The Enigmatic Knights: Darkest Before the Dawn

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  1. Donaut Banned

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    ooc: I am just making mine into little parts. The good stuff of my character comes after the horrible tragedy. The only people I meet before I turn into a knight are Jaxed and Rokuxion. I think that I meet Hakumei, but I'm not sure.
     
  2. Hexin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    ooc: DAMN! Those are short chapters. Slow down, Dual wielder. We haven't even started yet. xD

    P.S: You do meet my character....I think. xD
     
  3. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc: idk how to start my story...
     
  4. Zarexu Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ooc: Umm.....Jaxed..I forgot to tell you, I met Rilain the knights academy when we were as i met Hakumei. Illix is my brother and joined when i did...I'll start my story-line off.

    Zaven woke up in the middle night with screams of terror and fear. He looked out his window to see his small town covered in flame. He shot back with fear and fell off his bed, eyes scanning around. Immedietly he got up from the ground and broke down the door to his room. As he did flames shot up, the ground becoming covered in Darkness. Just then, strange creatures formed form the darkness, originating in liquid and taking shape and volume.They were small, blakc figures with beaming yellow eyes that showed malice and despair. One leaped up and kicked Zaven down to the floor, another pushing him into his dresser. He screamed in fear, tears falling form his eyes. He was too scared and nervouds to stand, though his hand shot back onto the top of a table and grabbed a small stapler. He then scowled, still crying and screamed "WHAT ARE YOU!! GET AWAY FROM ME!!!"He then chucked the stapler, the peice of metal hitting it in the head squarely. The creature flinched, the hole where the stapler hit refilling itself with darkness. Zaven then got up, falling back down to the ground, hitting his back and ehad against his desk. The force made something shake, then fall to the ground. It was an old broadsword, an heirloom of his fathers that he kept with him. He then looked at it and scowled, a flicker of courage and hope filling hima s he looked at the rusty blade. He then turned and scowled, shooting up and slashing the creatures out of the way, screaming in rage and fear as he did so.

    He came to another room down a hall and he kicked down the door. The room was covered in flame, and thee laid his old aunt lying on her bed, smiling. A crying 5 year old child was in her arms. He ran over, slashing away the black creatures as they stood in his way. He came to the bed and said crying, "Auntie!! whats going on?" She just remained there, her old 87 year old face smiling and saying, "You with that sword reminds me of your father......take young Illix and leave this place." Zaven shook his head, tears rolling down his face, "Nah...nah c'mon old lady, your coming out of this too!!!" She shook her head smiling and said, "This world is being consumed by darkness, darkness that was brought upon by the hatred and greed of adults and old bumbs like me." Zaven shook his head crying wrapping his hands around her arms. She then said, "But the youth of this world...and the youth of all the other worlds...carry the strongest light...and carry love.." She then smiled and closed her eyes, dead. Zaven shook her violently scolwing and crying. He then looked to Illix, who was crying and said "Zaven....*sniff sniff* auntieeee." He then shook off his tears and grbabed the infant, putting him on his back in a piggy back ride like manner. He theng rabbed his sword with one hand and ran out the door, turning around to look at Auntie, the women who had cared for them since they were infants. The two boys then ran out the door of their small house to look around at an inflamed city with dark spots all over the palce, the creatures slowly leaking out and attacking the citizens of the city.

    ps: .....you guys just HAD TO START IT the day before i leave for vacation....GAAAAH oh oh well
     
  5. Donaut Banned

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    ooc: How tragic....:(
     
  6. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc: HOLY $%*#!!! that was long...Whos Zaven?
     
  7. Zarexu Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ooc: you'll find out soon enough
     
  8. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc: okay well...i have to start off Doxycs story now...
     
  9. Jaxed Twilight Town Denizen

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    OOC:You double posted............lol...............the admins haven't fixed it yet..........I still haven't thought of a storyline for Jaxed..................I just can't think of anything...............cursed writer's block................
     
  10. Donaut Banned

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    ooc: lmao:D Laugh at 13th and his wirter's block!!!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
     
  11. Zarexu Merlin's Housekeeper

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    ooc: oh woops, i meant to reply to Dual wilder's post, and i accidently clicked mine, sorry sorry sorry.
     
  12. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    A young boy walked along the dusk rode of Twilight Town. He was younge, About 11, had Dark Purple hair that was really spikey (Like clouds hair and was slightly shorter than his hair in The Enigmatic Knights), and had green eyes. he wore a white t-shirt with black pants that had a chain on his right side. he walked along the path untill he got to a forest. He tilted his head as he walked into this mysterious forest. The bark on the trees looked old, but the leaves were like new. The thick forest seemed to go on forever. Luckaly there was a dirt path that the kid could follow. he walked down this path untill there was what looked like a Clearing. in the Clearing was a Mansion. He looked at it in aw as the windows curtains flapped in the wind along with the rattling Gate in the front that had a giant Key Hole. As the boy walked up a sudden yell came from behind him,
    "DOXYC!!!"
    Doxyc turned around to find one of his good friends, Hayner, running at him. when Hayner caught up with Doxyc he bent over and started inhailing and exhailing over and over again.
    "Whats up?" Doxyc asked.
    Hayner got up and said, "The struggle Turnament is going to START!"
    "WHAT!?" Doxyc then Bolted pass Hayner and into the forest and off to the sand lot.
    "Hey wait up!" Hayner yelled at Doxyc and started running again.

    ooc: finished the first part! XD
     
  13. Donaut Banned

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    ooc: Nice way to start it off. I like how you put a familiar face in there. Bravo.
     
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    ooc: yes yes i do have my moments lol
     
  15. Donaut Banned

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    ooc: I wonder why Black Sinner wasn't on all day. It is fun on the plane right now. It is quiet because everybody is sleeping.
     
  16. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    how old are you?
     
  17. Donaut Banned

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    I am fifteen years of age. I am not the brightest guy, but I am not a dope. I'll say I am below the smart nerds. Why do you ask?
     
  18. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    and yet you are the assistance manager of a Game Stop i believe
     
  19. Donaut Banned

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    My cousin is the manager, so he was nice. I love it. When we unload the Sony truck we get to grab a couple of games. I just got Shrek the Third video game and Pirates of the Caribbean 3 video game for my brother's birthday.
     
  20. Doxyc Traverse Town Homebody

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    ooc:i hate you!