Digital Art The Pumpkin King

Yeah, jack's here!!!!!!


Cnc?

and also should I replace my Assassin's Creed Siggy with this one?

 

This is one of the best you've made! (: I like Jack Skelington, and this stock is really well. I think you should continue. The text isn't really readable, so maybe just clear them up some. (:
:noworries: Nice!

 

Very dark you need a light source pronto.
Also the text is kinda hard to read plus it
doesn't have much flow. However the effects
near the left hand are perfect. =3

 

I could read it just fine too... :/

But it is very dark, you need some lighting. Right now it just feels boxed in. (If that made sense :P)

Also ,doesn't have much more flow, you should make more effects similar to the one near Jack's hand to get a better flow.

 

KH:

Read the last thing I posted
And I made if you look at the right you'll notice the right has flow too

Sprinkles:


Idk , but it's no problem

 

Love this.

It's one of my fave colr combos and it's pretty much on the gothic side wince it is holloween :]
I like the checked pattern ya used on the right side for the background :3
Good render too =D
I think it's very well done :] Good job~! :noworries:

 

Too dry, one dimensional, and saturated.
Needs a light source and color compliments to make it stand out.
The effects are boring and cluttered, they need a sense of direction rather than being clumped together to make something fit back there, and around him.

The typography should be sharpened, and the opacity shouldn't be so low on them. They should also be closer together.

The effects should have consistency, rather than being a jumble of different things of spiraling off into different directions.

The stock also needs some sharpening.
Too choppy.

experiment.

 

Jack is back, this time for New Years! i actually wouldn't mind that... anyway, it's looking great1 man, maybe i should try custom sigs and avvys. :)