The Love of a Nobody

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Where should Nex go to recover her lost memories?

  1. Twilight Town

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  2. Hallow Bastion/Radiant Garden

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  1. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Yup! But I'll PM her just in case. Thanks for the update!!!
     
  2. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Anywho, when you get the chance can you read Chapter II? It's in the first thread (You know, where chapter I was )
    Lol, I can't believe I've gone to the point where I actually ask people to read my fanfic xD. Pathetic.

    Egad! Someone actually posted on it *goes to check it out*
     
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    That's not pathetic!!! I'm kinda the same way.... Be there in a sec!!!
     
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    That was sooooo good!!!!!!!! EEEE! MAKE MORE! MORE!
     
  5. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    omg that was well worth the way....yay yay yay

    love it, cant wait to see what happens next
     
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    Don't worry! I'm workin on it!

    Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!! And you'll never guess what's coming....
     
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    Ill go look at it!!!! *scampers off* Heh. I might even post....... kay *rus off to go post*
     
  8. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Well atleast this is one big thread now...but uhm, was keeping the poll part of the plan?
     
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    Nah, I'll take it off. I don't really need it now since I knew what I'm doin.

    Thanks!!! Section 9 is up somewhere....Well, I think it's in here....Hang on! Okay, it's here!! Cool....Workin on section 10 furiously!!!

    I was just trying to incorporate the events in KH2 into my story, to make it more believable. But, of course, there are several kinks I need to work out now that Nomura's got the new scenes out for FM+. *runs off to fix* Hope ya didn't get too confused!
     
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    The Love of a Nobody... (section 10)

    Here's my new section. Maybe I'll get some more reviews this time? Anywayz, I once again thank my friend *Oblivion* for the proofs. Hope ya'll like! And if you haven't read my other sections, please do cause then this one will make absolutely no sense.

    The Love of a Nobody... (section 10)

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    “Look, I can’t go any farther.â€

    “What?â€

    “Demyx, you want out of the Organization as much as we do. Why don’t you come with us?†The Nobodies stopped their country walk to speak with each other. They had come so far, traveling to several worlds before arriving at this one. Nex and Axel seemed to favor it, but Demyx was having trouble coping with the fact that he had left his home. Along with the punishment that would be waiting for him if he didn’t return soon.

    “I can’t let the Superior know I’m gone.â€

    “Demyx,†started Nex. “You have to come. Xemnas probably already knows that you’ve left.â€

    “Yeah, but…â€

    “Come on Dem, you’ve got to walk on the wild side for a change,†said Axel sarcastically. He was still a little annoyed at the water boy for being so naïve earlier, but their situation had changed. They were on a world that they had no knowledge of and had no one but each other for comfort. Even though he was sure Nex would stay with him, he still didn’t want to lose another friend.

    “Demyx, you don’t have to leave, but we won’t force you to stay if you don’t want to.†Nex was concerned for Demyx. On their trip through the endless abyss of darkness, the two Nobodies had befriended each other. Axel had gotten a bit jealous at one point but he eventually joined in the friendship. They were amazed at how much they had in common with each other. Demyx was a coward, but he was a good friend. He was always cheery, positive, and almost always looked on the bright side of things. It was nice having him around when things got tough, even if he was a little dumb at times.

    There were occasions where he had even played songs on his sitar for them. Because the old one had been destroyed by Nex, he gladly fixed it into a whole new instrument. It worked the same, if not better, than his old one. His hands had glided over the strings effortlessly, gently strumming them as if they were made of delicate silver. Each song he played had a haunting melody to it but they made you want to cry at the same time. Nex had done so on a few occasions but Axel was always there to hold her at the right time.

    “I know I don’t have to, but I feel like I need to. I have an obligation to the Organization.â€

    “But so did we,†Axel said. “Look what we did. You can live your own life without the Organization Dem. It’s not that hard.â€

    “Yeah, but I don’t think I can. That’s just the thing.†Demyx’s shoulders slumped a bit. He didn’t want to leave either but there was something inside of him that was telling him to go back. He didn’t have a choice. “I’m sorry but I’ve got to go.â€

    Nex and Axel were silent. Then, Nex slowly walked up to him and hugged him as tight as she could. “We’ll miss you.†Demyx looked at Axel with a bulging expression of surprise, as if to say ‘Help me!’ Axel only smiled. That was how he had felt when she first touched him like that. He still remembered her first days with him fondly. And he still remembered their days before they had turned into Nobodies. He always had refreshing memories of her.

    Demyx eventually gave in and hugged her back, smiling softly. “I’ll miss you too.â€

    Nex let go of him as Axel walked up. So, he was losing another friend. But, he hoped, not to the darkness. No, this wasn’t the end of his friendship with Demyx. They’d see each other again.

    “See-ya later man.â€

    “Yeah, see-ya,†Demyx replied. They shook hands but did nothing more. Demyx turned and opened a portal to darkness. The shadows that erupted from the portal were immense but not intimidating. Demyx turned, held two fingers up to his forehead, and saluted his friends. “Sayonara!†And he walked through. The portal dissipated moments later.

    Axel wrapped his arm around Nex’s shoulders. She was still watching the spot where Demyx had walked off. “Look’s like it’s just you and me huh?â€

    “Yeah,†she smiled. “Look’s like it.â€

    “Come on, it’ll be okay.â€

    “Yeah, I know. It’ll be weird not having him here though.â€

    “Hey,†Axel lifted Nex’s head up to look directly at him. “We’ll see him again, okay? But for now, we’ve got to keep moving.â€

    “Alright.†Axel still held Nex as they walked along the dirt road to the city in the distance. They couldn’t make it out, but it seemed all too familiar.

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    As the Nobodies walked through the slightly desolate city, their senses became extremely aware. The smell of fresh food overwhelmed them.

    “Axel! They’ve got food here!â€

    “I can tell! Where’s the munny Dem gave us…†Both the Nobodies were starving. Nex knew it as soon as her stomach rumbled for the first time. Axel was hungry almost all the time, so it didn’t really matter to him. He started sifting through his pockets in search of the small orbs that they used for currency. Nex nearly ran off in search of the sweet smell of cupcakes.

    “Come on! Where is it…,†Axel groaned as he pulled his empty pockets inside out.

    “Maybe that guy knows where we can get some food,†Axel gazed up to where Nex was pointing. A lone man with long brown hair stood off in the distance. His pure black jeans held several revolving belts and his leather jacket had a feathered collar. Two small red wings could be seen embroidered on the back of his coat. The two Nobodies looked at each other and shrugged shoulders. They really didn’t care who the source was, as long as they knew where they could find food.

    When they looked back to the loner, he had disappeared. There was no evidence to suggest that he had even existed. The Nobodies were dumbfounded.

    “Where’d he-†Nex began.

    “Hey Nex?â€

    “Yeah?â€

    “Little help?†Nex whirled around to see Axel with a blade-like weapon up against his neck. The wielder of the sword was the same man they had seen earlier. He kept his face hidden behind Axel’s ruby red hair.

    “So,†started the man, “What’s a couple of Nobodies like you doing in place like this? And by the looks of you, you’re with Organization XIII. Am I right?†Axel wanted so badly to rip the blade out of the man’s hands. This was the fourth time someone had threatened him in the past three days and he wasn’t going to put up with it for long. Nex stood her ground, facing the mysterious man and keeping her eyes on Axel at the same time. Her fists were clenched so hard that the nails under her gloves were puncturing her skin.

    “Tell me what I need to know, or you two aren’t going anywhere,†said the man. He looked out from behind Axel’s spikes to stare at Nex with hardened aqua eyes. His own hair hid part of his face but it didn’t conceal a large scar that swept across the bridge of the man’s nose. A memory flash screamed out at Nex.

    “Squall?â€

    “What? How do you know my name?†asked the man indignantly. His expression was that of severe surprise, so much so that he nearly dropped his weapon. Axel stared at Nex with a confused look in his eyes.

    “You’re Squall?â€

    “Yeah, but how did you know that?â€

    “I…I don’t know. But…Did you know someone named Sydney?â€

    “Sydney? I-†The man named Leon searched his mind until, just then, it hit him. “Syd? Is it you?â€

    “Well,†Nex didn’t want to lie to him but he obviously already knew that she was a Nobody. There wasn’t much else to tell. “Yes.â€

    “Seriously?!†Then he literally dropped his sword and ran to Nex with a renewed vigor. In the biggest hug she had had to date, Nex was swept off her feet. “My gosh, I never would’ve recognized you!â€

    “It’s good to see you too Squall,†answered Nex as she returned the embrace. She looked up at Axel, crossing his arms and narrowing his eyes. Another slight fit of jealousy coming from the hyperactive pyro. Nex released her hug and they both turned to Axel. “Squall? Axel. Axel? I think you know Squall too.â€

    “Do I?†asked Axel sarcastically.

    “Yes, and be nice!â€

    “Axel?†started Squall. “I know Syd, but I’m not sure I know you.â€

    “Oh really? After all the times I saved your sorry butt?â€

    “Hey!†Every time two boys were in a situation together, some sort of fight over who was superior in combat usually started up. “I don’t think so! If it’s a fight you’re looking for,†Squall summoned his blade from its position on the ground right into his gloved hands. “Then it’s a fight you’ll get Ela.â€

    “Ela?â€

    “You just called him Ela! You do recognize him,†Nex looked at Squall. He was even more shocked than before.

    “Ela? There’s no way.â€

    “Oh, trust me, there’s a way,†said Axel as he uncrossed his arms and walked up to Nex and Squall.

    “But you…you…I thought you-â€

    “No, I didn’t. I’m standing right here in front of you. Nothing different about
    “Well, actually Axel, that’s not entirely true.â€

    “Okay, so now we’re Nobodies, but we’re still the same people, right?â€

    “Right.†Silence sank into the conversation carefully. Squall gazed back and forth between Nex and Axel. It was taking him a moment to realize that his two friends from years ago had changed so much since then: They were Nobodies now.

    “Come on,†said Squall as he dismissed his sword, “I know everybody else will be happy to see you two. We have a lot to talk about.â€

    “Squall?â€

    “Please, call me Leon.â€

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    Kinda short, but I had to split it to keep the next section from getting horribly long. Crits please!!!
     
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    Awesome!!! Once again, can't wait til the next section!!1
     
  13. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Thanks!!! Working as we speak!!!
     
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    :D AWESOME!!!!
    Ya gonna include Cloud?!?!
     
  15. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Of course!! All our fav characters from FF will be in the next one. Trust me. Cloud will actually have a good size role in section 13. Or should I say, section XIII.
     
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    YAY!!!!!!!!! *hugs* SWEET!!!!

    Can't wait!!!
     
  17. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    im love this story, cant wait for the next chapter
     
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    Thanks!!! Don't worry, all the FF characters have good size roles. Who knows? I might find a place for Sephy too.

    Thank you!! I'm still working on it, so I'll try to have it up as soon as I can.
     
  19. Fork These violent delights have violent ends

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    Ha boy,can't believe how much I missed!(1 section xD)

    Sheesh, why do I even bother commenting if you already know the answer twilit?
    Amazing, outstanding Blah blah blah. :P
    It's been 10 chapters. 10 chapters of pure awesomness. And I've commented for each one. Your just awesome Twilit. Live with it. :D

    Lol, what a weird way to review. xD Well, here's something new I've never said before. The way you tell the story is amazing. I mean really WOW.
    Your Narrating style>>>>>>>>>>>Anybody else's narrating style>>>>>>>>>>>>>My narrating style. xD


    So how many more sections is it going to be?(I don't want it to end!)
     
  20. Fruity~ Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Is Kuja there? although he's not in KH I hope he's there. I like him 'cause he's evil :mad:, cool :cool: and sexy :eek: . I wonder if you know him. :p