Traditional Art The finished product

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Valium, Jan 25, 2008.

  1. Valium Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I have finished what i have started *is amazed* which is a big step for me because i usually never finish what i start anyway i finished the picture that i posted here earlier (for those of you who have no idea what i'm talking about.... yea i posted something here a while ago) i managed to fix the blue tinge from the scanner but its darker then what it should be.... Don't worry the scanner will pay oh yes... it will pay...
    Finished Product

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  2. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    I think it's a sweet pic. The eyes look a bit TOO cramped. Try to move the left eye about 1 millimeter from the nose. And u mite wana add a mouth...

    Otherwise, it looks gd.
     
  3. .Kairi. Kingdom Keeper

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    The eyes do look a bit too close together, and the nose can be centered more. You have the guidelines there, so use them to center and fix the eyes and nose. Try making the motuh stand out more, it's a bit hard to see. The ear can be brought in some more, so it's doesn't look too far out. When shading in hair, make sure all the lines you draw go in the same direction, in this case you want them going down. Also continue shading in the right side of the hair. The neck area seems a bit messy, blend the shading of the shadows there and erase the extra lines.Try coloring in the neckline of the clothing some more as well. Once you're finished, completely erase the guidelines on the face and the extra lines around the head, to clean it up a bit. Otherwise it looks fine, keep it up!