The Girl of Sound and the Boy of Silence

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  1. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    “I am a child of Sound”
    The girl smiles
    “There is Sound all around me”
    She walks in rhythm
    Singing with tune
    “If Silence ever caught me…”
    The girl points to her head
    “I can choose from the radio,”
    “Inside my blessed head”
    And she hums to the radio
    On which she claims
    To have antennae
    Like a butterfly on a bright summer’s day
    “I am a child blessed by Sound”

    I am a child of Silence
    Writes the boy who scribbles on paper
    It has chosen to curse me alone
    I cannot speak
    But I can hear other’s sounds
    I can hear a girl
    She has Sound all around her
    All I am is lonely with my silent demon
    I am cursed by Silence

    “Hello”
    Smiles the girl of Sound
    The boy of Silence writes back
    I hate you
    “Why? Why do you hate me?”
    The girl wonders, curious
    “Is it my Sound?”
    The boy of Silence node, grimace on his face
    “Well don’t be”
    Why?
    “Because…”

    Silence is a Sound
    “I wish for Silence”
    I wish for Sound



    This is an original poem created by me and I would like if you didn't steal. Please tell me your thoughts on it, thank you
     
  2. Dark_dragon_heartless Traverse Town Homebody

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    That's awesome.
    I like the way you wrote it.
    It's very good!
    The silence and sound work together beautifully.
     
  3. khmage1918 King's Apprentice

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    Thank you ^^ (btw, 13 years old)