What's the plan, my man? Are we going to make our final stand? Is the ship going to sink? Or will we somehow end up at an ice rink? Did Shigiku ever forgive Jack? Is Angel ever coming back? Will the helicopter arrive soon? Or is the whole ship doomed? There's no way to tell. Because then the story just won't sell. And who wants a story that sucks? No one, not even us. So what's the plan, my man? This is sort of related to an RP that I'm in...so.....yeah.....it's also my first poem that sort of rhymes. Which explains why it might suck.
That's my favorite part... And the strongest part of your poem, IMO. :) This is a good poem... It rhymes, has good rhythm, and it's funny... Awesome job. :D
Of course they do! Certain parts of a poem show more emotion and feeling than others... And the rhyme scheme's better. :D
