The heart of the Host club

OMG KAIRIS EVIL!!! i never would have guessed!!!!!

your spelling is much better! great job! but i also agree with everything Night said. theres always room for improvement. Cant wait for the next one!!!!!!!! ^-^

 

The Evil Prince


COLOR="darkorchid"]2 Days later on monday[/COLOR]


Tamaki walked into the room.He seen that nobody was there she he sat down and waited. . . Just then Tamaki looked at the time and seen it was 4 p,m.So he start to think..
Sora told me that he never wanted to talk to me ever again.. Did he get back with Kairi. .
Did she lie to him? Or something? Said Tamaki talking to him self.
I guess Namine is not there for me.I use to like Haruhi but then i seen Namine. . .
Hm. .Said Tamaki still talking to him self. .

Just then Sora walked in. Sora got his keyblade and got ready to fight with Tamaki. .
But before Sora could do anytning
Somebody walked in. .




COME ON RIKU! Yelled Namine as she thown a bat at Riku.
Riku looked at Namine.
I'm not good at. . Whatever this is. Said Riku
Kaze looked at Riku. What about we all just go to see Sora And Tamaki,
Namine eyes open.What do you mean Sora and Tamaki?
Said Namine

Kaze"Sora said he was goin to Tamaki and-"
Namine"HE GOIN TO KILL TAMAKI!"
Kaze". . You got all that from Sora said he was goin to Tamaki?"
Namine"Yea kinda!"
Ren"Crap"
Riku"Lets go"


Riku,Kaze,Namine and Ren went to Ouran to get Sora



~At Kairi houes~


Kairi"Everything is goin fine'
Bey"What are you doing Ka?"
Kairi"IT KAIRI!"
Bey"-Sighs-Okay.What are you doin with Sora?"
Kairi"Well i kissed Tamaki even when he was with Namine.I told Sora He kissed me.Now me and Sora are back together.But i want Kaze.-Evil smile-"
Bey"KA! WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS!?"
Kairi"IT KAIRI GOD DAMN IT! AND I'M DOIN CUZ THAT WHAT I WANT!"
Bey"WELL IT EVIL"
Kairi"looks who talkin.You where the one who broken lill Ren Ren heart-Evil smile-"
Bey"I DID'T MEAN TO! I JUST DID'T KNOW WHAT T-"
Kairi"Save it.Now go to your lill job."

Bey got up and lelf. . But what Kairi did't know is that she had ______




YEEESSSSS IT DOOOONNNEEEE THANK GOD!!! IT TOOK MY FOREVER FOR THIS ONE Okay so i did NOT do the spell check YET! I to sleepy to do it now so i'll fix my spelling Later mmk?
lol Okay so Bey is somebody i made up This is what she looks like this
She sweet and Kind she kinda goth.And Her and Ren where datein.But Bey had to break it over why?
Only i-Well i don't know yet. . . Oh well Hoped you guys liked
Who do you think walked into the room?
What do you think Bey had?
Do you think that Namine will get back with Tamaki?

 

in answerr to your questions:

I think Haruhi walked into the room. shes just the kind of person to do so.
I think Bey had a recorder with her and she recorded her conversation with it. she will them blast it over the PA system and take Kairi down.
yeah, probably. that normally how these things work.

beyond that, great chapter. the only problem i could see is a coding error: COLOR="darkorchid"]2 Days later on monday[/COLOR]. youre missing a square bracket ( [ )

 

Thanks!





Namine and Ren to get Sora.But when they got there.Tamaki was black and Blue.And Sora was on the floor crying.
Namine"WHAT HAPPENED?"
Sora'There was an man in black.He said he coming for Kaze and Riku."
Ren"KAZE RIKU!-Runs out of room and go's to look for Kaze and Riku''
Namine'-walks up to Sora and sits next to him-What happened?"
Sora start to cry.
He. . He start to fight with Tamaki so.I did't fight with Tamaki I fighted with the other man.
Then he took my keyblade and said."You will never be the keyblade"Then next thing I know it.
I'm sitin here. .Said Sora.
Namine looked at Tamaki..Her eyes open.She seen the tattoo of the Dark light.
Tamaki start to wake up. . Nam. . Namine. Cryed Tamaki.
Sora looked at Namine.Get him to the Hospital.
Namine called 911 but she heard an yell. . .




~Meanwhile.~




Bey! Bey!!!! Yelled Haruhi
I missed you! Yelled Haruhi as she ran to Bey.
Bey was told never to talk to her friends by Kairi. . Bey worked for Kairi cuz her family is very poor.
And Kairi family pays a lot of money.
Bey start to cry and ran off.
Haruhi did't know why she did that so she said nothing. . .
Haruhi start to walk home.
Sora kinda cute.She said to herself.
Wait wha? What am i saying. She said.
Then she bump into somebody.
A boy with Sora hair but it was blonde.And he was holding an Keyblade.
Boy"Oh sorry my bad.Hehe.-helps Haruhi up-Hi my name is Ventus.Yours?"
Huh said Haruhi.Oh my name is Haruhi.You live h-.Haruhi said before she got cut off.
Ventus"No.Haha.I live in another t- I mean world! Hehe"
Haruhi"Haha well it was nice meeting you!"
Ventus"Hey wait my friend Aqua said i have to bring a date to this dance called Prom? I think that what it called.And it at this school called o-"
Haruhi"Yea i know what it is>.>.And i love to go with you but did-"
Ventus"Oh yea i do live in another world for now but i'm starting school tommrow hehe sorry''
Haruhi looked at Ventus.Well okay pick me up at 7 on firday k? Said Haruhi with an smile.
Ventus smiled and walked away
Just then Haruhi open her eyes.
MY HAIR IS LONG I FORGOT TO CUT IT!
Yelled Haruhi.



I wanna say sorry for it being so short i will do the spell check in just an min and i hoped you guys liked it and here the song
[video=youtube;LhjKrZWl_ko]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LhjKrZWl_ko[/video]

 

nice chapter. i especially liked how Haruhi and Ven kept cutting each other off. your sentence structure is getting better, but dont let that stop you from improving. Question: whats the Dark Light Tattoo? it sounds awesome, but it might also be evil....

 

if you played ff13 it kinda like that but i always forget what it called lol






Okay this is a flash back about Sora,Kairi and Riku
This flash back story will tell you guys.More about the story.In the past and the f-. RIKU THAT A DOG NOT BEYONCE!
Riku". . I knew that." THEN WHY WHERE YOU TRYING TO MAKE OUT WITH IT?!
Riku"SHUT UP'
Uggg.As i was saying. This is like first class.The x-man movie thing.Like that.
First up Sora. . . Enjoy

~Never say Never (Sora story)
2010 Jan,14,11,Am
Sora just turned 14.His mom and dad have told him where he was going to go for highschool.
But the school shut down.They say that somebody got into the school and killed 3 kids.But there where no
Blood.Anywhere not even in the bathrooms.So that school out.
Then there was another school.But that was to much money,Sora start to think."Maybe i should just go to that
fighting shcool.Riku was talking about.Hmmm". .Sora stoped thinking.But. I want to be with Kairi.Kairi the one i love.Kairi the one i want to be with.Yelled Sora.Just then kairi walked in."Hey Sora"Said Kairi.She smiled. Sora looked at Kairi."Umm hey long where you there?"Asked Sora
as his face turn red.Kairi went up to Sora."Umm What are you d-"Said Sora before he was cut off by Kairi kissing him.
Riku"-walks into the room-SORA I GOT INTO THE SC- ummmm"
Sora"-pulls away from kiss-OH HEY RIKU!"
Kairi gave Riku the evil eyes~Whatt Kairi is saying in her mind~That Riku is so dead i was kissing my man
Riku"Umm. .-walks out of room-"

Sora looked at Kairi.''Haha"Said Sora as he smiled. Kairi looked at Sora.What school are you going to Sora? Asked Kairi.
I don't know.Said Sora.,Well I'm goin to the Japan fine china school(Not a real school i made it up this is MY story i can make thing up
if i want to >.>)
Oh i didn't know that.Said Sora sadly. But i wanted to go to fight school with you Sora,Said Kairi with a smile(Not a evil smile)
Sora showed a big smile.REALLY?! Yelled Sora.Riku heard Sora yelled.Oh HE GETING MERRYED TO KAIRI HE ONLY 14(Riku is dumb)
Yelled Riku As he ran to Sora and Kairi.NOOOO SORA YOUR ONLY 14 YOU CAN'T GET MARRY! Yelled Riku.
Sora looked at Riku.Wha? Asked Sora.Kairi Looked at Sora and kissed him..Sora eyes shut as he kissed back.
Riku walked out of the room.Finaly he got that first kissed.Said Riku.




~Never will i say i love you(Riku Story)~
2010,Jan,14,11:30,Am



Riku start to pack his stuff for school. Just then Sora walked into the room.Hey Riku,Said Sora.Riku looked at Sora.Hey Sora,Said Riku,
Sora looked at Riku.Umm what are you packing for Riku,Asked Sora.
Riku"Well i got into fight school!"
Sora"THAT AWESOME!"
Riku hands Sora a note.Sora open the note.Sora start to yelled.I GOT IN?! Yelled Sora.. Riku smiled.Kairi walk in.Hey guys.
Kairi didn't look so good it looked like she was about to cry.Sora looked at Kairi.Hey you okay Kairi? Asked Sora as he huged Kairi.
Kairi kissed Sora.I didn't get in Japan fine china school or Fight school.Said Kairi as she started to cry Sora let go of Kairi.No no no.Don't cry.
I didn't get in to.Said Sora as he lied.Riku eyes open.Riku always want to go to high school with Sora.Riku never liked makeing friends.
And nobdoy really liked him.Sora and Him was alway there for each..So what school did you get in? Asked Riku.
I got into Ouran.Said Kairi.Sora looked at Kairi.ME TO.Yelled Sora.Riku looked at Sora.You did? Asked Riku.
Yes i did now shut up Riku,Said Sora.Kairi smiled.Yayz we're going to school together! Yelled Kairi as she leeps into Sora arm.
Riku Walk out of the room madly and sighly push Sora. Kairi looked at Sora.Whats up with him? Asked Kairi.
Sora put Kairi down.I don't know.Said Sora.
Sora"You stay here i'll be back-go's find Riku-"
Riku was really really mad at Sora.Sora finaly finds Riku and walks up to him.
Hey you okay Riku? Asked Sora.I'm fine go back to your Kairi.Said Riku.
Hahah That what your mad about? Said Sora.So what if we can't go to fight school with each.We'll still be friends.Right? Asked Sora.
Riku looked at Sora.Every time we talk all you do is invite Kairi.When we go see a movie about GIRLS! Your invite Kairi.Then we see a
movie with that wolf dude.Said Riku.Sora sat down next to Riku.Well I'm sorry.It just i really like her.Said Sora looking down.
Riku looked at Sora..I'm sorry.Said Riku.Sora looked at Riku it okay. . .




~The spell that became~
2010 ,Jan,14,12:30
Kairi went to look for Sora.Just then a man in black came out of nowhere.WHO ARE YOU!? Yelled Kairi.
Shut up.Said the man in black.Just then a flash of light.
Kairi woke up in her room with a Dark light Tatto on her neck.Sora and Riku seen the tatto. What is it? Asked Sora.
Riku knew what it was but he was not sure.So he didn't go to fight school.He went to Diz.
Kairi"Where am i?"
Sora"Your in your room-Smiles-"
Kairi looked at Sora.Your so cute.Said Kairi as she smiled.Sora lightly kissed Kairi.
The man in black said to Kairi before the flash of light."On 2012 New year day you will turn back to your old self."
The evil was inside Kairi.She became the most evil girl in the world.She not the same now.






Okay that all i got for today.I hopend you guys liked.And if you do not get this part of the story PM me and i'll love to tell you :D
Any how I work really hard on this!..So not bad thing about it k? Thank you. and Have a nice day

 

Make host club


♥Enjoy♥




Namine ran out of the room.She start looking for Ren.When she got to the car.She seen that Ren was gone.And Kaze was fulled with darkness.Namine looked Kaze."Are you okay?"Asked Namine.She walked up to Kaze.Kaze turned to Namine with a evil dark smile."Better then ever.Namine"Said Kaze with a dark voice.Namine eyes opend.Namine start to run away.She went back to Sora and Tamaki."Kaze is evil!"Yelled Namine.Sora got up.He looked at Namine with open eyes."What do you mean?"Asked Sora..Riku walked into the room."What happend?" He asked.Riku walked up to Namine and Sora.Sora looked at Riku."Kaze is evil"Riku looked at Namine and smiled."Wha?"Said Riku smiling.Namine got mad."It true!"Yelled Namine. Riku looked at Namine"Soooo it is"Said Riku with a smile.Sora picked Tamaki up.Lets take him to the Hospital....
At the Hospital.


Sora sat in the waiting room with Namine.Sora looked at Namine."Did you call Haruhi and the twins?"
Asked Sora."Yes"Replyed Namine.The doctor walked in."Tamaki is goin to be fine.Where did he get that Tattoo? I would love to get one(The doc is a dude)"
Namine looked at the doc."I don't know!" Yelled Namine.The doc walked out. Sora smiled at Namine'Well that was nice of you"Said Sora."OH shut up Sora"Said Namine.Namine start to worry about Tamaki.Sora got up and sat next to Namine."He going to be fine"Said Sora smiling down at Namine.Namine looked at Sora.She looked into his big blue eyes.Sora lightly smile as he looked in her sky blue eyes..As they both got lost in each eyes.Sora slowly lean in to kiss her...





Yes it short but my pc is about to die sorry!

 

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOW Long time No talk.Haha
Sorry for the wait! I been working on other storys.Sorry,
Enjoy.



When Sora and Namine start making out.(...I feel odd saying that.)
Haruhi walked into the waiting room.Her eyes open.Sora pulled away and looked at Haruhi."Umm....Hey Haruhi."
Namine looked at Haruhi with open eyes.Haruhi walked out of the room and ran to Tamaki room."TAMAKI!'
She yelled.Tamaki looked at Haruhi."Na-Na-Namine and So-So- Sora K-K- Kis- Kiss!"
Said Haruhi.Tamaki eyes open."S- So?" Tamaki said trying not to cry.He stilled love Namine.
Sora ran to Tamaki room."Um..Hey Tam..Ya okay?"Asked Sora showing a fake smile.
Namine was sitting in the room thinking..."He kissed me..and I kissed him....." Said Namine.


Sorry it short!

 

I'm backkkk enjoy
Namine jumped."He kisses me.." Her heart was beating so fast she was about to die.Meanwhile Sora and Tamaki where talking.
"I think I love Namine." Sora said setting down next to Tamaki.Tamaki eyes open."Wha?" Tamaki was at a lost of words.
Sora smiled."GOT CHA!" He punch Tamaki."Listen.I'm sorry." Sora said.Tamaki smiled."It cool.'
Sorry it short..again