The Life

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Life is hard
    Understand that
    You can´t trust in anyone
    You have to do the things by yourself

    You can´t sneak your sorrow
    You think in anyone to tell your problems
    Is a bad idea, understand?
    Don´t trust in nobody, okay?

    When life is hard
    You think in die
    But never give up
    So don´t give up your hopes!

    Learn with the experiences of life
    They aren´t a thing to waste
    But don´t trust in anyone
    Because everything they say is a lie

    So, come on!
    You have to live now
    You only have a chance to live
    Don´t waste it now

    You can only think in depression and sadness
    But you have to build your own happiness
    You think life isn´t anything but a waste
    Is false, there are so much things to live

    I won´t lie
    Everything is hard
    But you can´t trust in anyone
    That will make you stronger, so leave them right now

    There are so many things to die
    But you are young, don´t worry about them now
    You have only a chance to live
    So don´t waste it now!

    It may be hard
    Do it by yourself
    But you can´t trust
    I haven´t told you before?

    Don´t be sad
    Is because things don´t go like you want?
    Life has his bad and good points
    Try to put your mind in positive now

    Life is more than sadness
    Is more than rage or hopeless anger
    is more than all the emotions, even love and happiness
    It has a meaning, you have to find it or fall
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    I am still in that "Don´t trust in nobody" phase as you see -_-, but I am better in mood.
     
  2. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    *claps wildly* That was wonderful, Chaser! It was perfect it size and it really inspired me! A+!!! XD XD Keep it up and I'm glad to see you in a better mood... :)
     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Thanks... I suppose.
     
  4. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    I hope you're feeling better? At least a little bit? *hugs* Great poem...I'm always there for you, you know that though, right?
     
  5. Sabby Sleepy Panda Assassin

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    It's true, life is hard. You've got to fight the battle of living. Overall good poem
     
  6. Donaut Banned

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    Great poem, just hope you aren't giving advice to people. lol
     
  7. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    *Hugs back* I know, but I don´t know if you trust that fully or not.

    Thanks... I suppose.

    No, I am trying to give advice to myself.
     
  8. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    If writing poems is a way to give yourself advice, than do it, by all means. Heaven only knows you're amazing at it. Another nice poem.
     
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