The Pure of Heart

Nicely done:D!!!! Yeah I know, school stinks.....:(
I take it the blue crystal is from the struggle trophy? the one seifer gave to sora?

 

Thank you. Yes, it's the crystal off the struggle trophy.

 

Yeah

so i was told to check out this story and def. wasnt expecting what i read.....WOW i got into the story soooo much....!!! ahhh:D


so great...u have a talent!!!;)keep it up ^_^

 

Wow... thank you. Someone actually told you to read it...? ~_~
Tis good when a reader gets into the story!

Glad you've liked it so far!

Thanks... I've got talent... ^_^
You don't know how much that meant to me!
=D

 

Wow, your really good at writing. I can't wait until next chapter!!

 

Thank you very much.
Should be out soon!

 

Can't wait for the next chapter. :D

 

Thanks kika, your awesome. =D

Anyways I finally have the next chapter. I know it's WAI over due, but at least it's finally done. This chapter turned out a lot longer than I expected it, and I know it's been a long wait so here's what I whipped up for you all in the last two hours.
Enjoy! Comment on your likes, dislikes, and suggestiond!



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Chapter 11: Rolling in the Sand

Kairi and Sora sat there in silence for the longest time; mesmerized by the beauty of the islands. Sora turned to Kairi and said, “It’s beautiful.” “Yes. The sunset really is magnificent,” Kairi said starry-eyed. Sora said quietly, “That wasn’t what I was talking about,” as he slowly inched closer to Kairi. “Then what were you talking about?” she asked confused turning to face Sora. When she turned her face she found it only inches away from Sora’s. She was a little shocked and giggled somewhat at the odd look on Sora’s face. “What is it?” she asked still chuckling slightly. Sora came ever close to her face and whispered, “You.” He then pressed his lips against hers. Kairi was in complete and utter shock, but it was all replaced with a vast wave of warmth that flooded her body. She felt the need to pull away, but ignored it and closed her eyes. She couldn’t believe what was happening.
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Kairi opened her eyes to find herself still sitting on the pier smiling happily. Sora was standing up a few feet away as if waiting. Kairi looked around, blushing and realizing she had drifted off into a daydream, but it seemed so real. She sat there and brought her legs up and tucked her knees into her chest, waiting for the heat and pinkness to leave her face. “It’s getting harder to overlook emotions…” Kairi thought to herself rather embarrassed.

“Kairi?” Sora said now at the other end of the pier. “Uhh... what?” She asked. “Are you coming? Dinner is probably ready!” Sora asked seeming rather hungry. “Yeah,” she said standing up and walking over to Sora. “Are you feeling okay now?” Sora asked with concern. “Actually, I’m feeling a lot better now,” the young princess said happily. “Good. Let’s go eat!” Sora said returning the smile.

A low roar came from the petite girl’s stomach. “Hungry, huh?” Sora asked laughing. “Extremely!” she said holding her stomach as if trying to tame it. Sora was still chuckling at Kairi, so in return she punched his arm. “You try not eating for like two days. OH wait, you couldn’t because that’s all you do,” Kairi said teasingly. “No I don’t,” Sora protested making a sour face while jumping into the sand. Kairi decided to take the steps instead and walked towards him. “Yea you do… you fat-***!” Kairi said running away laughing. “Now you’re in for IT!” Sora yelled sprinting after her.

Kairi screamed seeing that the young key bearer is much faster when irritated. She raced down the beach rounding near the camp. “I’M GOING TO GET FOR THAT!” Sora shouted getting closer. Kairi turned her head to see that he had gotten very close indeed. “AHHHHH! Why are you so fast?!?! You’re supposed to be slow!” she shrieked seeing the campfire getting closer and closer.

She finally reached the perimeter of the camp running close to the campfire. Roxas, Namine, and Riku all looked up from their meal a bit confused. Sora came darting in, spotting Kairi, lunged out at her. “AHHHH!” Kairi screamed and placed her arms up to shield herself. She popped open one eye and found herself lying in the sand. Laughing insanely she looked at her friends who were a bit in shock, but chuckling. She went to get up, but felt something weighing her down. The young princess turned her head to find Sora practically on top of her. She was a bit uncomfortable yet found the situation hilarious. “Get a room!” Riku shouted. “Ah, leave ‘em Riku. Can’t you see they have issues to work out,” Roxas said laughing under his breath. “Stop it! You’re both immature. Eat your fish,” the slender blonde said to them both hitting them.

Sora lifted himself slightly off supporting himself with his hands. “I told you I get you back for that,” the brunette said showing off his boyish, trademark smile. His head was slightly down which made his hair fall down into Kairi’s face. “Well I’d love to stay and chat, Kairi, but I’m hungry,” Sora said sarcastically. His spiky hair tickled Kairi’s flushed cheeks. “Me too. Now get off me you’re too heavy you fat-***,” Kairi said trying to push him off. “That hurt my feelings Kairi,” the young key bearer said making his bottom lip stick out, “Now I’m not moving till you apologize!”

“Sora, just get off her already,” Namine said rolling her eyes. She tried to help her friend, but she found it too amusing to really put any effort in it. “Yeah, get off me you sick-o,” Kairi said pushing him again. “Fine, but you owe me!” Sora said lifting himself up a bit more. “Come on!” Kairi said pushing him again, this time succeeding at knocking him off. Sora immediately grabbed her arm and dragged her down with him.

Sora and Kairi were both sprawled out in the sand. Kairi was not very amused, but Sora was just lying there cracking up. “Shut-up!” Kairi said jokingly, smacking him. “Fine, fine, fine. Alright, fair enough!” Sora said standing up brushing the sand off himself. “Let’s eat now,” he added, offering his hand to Kairi. “Lets,” Kairi agreed taking it. They walked the few feet back to the campfire and plopped down on a log; starving and ready to eat.



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Hope you enjoyed. I encourage and enjoy comments. XD

 

Very amusing to read :3 aww there so cute together.

YES! first post on the new chapter :D

 

i really really like it :)

keep writing !

 

Long wait, but worth it. Good chapter.

 

Awww... thanks. I liked writing that beginning... just to be mean. >:3
The chapter was orginally supposed to be short, but then I got an idea and one thing lead to another. This was more of a "filler" chapter, cause there is still something important I need to decide on for the upcoming chapters.

Thank you. =D

Will do... or try. :/

Yea... very long. XP

Glad you enjoyed it. =D

 

I thought these were really good chapters. Then again maybe it was because i haven't read any of them in 14 days. Just Kidding!Keep up the good work.

 

Lol. You have joined the land of Procrastination! *high fives* GO US!!!!

THat was a good chapter. I couldnt really get a good picture of the campfire and everyones faces like some of the other chapters though.

But at least joo got the chapter out 0.0

 

i like it!!!! its longer then the last one, longer then most of them come to think of it

 

good chapter! please dont make us wait too long for the next one :)

 

Hmmm... maybe I will tweak that chapter so you have a better picture. >_<

The main focus was Kairi and Sora though.
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I'll try... I still need to decide on a very important componet of the upcoming chapters.
>_>
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Maybe if I doodle a bit I can decide.
>_<

 

woohoo!!!!doodling! that often gives me ideas,

 

Nice. I thought it was kinda funny w/ the daydream bit.

 

Yeah, I liked writing that part to be mean. XD
Plus Kairi bottles up her emotions alot in here, so she somewhat releases a bit in her daydream. >:3
Yet again... funny/filler. Needed to explain things... but mostly buy more time! XP