The Misadventures in The Castle That Never Was

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*goes to Saving Kairi*

Oh crap! It is! Me and Kairi_girl must havee been on the same thought when doing our chapters. That's freaky.

Yeah, I like it, but my character doesn't. I actually can't wait to do the art for it! :D

Thanks Obsessed, and just tto let you know.....you and DF are the ones who inspired me.

 

I've just read through all the chapters, and I'm really impressed! Obsessed is right - you've really improved over time!

I like the way you include humour in your chapters. This one was well-written enough to enjoy, even without the humour. I'd say I like your funnier chapters most, but now it's obvious you can write chapters that aren't funny really well too.
I like the parts with the Organization members, they're hilarious :D And the battle was great too
There's lots of different ideas going on from chapter to chapter, so it feels sorta unconnected at times, but overall it's really entertaining.

My rambles aside, I really like your story and can't wait for more! :D

 

the Awakening of Xellon intresting.
next with tons of humor, sounds good.

funny 2 fan fic and both a awakening.
anyway keep it up.

 

awesome i love this its hilarious, and i like the idea of ur deep-dive for Xellon

by the way, i couldn't help but try out drawin' it here

 

Whoa! Awesome!!! That sweet!

 

Sorry for making you wait for so long,guys.

I'll update soon.:D