The Organization’s Forbidden Love

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    The Organization’s Forbidden Love



    Busy as always, Larxene was rushing around her room, looking for her Diary. She seemed to have misplaced it. But how could she? This was her first time misplacing it… Or wasn’t it? She always had it on the pedestal in her room. She walked out of her room and down the hall, to a large door that leads to the meeting room. She heard chattering, then laughter. What was it that she was missing out on except her……?
    “Oh no,” she thought. She put his ear lightly to the door, and heard her secrets spill out, her true feelings.

    “Demyx is a baby, Roxas is a brat, and Xigbar won’t face the fact that he is too old to act like a teenager. Xemnas’ hair has too many spilt ends, and Axel can’t make toast right” she heard someone that sounded like Marluxia talking. He was reading her dairy! She leaned against the door to listen more, but it opened suddenly. She fell forwards and almost let out a small shriek, but someone caught her and put his hand over her lips. The door shut silently. Larxene looked up and saw a light blue eyes covered with silver hair. His index finger brushed along her pink lips.

    “I was just on my way to tell you that Marluxia snuck in your room and got your diary,” he whispered. His voice was so calm and smooth, and she adored it. Had they gotten to the part where she spills her feelings for Zexion? She put her hand on his and pulled it down from her lips.

    “Who is in there?” she asked. Zexion’s smile turned pleasantly.

    “Don’t worry, its only Marluxia and Vexen in there. No one else wanted to hear your secrets,” he said. He then turned and put Larxene back on her feet. He opened the door for her and led her in. Once they were both inside, Marluxia and Vexen both looked scared. Their faces went pale, and their lips curdled. Larxene’s eyes filled with evil anger, and she smiled with satisfaction.

    “Hello boys, or should I say ‘dust’, by the time I’m finished with you,” she said. Her kunai appeared in her hand and lightning swarmed around her hands. She sent a bolt down next to Marluxia and Vexen. Marluxia jumped up and almost hit the ceiling. They both dropped her dairy and ran out. Larxene chuckled and picked up her diary. She then turned back to Zexion with a smile. She walked towards him with her diary in her hands.

    “Thank you Zexion,” she said, and then blushed as she smiled. He noticed it and smiled. He got closer to her and put his index finger under her chin, tilting her face towards him. He was only inches away from her face. He smiled and got closer. Larxene’s eyes got wide and she blushed.

    “You’re very welcome Larxene,” he said then slowly put his lips on hers. He kissed her softly until she lost control of her balance. Her knees gave out and she slowly fell, but Zexion caught her.

    “Larxene, are you okay?” he asked, worried. She nodded and put her hand up to her head, shaking away her dizziness.

    “Yes, I’m fine,” she said looking down. Zexion pulled her up gently and held his arm around her waist to support her.

    “You don’t look well… Maybe you should rest?” he asked. She shook her head no, as the last bit of her dizziness was shook away. She smiled and leaned her head against his shoulder. He chuckled and kissed her forehead.

    “Sorry,” he said then took his arm off her waist.

    “Will you be okay for now?” he asked. She nodded and took a step away.

    “If you ever need anything, just shout for me, okay?” he asked as he held her hand. She nodded softly, and he kissed the top of her hand.

    “Okay then. I’ll see you later,” he said then walked away from site, leaving her to gather up her thoughts
     
  2. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    Aw, so cute. <3

    You have a way with words. I could see it all happenin as if I was watching a movie. Great job.


    For some reason though, I started to think of Bella and Edward from 'Twilight' when I was reading the last few paragraphs. xD


    Once again, great job. I liked it a lot. ^^

    Do you plan on continuing? If so, I would definately read more.
     
  3. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Woah! that was very good. I mean it I want more
     
  4. Yukai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Wow. That's really good... o_o

    =D I agreez. MORE PLEASE.
     
  5. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    I'm glad you like my story =]


    Chapter 2



    It was raining, and the lighting boomed as Larxene sat at the castle alone with Zexion and Roxas in another room training. It was very dark and she could sense something much greater coming. But what was it? She heard a few scratches coming from a lot of places..

    “Hello?” she asked as she heard something move across her doorway. She stood up and walked over to it, looking to see what was making the noise. The training room was way downstairs and she was near the top of the castle. She opened the door and looked out into the hallway. The door creaked as it opened and she became frightened. Something black quickly shot across the door. She looked at it and her eyes got wide. More of them appeared. They were black with yellow eyes… Shadow Heartless surrounded her doorway. She was too terrified to let out any yell, but one jumped towards her. Her kunai appeared in her hands and she slashed it away. More and more appeared next to her door. They charged into the room and jumped everywhere, destroying her room. She let out a faint yell, and tripped over her own feet. She stood up quickly and backed up towards the window. About four jumped at her at the same time and pushed her right out the window. She let out a loud yell this time, as she dropped 50 feet before grabbing onto the ledge. She let out a loud yell, as the rain and thunder shook the ground. The rain made it difficult to hold onto the ledge, and she was almost about to cry.

    “Larxene!!” Zexion shouted as he saw her, through the open window of her room. The heartless were about to jump him, but Roxas came and began to attack them. Zexion jumped out the window, landing on the ledge. He didn’t seem to stumble or anything. But he made it as far as he could, and it was almost to Larxene. He leaned down and reached his hand out.

    “Grab my hand!” he shouted at her. She held onto the ledge with her one hand and pulled her other hand up, trying to hard to grab his hand. Her fingertips touched his and she pushed herself up more. Her hand slipped on the ledge, and she began to fall. She let out a small yell, but Zexion pushed himself and grabbed her hand right before she fell anymore. She hanged off the ledge and Zexion grabbed her hand with both of his, pulling her up. Once Larxene was close enough, he pushed her through a window which led into the hallway. Then Zexion jumped through and landed beside Larxene. He examined her to make sure she was okay. Her clothes were soaked, and her face was scratched from the heartless jumping on her.

    “Are you okay Larxene?” he asked as he wrapped his arms around her comfortingly. She put her arms around him and dug her face into his chest and she sobbed quietly. He felt her stifled sobs, and he put his hand on her back, comfortingly.

    “It’s okay Larxene, you’re okay. Nothing can hurt you now,” he whispered to her. He tilted her head up, and saw the tears running down her face. He wiped them away with his finger, and pulled her close to him.

    “It’s okay to cry now. There’s no one here but you and me,” he said as he stood up, helping Larxene up. He held her closely with is arms around her…

    “It’s okay,” was the last thing Larxene heard, before she cried herself to sleep in his arms
     
  6. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    Great. I only saw one error. You said she had a heart.
     
  7. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    Oh.. I'll fix that ;)

    Thank you ^_^
     
  8. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    I lurv. There were a few grammatical arrors and such, ut no one can catch 'em all...

    "POKEMON!"

    *brick't*

    Anyways... Yeah.

    Good job. XD
     
  9. Pure Beats~ Chaser

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    I love this. Great job. I never really thought of Larxene and Zexion pairing up...but I like it. You're great at this. I only noticed one error though.

    You forgot to put the 'h' in 'his'. Besides that, there were no errors.
     
  10. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Those two chapter were beautiful...*coughZ* um yeah thats what you read! Lol That was great I can feel the tingling in my stomach:D (which is a good thing) I can't wait for your next chapter:D
     
  11. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Oh, this is wonderful...and I have always loved the pairing of LarxenexZexion! Oh, but in the first part, once, you accidentally spelled 'diary' as 'dairy' but anyhow...awesome job! :) I can't wait to see what happens next!!​
     
  12. Amethyst Grave Hollow Bastion Committee

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    This is good! Keep 'em coming!
     
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    Chapter 3

    It was continuously dark, as darkness blurred into her vision. She awoke in her bed. Her room was cleaned. How long has she been out? She looked around and saw she was all alone. She got up and ran over to her door. She opened it and walked out into the hallway. It was quiet. She took a slow step out of her room. She could hear the wind blowing. She slowly walked down the lonely hallway, looking for someone.

    “Hello?” she asked as she saw another shadow. Her eyes got wide. The shadow was getting bigger and bigger against the wall facing a hallway. Zexion popped from the corner and saw Larxene. He held in his hand a candle. He smiled and walked over towards Larxene.

    “Hey, are you feeling better?” he asked as he titled her face to his. She nodded and hugged him. He pulled his free hand around her and comforted her. He smiled and kissed her forehead.

    “I’m glad to see you are better,” he said soothingly as he warmed her up in his arm. He set the candle on a very small nightstand table that set in the hallway, and he put his other arm around her.

    “The power was knocked out just a few minutes ago, and I was on my way to check up on you. Xemnas and the others are stuck on their mission, and they won’t be back until the rain clears out, which will be a few more days,” he said smiling. Larxene grinned and her eyes sparkled. She put her head against Zexion’s chest and she closed her eyes, inhaling his scent. Zexion liked this. He actually thought he felt happiness. He took her hand in his, and grabbed the candle.

    “Let’s head back downstairs. Roxas is going to be in Twilight Town for a few days, and we have this place all to ourselves,” he said smiling. He pulled Larxene with him as they both headed downstairs. Candles were lit everywhere, and the lights looked completely blown. They sat in the living room on the couch. Zexion was first to sit down, and once Larxene sat down, Zexion pulled her on top of him, as he lay down. The couch was pretty big, and Zexion lay down on the side, as he pulled Larxene into his arms, cuddling next to her. He kissed the back of her neck, and sent tingles down her body. She shivered and he felt it.

    “Are you cold?” he asked as he hugged her tighter keeping her in his warm grasp.

    “No, your attempt at emotion just startled me,” she said. Zexion chuckled and put her hand in his.

    “Are you still tired?” Zexion asked. He stroked her cheek and kissed her hand. Larxene blushed and looked down.

    “Yes, I’m still very tired,” she said, almost ready to yawn. Zexion pulled his arm around her waist. And pulled her as close as she could be to him. Zexion hummed something in her ear, something soft and soothing. Larxene’s eyes got heavier by the second. She smiled, and she turned to see Zexion’s face. He smiled, and his eyes sparkled as they gazed into hers. She leaned in as close as she could get, to barley touch the soft edges of his lips. He leaned in more to make the kiss whole. Larxene thought she felt something rip through her body. It wasn’t a heartbeat, but it almost felt like one. The kiss drifted off, as Zexion broke it off gently, unnoticeable, and he continued with his lullaby. Soon, Larxene was asleep in his arms.
     
  14. Amethyst Grave Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thats Cute!
     
  15. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Ooh...nice...I love it, keep them coming! :) Oh, and I especially love how you portrayed Larxene, disliking to show her 'emotions', and her line of , "No, your attempt at emotion just startled me." Great job again, keep it up! XD​
     
  16. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    you show great writing style. I like this very much.
     
  17. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I can't wait for the next chapter this is getting so interesting!!! Lovin'it!
     
  18. Donaut Banned

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    This is what me and my friends call a lovey dovey story. It's an okay story. Just seen too many around lately.
     
  19. Sexy Sheva Banned

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    lol

    you should see my Spilt Blood Story, its all about romance lol
     
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    i love em' can't wait till the next one!
     
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