The Lonesome Road

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  1. Destined Working for WDW

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    The Lonesome Road

    I’m following a path it seems,
    To a world I thought was right.
    Around the twisting curves I drove,
    Excitement luring me on.

    A ring rests in my chest pocket,
    Wishing to adorn your hand.
    But as I pull into your drive,
    That wish shatters to tears.

    And as I sped away from there,
    Your lies bled like the falling rain.
    I see your love flash through my mind
    From the land of make believe.

    Then I held the star to my heart,
    As my world came crashing down.
    Speeding, soaring, over the edge,
    Till His judgment came to pass.

    I fly along this lonesome road,
    Every time that you come back.
    Each time I alone see your tears,
    Falling down upon my plaque.

    Around the twisting words you spoke,
    Your heart telling you to lie.
    But we both followed a set path that day,
    To a world we thought was right.
     
  2. Devil's Angel Gummi Ship Junkie

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    OMG!!! I love it.A lot of emotion flowed through it.I'd like to see more ^^
     
  3. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    O wow, wat an emotion-filled poem. It's so awesome. I can't find any errors so keep it up!
     
  4. Destined Working for WDW

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    If only you both knew the irony of the poem. Thank you both for the comments!