The Lost Organization

Note: This is not an Organization 13 RP!

Anyways, several years ago, a mysterious being suddenly appeared and started gathering people from different dimensions.
He gave them the choice to join him. He says this group would make all dimensions will have piece. (I don't even know if he is telling the truth!)
If a person did join him, he gave them a tattoo, and on that tattoo is a number.
The number signifies when they joined the group.

So far he has gathered many people from different dimensions, but he is still gathering people.

The group so far:

1. ????????? (leader, still unknown things are behind him)
2. Blaine: Leader of the Dead World (he controls the underworld in his dimension)
3. Craig: Master Ninja (last known appearance was in a gigantic war)
4. Dagneth: Master of Magic (no info right now)
5. Ethan: Vampire of Death (in search of pearls?)
6. Aldon: Master of the Elements (everybody knows him....>.>)
7. Xana: Psychic of Evil (my second character I created)
8. Drake: The Vampire Assassin (new member)
9. Alicia: The Dark Angel (new member)
10.

This list will get bigger as people join in.
(the 1-7 people are in this together, the new people who join should not trust them)
(1-7 people are mine XP, unless someone wants control over some of them.....)

Basic rules are applied her like no god modding, etc......
You can have many characters in this one.


I need help with this one, can you people tell me what I should change?

Edit:
A Form:

Name:
Title:
Age:
Gender:
specialty:
Weapon:
Ship name:
Biography:

 

OOC: I don't think you should change anything.
But we do need a character form. Unless we have to take them from another RP.

 

Suggestions are always nice.

 

Name: Drake.
Title: The Vampire Assassin!
Age: No one knows! He looks 18.
Gender: Male
specialty: Killing.
Weapon: Wave swords.
Ship name: The Vladicus. (his last name)
Biography: Drake was born a vampire and taken from his parents to be trained as an assassin.

 

Name: Alicia
Title: Dark Angel
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Specialty: Sneaking into places un-noticed
Weapon: Sword
Ship Name: The Black Lightning
Biography: She is very mysterious. But she is well known for sneaking around and getting information for people.
Pic:

 

OOC: She's a big blinking face!

 

OOC: Oh no! The pic must have gotten messed up. Hold on I'll fix it.

 

OOC: That's better! :p Looks great!

 

OOC: Thanks

 

Wow, the group finally has a girl!

 

OOC: Tee hee

 

*at some weird place*

1. Let's get this meeting started.
5. I would like to talk to you.....
1. Not right now.......anyways, I only summoned you guys here to meet your new comrads, meet Drake and Alicia.
3. Was that it, I was on vacation.
4. Maybe you should spend more time training.
3. Shut up number 4.
6. More fighting, like usual.
7. I don' like sitting next to you Ald...I mean number 6.

 

Alicia sat there rolling her eyes.

 

Drake sighed and said "This organization seems disorganized."

 

" That's for sure." She said.

 

"Don't even know why I joined." He looked at her and said "Nice neck."

 

" Don't even think about it bat boy." She said.

 

He smiled revealing his teeth. "You're a smart one." he said, "Not even a nibble?"

 

" Do you want to die right here?" She asked.

 

"Not yet." he answered.