!

 

Awesome!

Great job.

fighting over a cookie :)

 

Yep...a cookie I really couldn't think of anything more stupid...lol

 

yeah. it worked well with it crushing and all

why do I have the feeling that they wern't really fighting over a cookie

 

I'm sorry to say thats all they were really fighting over... I was going to change it, but I couldn't think of anything. lol
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Please comment readers! I very much enjoy comments and questions!

 

Yeah I can believe it, after wrting chapters... it's quite hard to be imagniative!

 

Yeah, I know! I had the first paragraph of this done and that was it. Until I finally took the time to: sit down, think/brain-storm, and WRITE! Lol it took awhile but once I get started and a good flow of ideas it gets done hehe :D

 

I just do things while I write so I don't get bored :)

 

Hmmm... I could do that, but I might get distracted lol.

 

wow rly good good job i enyjoyed readin tht its rly rly dunny n interestin cant w8 till the next chapter im so excited cant w8

i also lik tht cookie thing rly good thinkin there

 

Aww! Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it! As you can probably already tell I like adding "funny" scenes in. Glad you liked the cookie idea! Please continue to comment with every chapter! I very much enjoy it!!! :D

 

I liked it!! :D

 

Thank you! ::hugs all comments::

 

COOL!
"rock hard abs" XD Love it!
But If I was in Kairi's position . . . I would say that too . . . but you got to admit, Riku's a little more buff. :) :p

 

Yeah... I will have to admit that. haha, but in this story Kairi doesn't have feelings for Riku... so ya know had to put Sora lol

 

hell good! Keep writing!