Its definitely got potential. you should tone down that brightness and up the contrast between the midtones. all that white is killin it.
^ what he said xD I was expecting more when you said it pwned all our tags xD I can't make out the render anyways. v1 is 7/10
Oh yaaay, you're still graphicking! I like V2 best! The colors look more blended and united, which gives it a nice feel. And like C4E said, tone down a little more the Brightness/Contrast (: Neat stuff!