The Enigmatic Knights: Darkest Before the Dawn

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  1. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc: Do it. I want to see who you are going against. *cough* Seifer *cough*
     
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    ooc: I might as well do this now since I might not be on tomorrow.

    The second period bell rings and I bolt to chemistry. Yukio is my lab partner, so I am glad to go to this class because I am not friends with anybody else in the class. We do practically nothing during the whole class time, except for the occasional note writing. I do not want to fail next weeks exam. Yukio really likes Akina and tells me that he is going to ask her out after school. I become enraged by the words that come out of his mouth. I then smile at him and look away. The bell to lunch rings and I stay behind, cleaning the papers up. I then run out of the room and get next to Yukio. I pull his shoulder back getting his attention, then I swing my fist, making contact to his right cheek. I then go up to Akina and start kissing her. She is shocked, but she doesn't seem to back off. Yukio is there behind us, looking at us. I then say goodbye to Akina and go to lunch. I see that Yukio doesn't sit with me at the table with our other friends. He raises his middle finger at me and walks away. I then go to him and he blindly spills orange juice on my clothes. I then pick up a poupu fruit from the table where a bunch a disgusting ladies are sitting, and I start to cram it into his mouth. Yukio then vomits all over the floor and starts bleeding from the nose. I get down next to him, but the sudden I do, food everywhere goes flying. I then force him under the table with me and we stay there. I apologize to him and tell him why I punched him. Seems we had more in common than we thought. We then dash to the kitchen. Seems many of our friends took it over. Good. We then get everything ready. Yukio yells fire, but aims it at the side of my head. I then start pelting him with wet noodles. By the time the principal walks in, the whole place is in utter chaos. In the kitchen we hear rattling. We go to check the supply closet to see all of the lunch ladies have been hiding in here. Akward moment. We then resume throwing more food at everybody else. All of the teachers are huddled together in the corner of the cafeteria, while the principal is slipping on every known substance on the floor. The final meatball was thrown when it hit the principal's face, making him land on his head, snapping his neck....killing him. The person who threw it.....was........

    End of Chapter Four.....
     
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    ooc: That's......$%&#ed up!!! Lol. Interesting story, Dual wielder. xD
     
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    ooc: i go camping and like SO MANY LONG POST...my mind id going to expolide if i have to read any more
     
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    ooc: Lol. Well, at least not everyone posted their beginning story, yet. xD
     
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    ooc: I am not posting any more of my story until tomorrow. I feel like I have done too much compared to everybody else, even though I am not done with a quarter of it. I feel like I need to let everybody else post something before I move on.
     
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    ooc: ok im starting my story

    rp: *a long period of silence*

    end of chapter one
     
  11. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc: TIME TO GET ROLLEN!!! XD

    rp: Doxyc bolted to the arena as fast as he could, Hayner right behind him. as he ran just before they got to the sand lot 2 people came out of the tunnle that led to the Sandlot.
    "Get out of the way Rai and Fuu!" Hayner yelled.
    "Not gonna happen y'know," he said dawing a struggle weapon. "if you want to get to the Struggle Turnament you have to get threw us y'know!" Fuu then drew her struggle weapon.
    "We dont have time for this!" doxyc said then drew his weapon and got into Battle position.
    "Come on y'know!" Rai then lept at doxyc as Fuu lept at Hayner. as they lept Doxyc and Hayner looked at eachother and nooded. they then looked at they're opponents and jumped into the air. making fuu and Rai go under them. they then landed and laughed as they ran to the stadium.
     
  12. Zarexu Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ooc: Hey ya'll my dad has a labtop so i'll be using thatonce everyday so i can type.Oh, and 13th, i'm gonna give you an idea for your beginning story in my post.

    Zaven and Illix ran down the street, watching as their friends and neighbors fell victim to the darkness. He scowled and grabbed his sword with one hand, swinging it back and forth, fighting off the minions of darkness. However,as hope for survival began to sprout, a portal appeared, and out stepped a warrior encased in red armor, a strange insignia engraved on its chest. It weilded a large key-like weapon, and beared a blsck helmet that hid its face. It steped forward racing a fist that swung towards Zaven. Its speed waqs incredible, and it struck te boy across the face, knocking him to the ground. Zaven turned his bleeding face to look as illix fell to the ground below the knight. THe knight smirked and grabbed its key-sword, raising it and looking towards Zaven and laughing vicously. Zaven scowled and bit his teth shoting up and saying,"Who are you???!!!???!!!" The knight kicked illix while he was on the ground and brought nhis key-sword closer to lllix. Zaven began to cried and yelled "Stop!!" He then dashed forward, sword in both hands.He stepped foward with his left fot and swung the broadsword horizontally.The knight Sidestepped and with one hand brought the bottom o f his keyblade down to strike the boy in the back, knocking him to his knees. He then swung the other hand down and grabbed his head, thumb and pointer finge ron his temple. He then unleashed a blizzaga that partially froze Zaven solid. Zaven breathed slowly then fell over, sword hitting the ground and buncing away.THe small 5 year old curled into a ball and cried, grabbing his wounded side that was kicked by the knight. The knight then looked to zaven and said,"Your not dead?you must have some strength....join xheonort!! JOIN THE DARKNES!!!"

    ooc:If you wish 13th, that knight could be you, if you want it to go ahead and post, if not, tell me and i'll write the second part to that post later.
     
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    When Doxyc and Hayner got to the stadium the man had just called out Hayner's and Seifers names. Breathing heavily Doxyc turned and said, "Good luck!" he then went to a bench and sat down. As hayner and Seifer fought Pence and Ollete cheered him on as doxyc sat quietly. Thinking of the Mansion he had just saw.

    When the battle finished doxyc looked up to see Hayner gloomy. "i lost..." he said with a frown.
    doxyc smiled and said, "You'll get him next time!"
    "Next up is...DOXYC!" Many people cheered as Doxyc stood and walked to the staged. Doxyc smiled and waved to every one around him. "And versing him will be...RAI!!!" many people cheered as well as Rai walked up to the stage. after they were handed there weapons, Doxyc and Rai turned to eachother.
    "When you loose dont forget to cry y'know!" Rai said cockily.
    "What ever..." doxyc said as he got into stance.
    "3...2...1...GO!!!"
    Rai lept at doxyc with full intencions. as he came down onto doxyc, Doxyc lifted his Struggle Weapon above his head making the weapons clash. Rai pushed harder and harder on doxyc so Doxyc would loose balance. but doxyc noticed this and slide out under Rais blade making him fall face first to the ground. Then an orb popped out and doxyc ran to pic it up. after picking it up Rai was back on his feet.
    "Ouch that hurt y'know!" Rai then bolted at doxyc. as doxyc stood there waiting for the attack every thing suddenly got REALLY bright. every thing around him froze as he faded to the light.

    ooc: lol zarexu we both wrote pritty niffty long things!!! XD
     
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    ooc: I'll post what happens with my character's story at about 2am, so I'll see ya tonight Doxyc. The reason is because my brother got sick, so I'm gonna watch him, while my parents and other little brother go shopping and go to the movies. I hate my little brother. Damn me for being the oldest.
     
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    ooc: xD Yeah you're getting better at this, Doxyc.
     
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    ooc: I'm posting the first part of my story. It would be so much better off if it remained a mystery.

    Amaya sat on a high brick wall and leafed through a large textbook that she had set on her lap. Suddenly a rock shot by her head and she looked down to see who had thrown it. It was Rowen; the boy was looking up at her as smug as ever. He was two years older and took every oppurtune moment to antagonize her. "What do you want?" she asked sharply. "I'm busy!"

    Rowen shook his head in dismay. "Don't tell me you're studying for your test already?"

    She shrugged offhandedly. "A little," she admitted. "It never hurts to be prepared."

    "Forget I asked and just get down here," he ordered.

    "Go bother someone else," she suggested, taking up her book again.

    A faint smile formed on Rowen's face. "Fine. I was just going to tell you that the commander has returned."

    "Dad is back?" she asked excitedly. Her father was a captain in the military and had been away for the past few months on a mission, and after so long she would be thrilled to see him. Without warning, she leapt off the wall, almost landing on top of Rowen in the process. "Thanks for telling me," she said gratefully.

    "No problem." The two of them started walking together. "I have some other news for you," Rowen added mischievously. "I took the entrance exams for the military academy, and I've been accepted." He looked dismayed when Amaya didn't seem jealous. The school she had been referring to was where all aspiring soldiers attended. Amaya's father had attended, and both she and Rowen had wanted to go there as well.

    "I'm not allowed to apply for another two years, not until I'm finished with regular school," she reminded him. "Remember? The age limit is fifteen or older."

    "True," he sighed. "It's too bad. You fight better than all those other rookies that got accepted. Of course, you still won't ever beat me."

    Ignoring his last statement, she replied, "The only reason I can fight at all is because dad taught me." Amaya made a face. "But I've got a long way to go before I'm half the fighter he is." The two of them turned off the concrete sidewalk and into the her yard. Instead of her father standing by the front door as she had expected, a man in uniform was standing there and looking at her expectantly.

    Amaya walked up to the young officer. "What are you doing here?" she demanded, "Where is my father?"

    The young officer shook slightly as he saluted her. "H-he's been called away again. He a-asked me to s-stay and tell you."

    "But he just got back!" Amaya said in surprise. "How can they call him back so soon?" The young officer turned to look over the horizon and past the city limits.

    "There's something wrong out there," the officer said, now a little composed. "We're not sure what it is, but the higher ups thought he was the best for the job." He winced sympathetically. "I apologize."

    Amaya waved him off. "No...No...Not your fault. Dismissed." The soldier saluted her again and quickly left.

    "You might as well take the entrance exams," Rowen joked. "You already act like a full fledged general."

    "I was just angry, you know I'm not cut out for too much commanding. Or even fighting..."

    "So then why do you want to be a soldier?"

    "To protect the people I care about, is there any other real reason?" She sighed, looking out to where the officer had talked about. "I hope he'll be okay."
     
  18. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc: i write stories! XD my stuff would be more like that if it was just doxyc but when theres more than one person it turns back to my old stuff!!! XD

    NO!!! do it NOW!!! >.<
     
  19. Zarexu Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ooc:omg amaya, hex, and doxyc, those were awesome
     
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