The Misadventures in The Castle That Never Was

Thanx, and Xemnas being dead meat: maybe....maybe not

:offtopic: you guy's like my Zack sig? :offtopic:

 

This is really good. HAHA, I like what Axel did to Roxas!!

 

You just got crisis core? Me too!

Anyway, besides that, I thought this chapter was great. You pull off the dodgy stuff with Roxas and Namine in a way that I could never. Many times I burst out laughing so loudly I woke my parents up (they weren't happy)

I adore (yes, adore) how you portray the characters. You've got all their personalities bang on. I lol'd at everything from Marluxia planting flowers to Roxas' MP3 playing in the meeting and Demyx walking in on Xemnas and Aerith. (aerith wth?)

Lol I think Xemnas was a tad OOC with playing on a DS but it was still funny. And Namine.. like.. what on earth? She is like soo confident suddenly (I seriously don't get how she was just embaressed then crying lol)

Best part? Axel saying "got it memorized?" when it was completely unnescessary. Don't know why, but it cracks me up reading that.

I feel sorry for Zexion.

Woah this post is lonnng. I feel I have to comment here though :D

keep it up :noworries:

 

this is really funny,oh and dont forget to check out my story about that drive form.

 

Crisis Core! This is kinda off-topic, but when my parents gave me my PSP they didn't know the Memory Stick Duo was sold seperatly. So, when I got on Crisis Core and played it, I used the "Turn it off and come to right back where you were" feature instead. When I got to the first fight (IDK how many there are) with Genesis, I had the Phoenix Down from Mount Tamblin, died, used it, and then......I died, making the game start from the beginning! *cries* Genesis is hard!

Thank you! Sorry about waking your parents!:o My bad...

You adore it...really? *blushes* Thanks. Yea, I know Aerith was an akward choice, but she was the first one that came to mind. I could have used Cissenni....

Xemnas' DS was OOC, but I thought that something had to calm his nerves. Namine is the character I'm really playing with in this fanfic. I love her, but it's just fun to make her...what's that word...bipolar! I think...

Yes, Axel and his ways no one really understands. That's my favorite line he uses in the game, so I just had to do that to make a 'WTH?' moment.:D

I agree, I shouldn't have been so harsh on him. I just wanted this part to show that he doesn't like people calling him emo. It really hurts people, ya'know? *sniff*

You're right, it's long, but there's no rule against long posts.:D

No prob, dude:D

 

The memory sticks are sold seperatly? Oh.. I thought i had lost mine somehow *facepalms*.

Lol don't worry about my parents my laughter is worth it.

Axel's sayings are awesome xD

lol im going to pretend I know what bipolar means for now...

:D

keep it up, im luvin the regular updates :rockband:

 

HEH, Xemnas is dead!! Thta how he REALLY died!

 

Will there me any updates soon :3

I miss your version of bfmv loving Roxas... xD
I CRAVE this story. SERIOUSLY.
Ill die if I don't get more ;)

 

Don't die Obsessed!

Sorry guys about the long wait...:sweatdrop:

My family's in the process of moving, and as of right now we don't have Internet, until I found an available laptop!

I'll update sometime 2nite!

 

Thank God!!! Obsessed isn't the only one dieing y'kno.

 

Yayz! Wait.. I don't know where you live.. so I don't know when tonight is so.. Ill stay on all day! Woop woop lol.

Don't worry Iv'e moved house a coupla times and its hell .. good luck! xD

p.s I love how every calls me obsessed (squeee) Im finally moving up in this forum woop woop!

 

I live in the USA, and it's morning here :sweatdrop:
Don't kill me!

Yea, I have too..........you're right.....it is hell......o_o.......

nobody really knows me in the forum......I'm a nobody......o_o........what a coincidence

 

i kown you.
your are Roxas24Sora and the writer of Kingdom Hearts 3-The Encounter and The Misadventures in The Castle That Never Was the story that's funny as hell.
and don't worry i don't know anybody only obsessed and that only on the forum

 

Lol dw I won't kill you (just yet muah ha ha)

Or I'll never reach the ending of this story!

Meh Ill be on in the early hours of the morning anyway, like always xD

EDIT - don't worry I was a nobody once lol then I started posting all the time :3
Oh and congratualtions on the 4th page tee hee lol

 

Okay guys, Obsessed is plotting to kill me if I don't add a new chapter, so here it goes!


Oh yeah! I have another story that I've been given advice to combine with this story from a talented writer
-cough cough- Obsessed - cough- So this story is gonna have some action, romance, and battle

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Xemnas suited up for the beating of a lifetime. The only one with armor available in the castle was Marluxia, so Xemnas was putting on a pink breastplate and gauntlets. Demyx and Aerith stood in the doorway, each taking turns playing the sitar."Nice skills!" Demyx noted when Aerith was done playing Misory Buisness by Paramore.

"Why, thank you." Aerith blushed and handed the instrument to the Melodious Nocturne.

"So, did you really come here to have some time with Xemnas?" Demyx asked with a disgusted look on his face.

"I came to tell him some rather frightning news." Aerith twisted her dress into a knot."Sora has been possessed by some dark being. He has turned on everyone he loves and plans on destroying all the worlds."


"Holy crap!" Demyx dropped his sitar."This is WAY worse than Cloud beating the..."

"Watch your language." Aerith interrupted.

"I was going to say poop!" Demyx shouted in disbelief.

Xemnas then popped inbetween them."Okay, I'm......so screwed." Xemnas stated. He wept and grabbed Demyx's cloak."Am I screwed, Demyx?"

Demyx pondered for a minute."Nope....wait...no....yea, you're soooo screwed."

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Roxas and Namine walked through the Hall of Empty Melodies, hand in hand. They had been talking the past few minutes about their current problems. Namine was worried about what happened about an hour ago.

"Are we really that commited to each other?" Namine pondered.

Roxas shrugged."I don't know. We love each other, right?"

Namine stopped and sighed."Roxas, we've only been dating for two weeks, not two years." She laid her head on Roxas' chest. He comforted her by wrapping his arms around her.

"I know what you mean." Roxas stated."It's like Kairi and Sora though, right? We love each other, just not that much yet."

BOOM! Roxas and Namine were thrown back by a large burst of air. They landed on the second story, recieving only minor injuries. Roxas jumped up to realize who pushed them.

It was Sora. He was wielding the keyblade Oblivion in his hand. A dark aura surrounded him, along with some shadows."What are you doing, Sora?" Roxas exclaimed, drawing Oathkeeper and Kingdom Key to his hands.

"Defeating you once and for all, Ven!" Sora exclaimed.

"Wait..." Roxas was startled. He had heard of the name Ven before from Xemnas."My name's not Ven!"

Sora roared."Do not lie to me, young keblade wielder!" Sora darted after Roxas, slamming the keyblade towards his head. Roxas parried the attack, put Namine under a reflect spell, and striked for Sora's abdominal muscles. Sora parried his attack also, then conjured up a blast worthy of being shot from Bahamut. Roxas, however, striked through the attack, splitting it in half."Where are your companions Aqua and Terra?"

"What are you talking about, Sora?" Roxas shouted. He landed softly on the ground, then readjusted his black and white wristband.

Sora charged at Roxas."Don't play dumb with me, boy!" He shouted. Sora raised his weapon for a critical strike, but was knocked aside by a black blur. Sora landed on his feet, looking for what hit him. Another blur hit him, but this one was blue. Sora landed on his feet again."Show yourselves!" He shouted.

Two young men stood on each side of Roxas. One was blonde with a wolf shoulderpad on his left arm. He wore baggy pants and a shirt that had long sleeve on the left arm and had no sleeve on the right. He wielded a large buster sword wrapped in tissues. The other guy had spikey black hair. He was in a blue jumpsuit that was accompanied with shoulderpads, wearing a belt with a wierd insignia on it. His grin looked like it only came off if he was depressed. He was bearing a sword with a crescent shaped hilt.

"Soldier 2nd Class Zack Fair on the job!" The black haired man shouted.

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Wutcha guys think?

 

ok,that was tight,and plus,that sora dark thing,it's almost like mine,except without oblivion,it's pretty cool though,mine's getting better too...somewhat.hehe.

 

Me? Plot to kill? .... *silence*

Who might this Obsessed person be? I wanna read her stories xD

eh he he.. thanks.

Most epic part of the story so far. (cough im a zack fangirl)

Crisis core ftw! -Off topic- how far are you in the game??

 

yeah, I made a story before yours that was like that. I never finished it, so I continued it with this one

btw your story=awesome!

lol...seriously please don't kill me!

Oh! You've never heard of Obsessed?! Here's her story!
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=51672
haha....no prob Obsessed
BTW is the story Saving Kairi good? I wanna read it

yes, Zack's appearance HAD to be epic!
(offtopic) I still don't have my memory stick, so I'm at Mako Reactor 5 when Zack and Sephiroth go to Hollander's secret lab (offtopic)

 

Muah ha ha, I relish in the fact that I got the game the same time as you, and yet Im still miles ahead :3

even though you don't have a memory stick.... I got mine on the internet lolz xD

I can't tell you where I am coz it'll be a spoiler lol

 

thanks for the props dude,i released another update,too.this one may be cool because of it's content