This is my longest poem, so I don't know if it's as good as the others I've posted. Go, Soul, the body's guest Upon a thankless errand Fear not to touch the best The truth shall be thy warrant Go, since I needs must die And give the world the lie Say to the court, it glows And shines like rotten wood Say to the church, it shows What's good, and doth no good If church and court reply Then give them both the lie Tell potentates, they live Acting by others' action Not loved unless they give Not strong but by a faction If potentates reply Give potentates the lie Tell men of high condition That manage the estate Their purpose is ambition Their practice only hate And if they once reply Then give them all the lie Tell them that brave it most They beg for more by spending Who, in their greatest cost Seek nothing but commending And if they make reply Then give them all the lie Tell zeal it wants devotion Tell love it is but lust Tell time it is but motion Tell flesh it is but dust And wish them not reply For thou must give the lie Tell age it daily waste Tell honor how it alters Tell beauty how she blast Tell favor how it falters And as they shall reply Give every one the lie Tell wit how much it wrangles In tickle points of niceness Tell wisdom she entangles Herself in over wiseness And when they do reply Straight give them both the lie Tell physic of her boldness Tell skill it is pretension Tell charity of coldness Tell law it is contention And as they do reply So give them still the lie Tell fortune of her blindness Tell nature of decay Tell friendship of unkindness Tell justice of delay And if they will reply Then give them all the lie Tell arts they have no soundness But vary by esteeming Tell schools they want profoundness And stand too much on seeming If arts and schools reply Give arts and schools the lie Tell faith it's fled the city Tell how the country caress Tell manhood shakes off pity And virtue last breath And if they do reply Spare not to give the lie So when thou hast as I Commanded thee, done blabbing Although to give the lie Deserves no less than stabbing Stab at thee he that will No stab the soul can kill.
It was very good but their were a few mistakes and you might want to work a little on periods and punctuation. Other then that it was a very good poem!
I don't really find the point in periods, since the break between lines to me is another sentence. Thanks though.
That was the most touching poem I have read in ages! There are very few punctuation errors but overall it is absolutely like... Wow!
