Traditional Art The first part of my first manga

Well...here's the first part of my very first manga...Just please ignore their hands and the window on the first panel!! Ok...the first panel...sucks...xD
...Demyx gets turned into a chibi and...that's all...xDD
I made this page long long ago...I wasn't even on this awsome site when I made it!

Well I hope you guys like the first page! Any comments are appreciated...but noe mean ones...of course! xD

 

AWSOMENESS!! It looks really cool for a fan manga!! but your right the window and hads are a bit weak, but other than that it looks really nice!!!

 

Thank you for liking it! The bad thing now is...I'm out of ideas...This school year killed my brain...*can't think* ................ xD

 

:poke: Yup it's dead alright... let me try something different..:guns3: Sorry, no answer..

 

xDDD LOOL xD

 

At first I thought it was Saix (XD), but it's Demmy, right? =D

Ya need some help on hands, and you should shade it a little to make it look more purty-ful, but I ain't one to talk since... Ya know... I have major issues with that, too. XDDDD

OMG - NOES, A FANGURL!!! XDDD

Run, Demyx, RUUUN! D=

*sitar't*

 

Thanks for the tips! :D I'm gonna try to improve a bit more on the next page! :)

xDDD A FANGIRL!!! xDDD RUN!!

xDD

 

Awwwww~ I like it, it's cute! Better than anything I've ever tried.

Keep up the good work :)

 

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!! :)

 

Awwwwwwwwwwwww... It was soooo cute..I want to keep it now! :)

 

Thank you! I'm gonna try to make the other page as soon as...I get more ideas...:sweatdrop: yeah...like I said before...I can't think...this school year burned my brain...xD

 

Awwwwww, it was so cute >< I liked it, it was awsome!

 

Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it!! :D

 

Alice's opinion!

Yeah, alice wanted me to post that. =D

 

Oh god, Alice being blunt as usual XD

 

LOOOOOL xDD I appreciate Alice tips but...the girl in the second panel is not the one in the first pannel...and xDDD I know...I draw breasts a too big and shoulders a bit llarge, but I'm not perfect...and Alice draws eyes really good...but like I said I'm not perfect, but I'l try to improve my drawing skills. Er...can you please thank Alice for giving me these tips? :)

 

Can you tell Alice from me, that Nexitath, didn't asked for any CnC so she should of just lefted it, and if she doesn't like it, don't look (I would tell her my self on MSN, but I deleted her from my list)

 

Yeah, I'll thank her for you. Btw, alice has finished her first book. It's at an otakon or something. Let's see how famous she gets =D

 

The rules say to CnC... and she said that comments were appreciated.


Anyway, agreeing with Alice's pointers.