The Pure of Heart

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  1. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Sora also promised Namine that when he woke up they would meet and become friends, but when they did meet, all Sora said was "huh?"


    My next chapter is up! I have succesfully came up with the idea for a fanfic and finished 2 chapters since your last chapter was out.

    *smiles*

    Read it to find out..

    I swear I didn't copy with the whole... well... you'll see....but it wasn't copying.....

    I truly don't mean to spam. Am I spamming? I don't mean to be...If you want me to stop posting in your thread when my new chapters come out, I'll just PM you..

    Which I probably should do, becuase that's what Roxas would want.

    Ok, I'll do that from now on, if you don't mind, that is. *thumbs up*
     
  2. XxSoraxX Moogle Assistant

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    for the past 2 hours of reading your fanfic (Started reading today) I have realized something......But I am not to sure what I've realized so just keep up the great work and try not to take to long on that next chapter of yours mmmmhk.:D
     
  3. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    It's been 18 days :0

    You needs to hurry up! :mad:
     
  4. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Okay... I know, I know. It's been awhile, but it's finally here. Chapter 10! *sparkle sparkle* You can yell at me all you want... and kick me. >_< Anyways... I thought I'd attempt to explain. My last like month of school was very hectic. Ya know... crap, work, finals... preparing for finals. And loose ends needing tied up. Now that all that crap is done...
    THE SHOW MUST GO ON!
    Show... story w/e. XP
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    Well here it is. What you've all been waiting for. Read, comment, enjoy!
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    Chapter 10: The Perfect Sunset



    Kairi opened her eyes only to find another bright light. She blinked and found herself back at the beach; the red, orange sun bathing her in its warmth. She felt something gripping her hand and looked over to see Sora’s smiling face. “You’re awake!” he said happily. Kairi smiled, realizing she was safe and looked over at Sora’s hand on hers once again. Sora was staring dreamily at Kairi, but noticed she was looking at something. Sora looked down at his hand on Kairi’s and quickly pulled it away. Kairi looked over at Sora to see what caused his actions. Kairi found no answer; just a blushing Sora.

    “How long was I sleeping?” Kairi yawned. “From since you fell… almost a day,” Sora said. Kairi yawned again and rubbed her sleepy eyes. “Tired still?” Sora asked. “I guess,” Kairi said. “I think you’ve gotten enough sleep,” Sora said smiling. “Well, it wasn’t exactly peaceful,” Kairi said remembering her horrible nightmare. “Huh? What do you mean? It’s been pretty quite,” Sora questioned in confusion. “Well…” Kairi said unsure of how to explain it.

    “SORA!” someone yelled in the distance. Sora and Kairi looked around seeing Roxas and Riku down at the shoreline. “Sora, get down here and help us catch some more fish for dinner!” Roxas yelled, waving him over. “Dinner?” Kairi asked noticing how hungry she was. “OH! So you need my awesome fishing technique?” Sora yelled over, smiling. “No just your dumb luck!” Riku said sarcastically. “Dumb luck? I’ll show you dumb luck...” Sora said under his breath, running towards the shore.

    “Hey!” Sora said stopping for a minute, “Namine will look after Kairi for a bit?” “Sure,” said Namine happily. “Thanks!” Sora said as he continued to head towards the shore. “You’re welcome,” Namine said. She was happy to find out that Kairi was awake again. As Sora walked by she messed with his hair while saying, “You’re a lazy bum, ya know?” Sora just stuck out his tongue in protest, ranting about how he’d show Riku and Roxas. Roxas saw this gesture and again felt a pain in his body. Roxas normal “happy” expression on his face turned grim. “What’s wrong, Roxas?” Riku asked noticing the change in behavior. “Uhhh… nothing,” Roxas said, he really had no idea what was wrong. “Alright! Now I’m going to teach how it’s done boys,” Sora said running over. “Sure… dumb luck,” Riku said, coughing the last part out.
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    Namine walked over to the camp seeing her friend’s smiling face. “Kairi!” Namine said happily, hugging her friend. “Guess I fell back asleep,” Kairi said. “Yeah,” Namine said slightly giggling. “I’m glad they’re getting fish,” Kairi said looking over at the shoreline. “Hungry?” Namine asked. At that moment a loud, rumbling growl came from Kairi’s stomach. “Is that an answer enough?” Kairi said. “Well… I guess so. You’ve just been sleeping the day away. You’re becoming as much as a lazy bum as Sora,” Namine said teasingly. “Sora would be ecstatic to find out he’s no longer the only lazy bum on the beach,” Kairi said chuckling.

    The sun was lowering ever so slightly. Kairi sat up from were she was lying, noticing the pain was still in her head. “I’m going to the pier,” said Kairi ignoring the pain. “Are you sure you’ll be alright?” the slender blonde said with a look of worry in her eyes. “Yeah I’ll be…” Kairi said as she got up. When she stood up a wave of pain rushed to her head. “Fine…” she finished faintly as the pain brought her to her knees. “No you’re not. Please just stay here,” Namine pleaded, helping her up. “No,” Kairi said firmly. Kairi regained herself and started to walk off. She managed a few steps, but then found herself in the sand again. “If you’re going to be stubborn at least let one of us help you?” Namine said. As Kairi tried to pick herself back up the boys were coming back with their fish. “Sora, will you escort Kairi to the pier and make sure she’s alright?” Namine asked. She knew she could go with Kairi, but it wouldn’t do much good. If Kairi went Namine would be going down with her, not being able to support both their weights. Sora looked over at Kairi struggling to get up. He handed the fish to Riku and without a word ran over to assist Kairi.

    He helped Kairi off the ground and swung her arm around his shoulders as they began to head toward the pier. “Thanks,” Kairi said, ashamed of being the one in need again. “It’s no problem,” Sora said happily. As they walked Sora began to lose his grip on Kairi and placed his free hand on her hip to steady her. Kairi immediately felt a rush of warmth come over her. She looked at Sora; he was just giving her his happy-go-lucky grin. This time the feeling was different; she wasn’t nervous or embarrassed. It was a good warmth, as if her body began to tingle. Almost like the night earlier on the islet, but stronger.

    They reached the pier and Kairi sat on the edge. As her feet dangled over she swung them freely, to and fro. Sora stood there for a few seconds then joined her. She looked out into the water as the sun got ever closer. This is what she came for; the sunset. The pier was one of her favorite places to watch it. They sat in silence as the sun slowing crept to the horizon.

    “Do you remember the last time we watched the sunset together?” Kairi asked. The conspicuous view brought back memories. “Yeah…” Sora said remembering too. “How could I ever forget,” he added softly. It was the last few moments they ever truly spent together, before the storm hit and their world around them came crashing down. “Do you remember what I asked you?” Kairi asked. “Of course I do: Don’t ever change,” Sora said looking over at Kairi. “Yeah. You know what?” she asked. “What?” Sora asked. “We’ve both changed,” Kairi said quietly. “I guess we have,” the young, brunette said. “Well, we’ve changed in good ways. By us changing… it brought us back here; and that’s all that matters,” Kairi said feeling tears well up in her eyes. Sora looked over at Kairi once again, noticing she was sad. “Aw, don’t worry Kairi. Remember we can always come back here,” the key bearer said. “The islands came back, just like you came back to me,” the princess said. “Of course! I made a promise,” Sora said. “And you kept it, just like you kept my good luck charm,” Kairi said smiling.

    “Now it’s your turn to keep a promise,” Sora said staring out into the ocean. “What?” Kairi asked, looking back at the sun. “I want you to have this…” Sora said while digging around in his pocket. He pulled out a crystal, blue glass orb. “I want you to have this and promise to keep it with you always; and if something happens and we are apart, when we meet again you have to promise to bring it back to me,” the young brunette with his ocean blue eyes said, while placing the orb in Kairi’s hand and closing it tightly around it.

    The sun met the horizon, as it seemed to melt and blend with the water. The clear ocean sparkled in the sun rays, as the sky turned into a pink and orange hue. Kairi held up the orb to the sunlight. The rays made the orb glisten brilliantly. She held the orb securely and placed it near her heart as she watched the sun gradually fade away behind the water. “Promise?” Sora asked. “Promise!” Kairi said affectionately as the sun made its final descent. It was perfect.




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    I hope you enjoyed!
    Any questions, concerns, or suggestions: comment or feel free to PM me.
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  5. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    wonderful story 01_kairi...although

    :eek: is Roxas okay?
     
  6. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    :D awsomeness!!!! ive been waiting for the next chapter and it was really good!!!
     
  7. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    <_<
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    In due time, kika... in due time.
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  8. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    It was good!

    worth the wait!

    hopefully now that summer is aproaching/here (depending on the school) chapters will come one more frequently?

    I don't know, great job!
     
  9. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you very much!
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    My summer is here now, today... well now yesterday was my first official day of summer. And yes they should be; I won't have as many darn distractions.

    Thank you!
     
  10. AkuseruVIII Banned

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    Yays! It's finally here, and I read it. One, I liked it and I felt it was worth waiting for. B, I think I'm wondering what's gonna happen. Kep it up I wanna see what happens. See ya.
     
  11. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thanks, I think this one was longer than my other chapters too. Good thats what I want you to do... hehe. Always keep your reader guessing.

    The next chapter might be short though... I'm not 100% sure yet.
     
  12. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Finally!!!

    It was great!!

    But now I'm going to summer camp for a week.

    Good thing it came out today!!


    Yeah, what was that weird roxas thing?
     
  13. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Now if I told you, it'd take all the fun out of the surprise. :rolleyes:
     
  14. XxSoraxX Moogle Assistant

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    I think roxas has the HEEBEE GEEBEEZ or something else:confused: ...anyways...

    lovely work on chapter 10 and keep up the great work:D
     
  15. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Lol...

    Thank you... I'll try!
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  16. kevz2kool Twilight Town Denizen

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    nice addition, kairi! :)
     
  17. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you.

    ~_~
    Glad you like it.
     
  18. kevz2kool Twilight Town Denizen

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    Glad you're glad i like it... XD
     
  19. coolgirl200 Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Awesome chapter!!! Awww...Sora gave Kairi the shiney orb thingy! :D
     
  20. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    Thank you. Yesh... ^_^
    *mush mush mush*