The Organization Fighting Ring. Chapter 1

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How long should Roxas stay unconscious?

  1. 4 hours

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  2. 5 hours

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  3. a whole day

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  4. 2 or 3 whole days

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    The Organization Fighting Ring

    Chapter 1…

    *Main characters:
    Axel, Demyx, Roxas, Larxene, Zexion*

    Axel was waking up from the annoying sounds of his alarm clock.
    “It’s 5 in the morning? Who set my clock?†he thought while turning off the alarm. He lied his head back down to go back to sleep, but Demyx sneaked into his room and scared him to death.

    “BOO!†he yelled.
    “Ahh!†Axel yelled as he fell out of his bed and hit the floor. Axel rubbed the back of his head where he had hit it on the floor.
    “What the heck Demyx?†Axel asked.
    “I don’t know. Xemnas said everyone up at 5 and ready by 6. He is sending 7 of us and himself to the Mishiniuse Training School for four days, and if they succeed on the first trip, they’ll go each week,†Demyx answered. Axel stood up to push Demyx out of his room.
    Axel walked over to the closet and got dressed. He walked out of his room and

    THUMP!

    He was easily knocked over and hit his head on the floor once again.
    “UGH! Why is this happening to me!†he yelled while rubbing his head. He looked up to see Zexion walking with his eyes closed, and with his nightclothes still on. Axel stood up to see Zexion sleepwalking.
    “Zexion?†Axel asked.
    ’ “I m right here! I’ll protect you!†he yelled randomly.
    “What are you talking about?†Axel asked.
    “Run! Save yourself!†he yelled again.
    Axel grabbed his shoulders and shook him.
    “Zexion wake up!†Axel yelled.
    Zexion came to, to see Axel standing in front him with his hands on his shoulder.
    “Are you okay?†Axel asked.
    A teardrop ran down his left cheek. Zexion started stepping back.
    “Zexion, are you okay?†Axel asked. Zexion ran down the hall into his room.
    “Strange kid,†Axel said. He turned around walking but looked back as he continued walking and was worried about him.
    Axel walked into the living room to see everyone half-asleep.
    “When I call your name, go get packed, we will leave in half and hour to the Mishiniuse Training School, Saix, Vexen, Xaldin, Xigbar, Lexaus, Luxord, and Marluxia. I will be your vice coach, and Madame Freseir, will be your head Coach. Axel, Demyx, Roxas, Larxene, and Zexion step forward,†Xemnas stated. 4 of them stood up.
    “Where is Zexion?†Xemnas asked.
    “Umm, he isn’t feeling too well right now. I’ll tell him the announcement,†Axel said.
    “Okay, as you all know, we have recently opened the Fighting Ring. I’m giving you authorization to use it, but if you as so as mess up ANYTHING, I’ll hold one of you responsible for cleaning it up. So I suggest you clean it up BEFORE we get back. Any questions?†Xemnas asked.
    “Uh, yeah! Are you all staying there during the nights?†Axel asked.
    “Yes we are. No more questions? Okay, we are done,†Xemnas said as he walked down the hall to his room.

    As soon as everyone was ready, the 8 organization members headed off into Xemnas’s Corridor of Darkness.
    “Alright, let’s vote. Who’s going back to bed?†Axel asked. Everyone raised their hands.
    “I thought so,†Axel said.

    After Axel and Roxas got a good sleep, they were the 2 of the first ones up. Only those two and Zexion were up. Axel walked into the Kitchen to see Zexion looking at some spell books, and Roxas trying to work the stove.
    “Did you try stopping him?†asked Axel to Zexion.
    “Yep,†Zexion said not looking up.
    “He didn’t listen?†asked Axel again.
    “Nope,†Zexion said still not looking up.
    “I can hear you, ya know!†Roxas yelled turning knobs on the stove.
    Axel sighed. He was trying to fix toast.
    “I don’t know how to do his. Now I will never get my toast!â€
    Zexion looked up and looked at Roxas. When Roxas looked over, both he and Axel were looking at him.
    “What?†Roxas asked.
    “Nothing,†Axel said. Axel walked over to the stove and turned off all the burners.
    “Hey Roxas, Zexion, lets go to the fighting ring,†Axel said.
    “Sure!†yelled Roxas with excitement.
    “Whatever,†Zexion said closing his book and getting up.
    They entered the Fighting Ring room and saw a huge cage, like a wrestlers cage…
    “Have you ever been in here before Zexion?†Axel asked.
    “No, but I heard that this place is haunting though,†Zexion said.
    “I’ll fight!†Roxas said.
    “I will too,†Zexion said getting his Spell book…
    Axel stood out and locked the door to the cage using a key lock.
    “Is that really necessary?†Roxas asked.
    “Yeah, in case one of you chicken out!†Axel said.
    Zexion and Roxas walked to the middle of the ring and got out their weapons.
    Roxas threw the first hit…but Zexion reflected it….
    Roxas ran up to try and knock him down, but failed, instead, Zexion turned around in mid-air, knocked both keyblades out of Roxas’s hands and hit him against the wall. Roxas’s back sat against the wall and Zexion ran up to pull him up. He grabbed his neck, lifted him off his feet and started to choke him…
    *Flashback*

    “Run!†yelled 13 year old Zexion to his younger sister…
    “I can’t run anymore!†she said…
    “Come on Meehaa!†Zexion said as he put her on his back… 4 boys were chasing them, and was wanting to hurt Zexion. Zexion tripped and his sister went rolling. She got up and tried to run, but the tall boy grabbed her long blonde hair.
    “Ahh! Meehaa!†she yelled.
    “Don’t worry Ariel!†he yelled as he got up but another boy kicked him in the ribs…
    The boy who was holding Ariel’s hair punched her in the face and knocked her out.
    “Meehaa!†he yelled as he got up….

    *End Flashback*

    Zexion was lost in his memories and couldn’t hear Roxas or Axel yelling…
    “Zexion drop him!†Axel yelled.
    Roxas’s face went from peach to pale. He was gasping for air and was using his arms to try and get off him. His face turned blue with a little white mixed in.
    “Zexion….please….put….me down….,†Roxas said!
    “ZEXION!!!!!†Axel yelled. He tied to melt the lock on the door, but it wouldn’t. He grabbed the sizzling hot lock and tried to break it off.
    Roxas was coughing…..he couldn’t breathe.
    “I’ll protect you!†Zexion yelled. A tear went down the left side of his cheek again.
    Roxas’s eyes were beginning to close slowly. He laid his arms down his sides…
    “Zexion...please!†Roxas begged as he whispered. Axel then broke off the lock. He slammed open the door and ran into the ring. It seemed as it was forever to get to Roxas, but when he did, he rammed into Zexion, which caused Roxas to drop. Zexion was knocked unconscious and Axel turned his attention to Roxas.
    He was lying in the floor with his motionless body. Axel kneeled down next to Roxas and set him in his arms.
    “Don’t die on me Roxas! Don’t die!†he yelled. He wasn’t breathing.
    “SOMEONE HELP!†Axel yelled. A few seconds later, Demyx and Larxene ran into the room.
    “What happened?†Demyx asked as soon as he reached them…
    Axel had a teardrop go down his cheek. He set Roxas back on the ground.
    “He…he is… dead,†Axel said softly.
    Larxene looked at Roxas’s motionless body and thought of an idea.
    “No he’s not!†Larxene yelled. She knelt doweside Roxas and put her hands on his chest. She used her hands and pushed on his chest, to stimulate his breathing. She sent shockwaves throughout his body. His eyes started to open and he started gasping for air, coughing, and he grabbed his neck. He sat up.
    “Roxas!†Axel yelled as he hugged his best friend.
    “Thanks Axel,†he said weakly before falling into his arms semi-unconscious.
    “ROXAS!†Axel yelled.

    Will he be all right? What will happen to Zexion? And will Roxas ever get to eat his toast?? We shall see.
     
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    nice story bravo
     
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    Thank you !!!!!!!

    It didn't take me long to write it!
    I'll be posting the 2nd chapter in a little while!!! Whenever SOME poeple actually gice me votes! lol
     
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    Nice! Can't wait to read the rest! :D
     
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    love it, glad u found it now because all chapter are up so i havent got to wait :D
     
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    man is roxas thick he tried to make toast on a stove that just shows you how much of an braindead:D he but i hope he dosent die :(