The Organisation: A legend reborn

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  1. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Just a note
    This is an rp which only uses the storyline as a guideline; use it as a building block, if you wish. Everything else that happens, such as fights, romance and other occurrences are up to you. Just don’t get too carried away with your imagination; make it make sense to others other than yourself, and make it subtle... Y’know, PG-13 stuff. I’m sure you’ve heard this all before, anyway.

    Okay, here we go.

    Organisation VIII, having been defeated, are sent to the underworld. They were sent there to perish there for all they have done.
    Here’s the twist.
    They didn’t suffer, they didn’t stay there. There was a glitch.
    Instead, the organisation were reincarnated and sent back into the world. What will happen now? Who is born where and when? Have their names changed?
    That’s for you to decide.
    But life isn’t going to be one straight road; the mistake the underworld made has been identified, and “retrievers” have been sent to capture the members once again.
    Which side will you join?

    Here are the rules:
    • Change the member’s name, if you wish. And change their looks little, but keep them close to their original form.
    • Keep it PG-13; meaning, no sexual themed stuff, although putting innuendo’s into certain scenes is okay.
    • NO GODMODDING. FOR GODS-SAKE. ITS ANNOYING D8<
    • Don’t start arguing over sh!t.
    • If out of character, do the ((OOC :)) thing.
    • Don’t be bashing other rp’s whilst here. Please.
    • I want good grammar and spelling. I have an OCD for them.
    • No one-liners. Go into detail, if you must. Just don’t be going all: He walked across the hall and sat down. << That annoys hell outta me.
    • Have fun. That’s the main thing. Don’t be too serious.
    • Say Silly Piggy at the end of reading this is your post [:


    OC Form:

    Organisation member:
    Username:
    Name:
    Original Organisation characters name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Description: (what has changed?)
    Picture: (optional)
    Weapon: (picture optional)
    Preview Post:


    Underworld Retriever:

    Username:
    Name:
    Age:
    Gender:
    Weapon:
    Rank: (from 10 – 3, 1 being the highest (but I’m not allowing high ranks, or there will be God-modding happening, 10 being a new officer)
    Bio:
    Personality:
    Description:
    Preview post:


    I'll add my own when we are about to start [:

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    Retreivers:

    Username: The road to Darkness
    Name: Braxen
    Age: 22
    Gender: Male
    Weapons: http://i31.tinypic.com/350s0sk.jpg Rapture of souls
    http://i29.tinypic.com/etzk0n.jpg Last Judgement
    Rank: 1
    Bio: his love was taken from him at the age of 16 and he now wants nothing more than to make people feel the same pain he did
    Personality: he has an Axel almost personality, he is friendly but loves to fight
    Description:
    Preview post: you know how i RP ^^

    Username: SoraNRikuNKairi
    Name: Luciana Bellamont
    Age: 21
    Gender: Female
    Weapon: Ebony Blade (It drains the strength of target on strike, glows a greenish colour when sheathed) http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/j...EbonyBlade.jpg
    Rank: Um...You told me 3...but I'll be the next highest thats not taken..I think it's five?
    Bio: When she was killed as a child, the underworld enforcers took her and trained her, leading her to effectively become a trained assassin.
    Personality: She's quite mature, always keeps to herself. Her personality can be quite dark at times, but she can sometimes be normal.
    Description: Does that mean appearance? >80
    Preview post:
    Luciana fiddled with the bottom of her scythes handle, gently fingering the design, all the while thinking. Her eyes flickered around the room, settling on the the small table, overcrowded with papers. The dull lighting kept most of the room in dark, but she clearly saw what she intended to.

    Underworld Retriever:
    Username: dialgataffy
    Name: Sky
    Age: 19
    Gender: Male
    Weapon: Green Lightsaber
    Rank: 2
    Bio: He lives a happy life with his twin sister Kristen in Twilight Town.
    Personality: Calm, Kind, slow to anger, Sky is willing to go on an adventure but never without his twin sister Kristen, The thing that irritates him the most is when people threaten to bring harm to his twin sister Kristen.
    Description:
    Preview post: "Sky lets go get some ice cream." Kristen said "Ok that sounds like a good idea." Sky said Sky and Kristen left the house locking the door behind them. "So what did you think of that movie we went and saw last night?" Kristen asked Sky as they were walking "Terminator Salvation you mean?" Sky asked "Yep" replied Kristen "I thought it was a good movie." Sky said "What did you think of it?" Sky asked Kristen "I thought it was a great movie." Kristen said


    Underworld Retriever:
    Username: dialgataffy
    Name: Kristen
    Age: 19
    Gender: female
    Weapon: Blue Lightsaber
    Rank: 3
    Bio: She lives a happy life with her twin brother Sky in Twilight Town.
    Personality: Calm, Kind, slow to anger, Kristen is willing to go on an adventure but never without her twin brother Sky, The thing that irritates her most is when people threaten to bring harm to her twin brother Sky.
    Description:
    Preview post: "Sky lets go get some ice cream." Kristen said "Ok that sounds like a good idea." Sky said Sky and Kristen left the house locking the door behind them. "So what did you think of that movie we went and saw last night?" Kristen asked Sky as they were walking "Terminator Salvation you mean?" Sky asked "Yep" replied Kristen "I thought it was a good movie." Sky said "What did you think of it?" Sky asked Kristen "I thought it was a great movie." Kristen said

    Username: The Road to Darkness
    Name: Kexant (Kenta)
    Age: 20
    Gender: Male
    Weapon: Oblivion blade (large sword that looks like it drips black blood, has smoke that rises from it), and the keyblade of illusion
    Rank: what ever is open, 4 i think
    Bio: he has served under Braxen for years as his apprentice. he is obedient and listens to his superior
    Personality: he is quiet, but a strong fighter. he never removes his armor, or his helmet even. it is a sworn oath to him.


    Organisation members:


    Username: water mage
    Name: Myde
    Original Organisation characters name: Demyx
    Age: 19
    Gender: Male
    Description: Basically looks the same except he has blue streaks on the tips of his points with black streaks on the longer parts of his mullet. He wears the same black organization cloak but now parts of it are blue. He pefers to be called Demyx.

    Weapon: Sitar remains to be able to control water, but can also can heal injuries and illness and can transform into a water dragon when seriously prevoked.
    Preview Post: See signature except with different hair color of black and blue tips.
    Personality: Still the same fun loving guy he was before, but now his other entity doesn't take **** from anyone and is more aggressive and dangerous when he fights. Due to his new look, he has become more cocky to those indivduals who deserve it.


    Username: hercules
    Name: Saixen
    Original Organisation characters name:Saix
    Age: 32
    Gender:Male
    Description: His Scar has gone and now uses two claymores he also wears a green and black hoody
    Picture: (optional)
    Weapon: Dual Weild Clamores
    Preview Post: u know
    Personality: Usally grumpy very rarlay Nice/calm

    Username: fire mage
    Name: Ale
    Original Organisation characters name: Axel
    Age: 19-21?
    Gender: Male
    Description: Basically looks the same except he has black streaks through his hair mixed with red. Black organization, but now has hints of red in it. Pefers to be called Axel.

    Weapon: Chakrams, fire, but also can control lava.
    Preview Post: Same thing except picturing him with black streaks.
    Personality: Can be serious and dangerous, loves to fight but often times can be nice depending on the attitude of the individual he is with.

    Username: Roxas81334
    Name: Roxas
    Original Organisation characters name: Roxas
    Age: 15-17???
    Gender: male
    Description: Roxas's hair has changed from blonde to black, his eyes changed from a Deep Blue to a icey blue/Gold color.
    Weapon: He has the same weapons.
    Preview Post: Same but instead of Roxas being blonde with blue eyes he has black hair with icey blue/gold eyes.

    Username: Dexnail
    Name: Leo (was Xeol)
    Age: 17
    appearance: has light brown hair(was a dark brown) that is short in the back and his sides are normal langth(use to reach his caller bone) his front stops at his eyebrows, has green eyes wears an silver hoody, and black fadded jeans
    Gender: Male
    Weapons: fogged memories(a very sharp dagger)
    power: able to control and create fog and able to turn into his element and able to turn fog into daggers
    Bio: In the past Leo was the nobody named Xeol. Xeol and the other organization members escaped the underworld. He been living in twilight town since he came back. He could not move back to his parents house cause in Leo's past before he became Xeol his parents got killed by heartless. On some occasion he sees dusk stalking him but they never attack in the few months he came back as Leo he became afraid of his past.

    Username: Cstar7777
    Name: Mixya
    Age: 14
    Gender: Female
    Weapon: Armblade
    Rank: (from 10 – 3, 1 being the highest (but I’m not allowing high ranks, or there will be God-modding happening, 10 being a new officer): 4(thats not too high right?)
    Bio: original name Yami.. Mixya was created in one of the top weirdest ways of being created.. she was created when her someone had touched hands with her other half hikari.. Hikari, Yami, and hikari's nobodies Kahixri and Kaze all died off..
    Personality: Hyper, Over confident, Wild Card, Shy, and can be Angry
    Description: (i'll just show a pic)
    Preview post: Mixya looked around seeing everyone fleeing then she sees a heartless running by "Hey! i thought you all were dead!" she then grabs out her armblade and starts chasing after it.

    Underworld Retriever:
    Username: Ryan Finesse
    Name: Zalia
    Age: 18
    Gender: female
    Weapon: Chains that can form into different weapons
    Rank: (from 10 – 3, 1 being the highest (but I’m not allowing high ranks, or there will be God-modding happening, 10 being a new officer) 7
    Bio: Zalia, used to be called Liaa, was killed by a ship accident. A chain fell on her head in a storm, and killed her immediately. Her soul went to the underworld, and Hades needed people to be retrievers, so she was picked. Her punishment from the underworld was that she would forever be reminded of her death, and her power was chains.
    Personality: Moodswings, from completely depressed and not speaking, to slightly happy.
    Description: Green, messed hair that reaches to her shoulders. Has a black shell in her hair, which glows green. Black eyes, pale skin. Skinny, has black dress, with shoulders, back, and stomach showing. Wears black cape most of the time, with black hood. Cape wraps around her completely, but not showing her body form, like a small tent, with black boots showing at the bottom, and a black hood. The tent is held up by chains.

    Username: The road to Darkness
    Name: Llednar Twem
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male
    power: Omega (deals dark and holy damage consecutively)
    Magi (uses royal ancestry to access various magics)
    Liferender (Releases the soul from the body, creates exact replica of target)
    Weapon: a large knightsword
    Bio: Llednar is an embodiment of a prince of a foreign land. He was given unimaginable power from the prince to be his bodyguard. he left his side with his new found power and took on the job of enforcing his own ideas. He has an inhumanly high endurance and can withstand a beating, but it is only to the extent of the barrier...
    Personality: he is talkative and has a strong lust for blood. he will not back down from a fight but is very headstrong and will rush into a fight alone
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    owners OC's

    retriever:
    Name: Wolfe vandetta
    Age: 22
    Gender: female
    Weapon: Large black scythe containing darkness
    Rank: 1
    Bio: she is head of the retrievers, and has been for the majority of her life.
    Personality: she is sarcastic and loud, loves a good fight.
    Description: short, spiked black hair. glasses. she is short, and slim.

    Organisation member(s)

    Name: Larenta
    Original Organisation characters name: Larxene
    Age: 22
    Gender: female
    Description: she now has bright blue hair and green eyes.
    Weapon: nothing of her weapons have changed.

    Name: Marlix
    Original Organisation characters name: Marluxia
    Age: 23
    Gender: male
    Description:he is relatively the same, but he has a side-fringe now that is similar to zexions.
    Weapon: still the same

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    Okay, new area of this thing. Pictures of the members.
    Obviously, I won't post pictures of org XIII because we all know what they look like, but I shall post pics of the other chars.

    Demyx in dragon form: [​IMG]
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    Wolfe, The head in command of the retreivers: [​IMG]

    Braxen, Wolfe's partner in crime [:
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  2. Smackdoodle McGiggles Hollow Bastion Committee

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    silly piggy

    Can i just use Braxen?

    EDIT: if this RP is like only original ORG XIII members can i be #1 of the underworld guys please ^^
     
  3. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Braxen is your OC, right? :) Well, could you fill out the form, just so when other people (or if other people) join they can have a better understanding? :D

    thanks for joining btw :glomp:

    once you fill out either of the forms,

    accepted!
     
  4. Smackdoodle McGiggles Hollow Bastion Committee

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    sure thing :D your like one of the people who always joins my RPs ^^

    Username: The road to Darkness
    Name: Braxen
    Age: 22
    Gender: Male
    Weapons: http://i31.tinypic.com/350s0sk.jpg Rapture of souls
    http://i29.tinypic.com/etzk0n.jpg Last Judgement
    Rank: 1
    Bio: his love was taken from him at the age of 16 and he now wants nothing more than to make people feel the same pain he did
    Personality: he has an Axel almost personality, he is friendly but loves to fight
    Description: [​IMG]
    Preview post: you know how i RP ^^
     
  5. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ooc: you're in ^^ I know you have alot of friends in other rp's.. invite them if you want :) your choice though.

    thanks again :glomp: x
     
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    sure ill see if the other members of our KHV RP cult will join xD
     
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    can i join?

    Username: hercules
    Name: Saixen
    Original Organisation characters name:Saix
    Age: 32
    Gender:Male
    Description: His Scar has gone and now uses two claymores he also wears a green and black hoody
    Picture: (optional)
    Weapon: Dual Weild Clamores
    Preview Post: u know
    Personality: Usally grumpy very rarlay Nice/calm
     
  8. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ((ooc: okay, I would loves you to join, IF you change his name a bit more please. could you describe what he's wearing, perhaps? ^^ thanks for joining btw :glomp: )
     
  9. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    Kay ill fix it
     
  10. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thankyou :D you've been added.


    note: remember, this rp doesn't do one-liners.. >.> just a reminder.
     
  11. Feenie Finny, Fin of the Feenie Fish

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    Ok

    Silly Pig
     
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    Username: fire mage
    Name: Ale
    Original Organisation characters name: Axel
    Age: 19-21?
    Gender: Male
    Description: Basically looks the same except he has black streaks through his hair mixed with red. Black organization, but now has hints of red in it. Pefers to be called Axel.

    Weapon: Chakrams, fire, but also can control lava.
    Preview Post: Same thing except picturing him with black streaks.
    Personality: Can be serious and dangerous, loves to fight but often times can be nice depending on the attitude of the individual he is with.

    Silly Piggy
     
  13. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ACCEPTED! :)

    okay... we just need some people to work for the underworld....

    I'll add my own OC's in now, anyways..
     
  14. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    accepted :) welcome to the rp...

    we can start now. I will post in a few minutes :D

    Marlex looked around, confused and slightly hysteric. "w-w-where am I?" he asked rhetorically, standing up from the grass he once lay upon. his eyes scanned around his enviroment, then finally landed on larenta. he let out a sigh of relief and approached her. "larxene?"

    Larxene turned, looking at Marluxia. "I-I'm not Larxene....I'm Larenta" she stammered. "but I recognise the name..." she gasped, realising who the pink haired man was infront of her. "MARLUXIA!" she gasped, hugging him tightly.

    "I'm not marluxia..." he mumbled. "I'm Marlex..."
     
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    Ale looked at his surrounding as well. He wondered why he was here and who was responsible for everything. He didn't have amnesia, but he couldn't quite remember why he was here as well. He saw two people that he thought he knew as he jugdged them carefully. He remembered them as Larxene and Marluxia, but he thought they looked different somehow. "Do you guys know how we got here in the first place?"
     
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    Larenta turned, looking at the black and red haired man infront of her. she felt a slight twinge of hate towards him. the word traitor came to mind. she searched through her memory banks.

    "Axel?" Marlia asked, raising an eyebrow. "is that you?" he looked at Larenta, smiling. he recognised Axel instantly. he walked towards him, his bare feet treading on the grass softly.


    ooc: wolfe = girl XD

    Wolfe turned, a furious look on her pale face. "yes I heard about it..." she snapped. "this is twice them idiots have done this to us, and now we have to go and find them, kill them, and bring them back." she sighed, taking off her glasses and rubbing her eyes. "I need a vodka, I really do." she sighed, looking at the clipboard in her hand.
     
  17. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ooc: already replied to it.. :P read my previos post... I'll brb :)
     
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    Wolfe shook her head. "No idea...it depends on how they've changed. they could be totally differant to what they used to look like before their reancarnation. they've basically given us the impossible task." she sighed, putting the clipboard down.
     
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    Ale looked at Marluxia. "Yeah, but I go by another name called Ale. I still like to be called Axel though." He replied looking back at him. He noticed that Larxene was more distant towards him, but he shrugged it off. "I am guessing both of your names have changed as well?" He noticed the fringe that Marluxia had and the bright blue hair from Larxene.
     
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    He nodded. "Marlix for me...." he sighed. looking to the floor. "this new fringe is.... annoying." he shook his head. "...weren't we supposed to go to hell?" he looked at the two, confused.

    She nodded with marluxia. "Larensa...I think..." she shook her head. "I feel so confused." she shook it off and looked at axel. "I remember you now..." she growled slightly, clenching her fists.
     
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