Here is my first chapter to my Kingdom Hearts FanFic The Journal of the Heartless Angel. It starts out not very FanFicy but it will get more into the Kingdom Hearts Universe it just happens to not be about sora, riku, or kairi. Chapter one A New Beginning I never really thought about how the earth would end. If it were to die prematurely, I would have guessed Global Warming. I was wrong, very wrong. I turned off my Nintendo 64 and grabbed my backpack. My door flung open, which shocked me. “Mom?†I asked no one ever goes into my room unless I tell them. An old woman walked into my room, the reason I could tell she was old was that she had wrinkles that made her look over 300 years old. “Who the hell are you?†I asked. “Do you really need to know?†she asked. “Yes,†I said eyeing her. “Well I guess I can say I’m a magician,†she said. “Okay, but why are you here?†I asked. “I’m here to give you a message. Watch your back,†the woman said. “What does that mean?†I asked, however right then she disappeared. I walked out of my room and into the living room. Turned my head both ways and realized no one had seen her. “Goodbye,†I said walking toward the door to leave my house. “Goodbye Hayate,†both my parents said. As I opened the door, I remembered the quote from Romeo and Juliet so I said it to them before I left. “Farewell! God knows when we shall meet again.†I walked across the street to get to the sidewalk to I could go to school. However, half way across the street a car flew by hitting me. The last thing I remember was seeing my blood and thinking how hard it would be to get out. “First name Hayate, Age 14, Height 5†6’, Weight 95, Gender male.†A Doctor said. “The weight, did he lose a lot because of blood lost?†the nurse asked. “No, according to his mom he has always been skinny,†the doctor said. I opened my eyes after that and looked at the mirror next to me. My hair was still bloody, long and bloody. I touched my hair to feel it again, it felt the same but it seemed different. My hair has always been long, about half way down my back. My whole body felt different like I was just bitten by a spider that had special powers. “What’s wrong with me?†I asked with my rasping breath. “If only I knew, your body healed after the first hour of you going to the hospital.†The doctor said. I wanted to know why but no one knew. After another series of tests the doctor left and I was alone, or was I. The old woman who I saw in my room appeared about a minute after the doctor left. “I told you to watch your back, but then again I was trying to stop destiny,†the old woman said. “Who are you?†I yelled at her. “My name is Maleficent, I was named after earthling’s story of Sleeping Beauty,†Maleficent said. “Okay, so what’s with my body?†I asked. “Puberty?†Maleficent said. “No! I meant how my body was able to heal my broken ribs so fast,†I yelled at her. “Darkness, I gave your body a sample of it, and it seemed to react the normal way. Now do you want the rest?†Maleficent asked. “What? No I don’t want any darkness, I don’t even know what this darkness is?†I said. “It gives you the most of your life, everyone has darkness but only those who are given darkness can use it. Go to school tomorrow and test it out, maybe on a bully you don’t like?†Maleficent said. “You want me to kill, never!†I yelled at her. “Your chose,†she said and disappeared. I ended up going to school the next day even though a car hit me. I had bandages on my rip cage because that is where the car hit me. In my Physical Education was when I really get to use darkness. The radio was messed up so it only kept playing I Hate Everything about You by Three Days Grace. When it turned on once again I saw the only person in the whole school I hated everything about him. I then knew what she meant; the power was flowing through my body. “Hey loser come over here and I want to show the world what you truly are!†I yelled at the bully. The bully himself was probably just what they tell you on television, a kid having a crappy life so he takes it out on other people. He ran over at me with a fist yelling, “Time to die you nerd!†All of the lights turned off now; maybe it was luck so no one could tell that I did it. I used darkness to freeze his hand right next to my chest and I whispered into his ear, “No one ever calls me a nerd,†right after that, I used darkness and flung him into the wall killing him. However, the darkness was too strong for me and I fainted. When I woke, I heard a voice next to my ear telling me to go back asleep; I listened to it and fell asleep. My dream was the weirdest dream I have ever had because it was real. “Hello Hayate,†Maleficent said. “Where am I?†I asked her. “I’m using magic to talk to you so I can tell you a story you need to know.†Maleficent said. “Okay, I’ll be quit when you tell the story,†I said sitting down in the ground. The place we were in was a bright room with white for the walls, ceilings, floors everything however there was no doors. “My story begins in the galaxy called ‘The Living Worlds’ the galaxy holds every world that has life on it except earth. Now earth was once part of this galaxy however, it left because they were hard headed. The worlds founded a thing called the UW, or the United Worlds. This group monitors each world including earth, now the reason earth left was because they felt that the UW was invading their privacy. So they casted all of the magic users who lived on earth the fling earth to a different galaxy, it worked however everyone who could use magic died. Heartless have always lived on every world, but since they are attracted to magic, they never came to earth. Magic is the easiest thing to use; power of darkness is a bit harder since if you have a weak heart you will lose it. Right now, we the people who use darkness are shunned since we are called evil. Nevertheless, we are not, we control the heartless and use it for our own ideas. We make decisions on our own, like destroy earth using the heartless.†Maleficent said. “Wait, what?†I asked in confusion. “Earth is going to lose its heart, you will learn more about it later in your journey,†Maleficent said. Right then everything disappeared and the world returned. However I returned to hear some things I didn’t need to hear. “Are you telling me he’s dead!†I heard my mom yell. “Yes, he died in Physical Education. None of his organs are working, no pulse no nothing,†the doctor said. “Okay, I’ll come back tomorrow to get him ready to his grave,†my mom said and left. The doctor also left right then to probably make some paper work. Right then my body was flung up and on to someone’s back. “Shush, we must be quick,†Maleficent said and ran to the top of the hospital. She let me down from her back and then started a fire. “What are you doing?†I asked. “No evidence should be found,†Maleficent said and dropped the fire onto the hospital and muttered a few words. Then the whole hospital was on fire burning, once again, she grabbed me and we jumped to a neay building. After that, I fainted only to wake up once again at the worst moment. I looked down at the ground and heard two people talking. “So since the whole hospital was burned down your son’s body is gone,†the doctor said. “At least we know he’s with god now,†my mom said and walked away.
lol thanks, like most people say, microsoft word doesn't fix everything. Chapter two should be up later today. Edit: Sorry for it being late, I was being lasy today, but here it is- I never really believed in true love at first sight Nevertheless, I guess once you get it, you believe After the conversation with the doctor and my mom, I ended up fainting from all that smoke in the air. When I awoke, I was in a room with no windows. The bed I was laying on was ice cold and felt like no one had slept in it for 1000 years. I was not far off, right when I woke up the door opened and Maleficent was there. “Good sleep Hayate?†She asked. “Where am I now?†I asked. “You’re home; you’re in the castle of darkness. In the world of Radiant Garden, our castles name is Hollow Bastion.†Maleficent said. “So no returning to earth?†I asked. “Nope, you belong to darkness now, and there is no light in darkness,†Maleficent said. “You shouldn’t say that just because you have no light,†a girl said walking into my bedroom also. “Who are…â€I started to ask but stopped because I could not stop staring at her. She also could not take her eyes off me. Her lips mouthed, Love at first sight, and then she walked over to me. “Your name is Alice isn’t it?†I asked her. “Your name is Hayate right?†Alice asked me. Our faces were right next to each other, and then we kissed. The minute our lips touched, I saw all of her memories. Most of them were hard to see but some were so vivid I could even smell it. I pushed myself back and my body fell to the ground. I touched my lips; blood was all over my lips. “What is this, blood?†I asked. Alice stood up from the ground and said. “I’m sorry I saw this happening but I didn’t want to miss it,†Alice said. I got a real look at her this time; she had long blonde hair. She looked around my height, and the rest of her looked like she was made for me. “I’m sorry, but did you say you saw us kiss?†I asked. “Yes darkness gave me the ability to see the future, just like when you touch someone you can see their memories,†Alice said. “I can see someone’s memories just by touching them?†I asked. “Yes, now can we get back to what I was talking about?†Maleficent asked. “She’s doesn’t like it when people talk about their powers in front of her because she never got any,†Alice confirmed me. “Shut up Alice!†Maleficent yelled at her. Right then everything became silent and Maleficent pointed at us to follow her. The room we walked into had a lot more light then the room we were just in, I could almost feel happiness in this room. The room was about the size of a football field, with about the whole room filled with people. Everyone was in pairs also, when I turned around to ask Maleficent what this was she was gone and it was only Alice and me. “What are we doing here,†I asked like a lost kid at a park. “This is a tournament, once you gave into darkness you also joined this tournament Maleficent made. I happen to be your trainer; if you win, you get to be a member of her darkness group. However, if you lose you must train until next month’s tournament and you have to enter or you are murdered.†Alice said looking deeply into me. “So when does it start?†I asked, however when I asked that Maleficent said something on the intercom. “All those who are entering the tournament go outside now!†I then looked at Alice and we walked outside, a huge arena was outside waiting for us. On all four sides were stands for the trainers and other people to watch. Alice pushed me over to where we were to meet, and stay before our fight. “I don’t have a weapon Alice,†I said to Alice for the fourth time. “You have darkness, and also sometimes darkness may be nice and give you a weapon,†Alice said to me. Before I was able to ask why, I heard my name called. I ran up to the arena dressed in the messed up clothes that I was wearing on earth. The crowd that was just screaming silenced once I got up there. “You’re going to die, you know that right?†the person asked me. “Only after you,†I replied. That pissed him off; he summoned some darkness in his hand and ran at me. His goal was to hit me with the dark ball, but he failed after I jumped up and kicked him into the ground. He got up, now he was bleeding from the nose and he was angry. Darkness started to appear everywhere on his body and he ran toward me. I put my hands in a sideways cross over my face, left in front right in back, and closed my eyes. I heard metal clink to something and I opened my eyes. I sword was in my hands, there were whispers through the crowd. “He’s got the legendary keyblade,†someone yelled. I looked at my weapon, and then I looked at my opponent. I took the sword and hit him on the head which it. That was it, the battle was finished, and I won. However, I learned at that moment that I had more than one fight. I continued to win battles until the fourth to last battle. This guy also had a weapon, and unlike me he knew how to use it. The second the battle began the sword was in my chest nearly killing me. “I won!†He shouted leaving the sword in my cest. “You are wrong, I’m not finished,†I screamed and ripped the sword out of my chest and into my hand. I through the sword into his heart killing him; however, that was it for me. I was out.
