The pit of rage.

Blinded by hatred.
friendless and alone.
Falling and hating.
Into the pit of rage.
But know this.
Dont fall.
Grab my hand.
Dont be blinded.
See the light.
Dont go fallibg into the pit of rage.


Not my best ever...

 

But it's really good, weldone rikusorakairiown I like it

 

Thanks I guess. I only did it because I got in the school newspaper for my poem in the poetry competition.

 

god,i feel like crying (half emo and all no commenting on this please^^)that was great!
this is only music but this song totally goes with your poem!
http://picklfiergabriele.imeem.com/music/ifG221mP/stand_in_the_rain/

 

That was a great poem. I really like it. Well done.

 

I liked it! I LOVE poetry,and that one I can partially relate to..Good Job.

 

Great Poem!! You deserve a rep!

 

Sweet. Emotion-packed poem!

=D