The Nobody's Secret

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  1. KATACHI IS KING!! Hollow Bastion Committee

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    well here it is. finally decided to make a stry. (gramer and speling wil B corect) hope u like it
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    The Nobody's Secret

    "Wretched... Keyblade" Xemnas said as the Ragenkork passed through his body.

    As Sora and Riku left the area, the darkness began forming. "So my Replicas of the Organization failed to destroy Sora and Riku. Pathetic. I shall alert the rest of Organization XIII. I guess since Roxas is gone, it should be called Organization XII," said the voice of Vexen. Vexen opened a portal and walked into the meeting room of the Organization.

    "Were the Replicas sucessful?" asked Xemnas

    "No. They defeated every single one," Vexen answered.

    "What about the Roxas Replica? Is it done?" requested Marluxia.

    "I didn't have enough information on him," Vexen retorted.

    "Very well Vexen. I shall give you another chance to defeat Sora and Riku. But do not fail me this time," Xemnas opened a portal to Destiny Islands. Vexen walked through. He stepped out onto the shore. He saw Sora, Riku, and Kairi on the small island. Vexen walked over to the Island.

    "Hello Sora, Riku," he said.

    "What? You again? Didn't I destroy you before?" Riku summoned The Way to the Dawn.

    "You still don't understand a thing do you?" Vexen summoned his shield. Riku charged and struck at Vexen. Vexen blocked the attack and laughed histerically.

    "Whats so funny?" Riku demanded.

    "You have no idea who you're up against," Vexen chuckled.

    "I was about to say the same thing," Riku told him.


    This is the Prologue of a 13 chapter story.​
     
  2. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    That was so cool!!!I can't wait for more, if there is more!!!:D
    Lov'in this!
     
  3. C This silence is mine

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    Oh god the color I can't even read it without killing my eyes
     
  4. KATACHI IS KING!! Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Right um... heres the first chapter. and it will not have the blue. something easier to read.

    Chapter 1: Vexen

    "RIKU!" Sora shouted.

    "Ah yes maybe I can get some data on Roxas," Vexen mumbled to himself. Sora summoned the Kingdom Key.

    "Leave us alone! We already defeated you once so we can do it again," he shouted.

    "You two really are slow. Just like when I made the Riku Replica I also made Replicas of all of Organization XIII except for Roxas," Vexen chuckled.

    "I'm getting sick of hearing you talk," Riku stated. He launched a Dark Aura at Vexen. It hit him right in the chest.

    "I'll admit you have gotten a bit stronger. But I shall still destroy you without breaking a sweat," Vexen chuckled. He shoot a wave of cold at Riku. Riku stuck his keyblade up to defend himself. Sora jumped into the air and slashed Vexen down the center.

    "Sora! You actually managed to ruffle my hood a bit. I'm amazed," Vexen said, astonished. Sora and Riku stood side by side and began attacking at Vexen who contiued to dodge the attacks.

    "Why can't we hit him?" Riku asked.

    "I dunno but maybe if we-"

    "You mean the Eternal Setion?" Riku interupted.

    "Exactlly," Sora answered. The two slashed Vexen repeatidly. They continued to pull off many other moves.

    "And for the grand finale-" Vexen suddenly froze Riku where he stood.

    "RIKU!" Sora shouted. He shot a Ragenkork out of his keyblade right into Vexen's chest.

    "You win, Sora," Vexen said as he faded away.
     
  5. the darkness consumes you Moogle Assistant

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    wo bot chptrs wr good. cnt wait 4 more
     
  6. KATACHI IS KING!! Hollow Bastion Committee

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    well heres chptr 2. srry it tuk so long i just had 2 get a few mr ideas.
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    Chapter 2: Luxord

    Vexen reappeared before Xemnas.

    "You have failed me Vexen," Xemnas said, displeased.

    "Please Xemnas. Give me one more chance," Vexen begged.

    "Hmmm... Lexeaus. Put Vexen out of his misery," Xemnas commanded.

    "As you wish," Lexeaus slashed through Vexen with his weapon.

    "Luxord, go," Xemnas commanded.

    Luxord opened a portal without a word and found Sora and RIku.

    "You two? Why didn't you disappear?" Sora asked.

    "That is none of your concern Sora. You should be more worried about your friend." Luxord poined to Riku who had been turned into a card.

    "CHANGE HIM BACK!" Sora shouted.

    "Defeat me and I'll consider it," Luxord responded. Sora summoned the Oathkeeper. Luxord pulled out a hand of cards.

    "Let's begin the game," Luxord threw a bunch of dice into the air. He jumped and formed into one of them. Sora blasted a Ragenkork at the dice. He did not hit Luxord.

    "Where the hell are you?" Sora demanded.

    "Why this wouldn't be fun if you knew. Go cards!" Luxord sent a bunch of cards flying at Sora. Sora was only able to dodge a few.

    "Very good Sora. But not good enough," Luxord turned himself into a card and many more cards appeared on the ground.

    "Now can you find which one is me?" Luxord laughed. Sora began stabbing at card after card but he couldn't find Luxord.

    "Come out you Nobody!" Sora shouted.

    "As you wish," Luxord rose from the card and created a large barrier.

    "Now the real gambling begins!" Luxord laughed.

    "I'm sick of hearing you talk," Sora said. He ran up and cut down the barrier and Luxord with it. Luxord began to fade into the nothingness. Riku turned back to normal.

    "Hey Sora we should look for where these Organization XIII members are coming from. It seems like they are all still alive," Riku said.

    "Well then we better get to the Gummi ship and tell the King about this," Sora said as he raced off to the ship.


    well dats chptr 2. chptr 3 is coming soon. (most likely as soon as sum1 coments)