this is my entry. i just wanted to write something that i thought was beautiful. this is dedcated to: kyrie: a friend in real life veryberry: a good friend hinta: someone who can make me laugh rikus#1fangirl.- lova ya babe THE DATE BY TUMMER73 SWEAT RAN DOWN SORA'S NEAK. AS HE WALKED TO THE DOOR, HE KEPT WONDERING IF NOW WAS RIGHT. THEY HAVE BEEN DATING FOR OVER A YEAR. SORA WAS AT THE FOOT STEPS OF THE DOOR. THERE WAS NO TURNING BACK NOW. HE RUNG THE DOOR BELL AND WAS READY KAIRI OPENED THE DOOR AND FELT NERVIOUS.WILL THIS BE THE NIGHTSHE WAS WEARING A DRESS THAT SORA BOUGHT FOR HER FOR CHRISTMAS. IT WAS BLUE WITH GLITTER AROUND IT. SHE CUT HER HAIR, AND HAD EARINGS, THAT SHE GOT FOR HER BIRTHDAY. THEY GOT INTO SORA'S CAR AND LEFT. THEY WENT TO WHERE THEY FIRST MET, THE BEACH ON DESTINY ISLAND. THEY WERE GOING TO HAVE A PICNIC. THEY ARIVED AT THE DOC AND SORA ROWED TO THE ISLAND. "TONIGHT SURE IS BEAUTIFUL"KAIRI SAID. "YEP. SURE IS. THE PERFECT NIGHT" SORA KEPT THINKING WHAT COULD GO WRONG. EVERYONE ELSE WAS AT A FOOTBALL GAME. KAIRI WAS ANXIOUS. SHE WAS READY TO COMMIT TO SORA. THE QUESTION WAS: WAS HE? SORA WENT TO DESTINY ISLAND AN HOUR BEFORE HE PICKED UP KAIRI. HE MADE SURE EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT. SORA HELPED KAIRI OFF THE BOAT, AND TOOK HER TO THE PICNIC AREA. SHE COULDN'T BELIEVE WHAT SHE DID.TONIGHTS THE NIGHSHE TOUGHT.IT'S THE NIGHT. SORA WITH MORE SWEAT WAS EATING HIS FOOD. KAIRI WAS JUST WONDERING WHEN IT WAS GOING TO HAPPEN. THE ENTIRE PICNIC TOOK OVER AN HOUR. BEFORE DESERT, SORA STOOD UP. "WE'VE BEEN DATING FOR A YEAR TODAY." HE TOLD KAIRI " I KNOW OUR ANIVERSERY, HOW ROMANTIC! KAIRI SAID RISING UP. "THIS HAS BEEN THE BEST YEAR OF MY LIFE. I DON'T HAVE AN ANIVERSERY PRESENT, BUT I'LL GIVE YOU THIS." SORA OPENED A BOX WITH A RING IN IT. HE THEN BENT DOWN ON ONE KNEE "KAIRI WILL YOU... WILL YOU MARRY ME?" WAITING FOR AN ANSWER FELT LIKE AN ETERNITY. HE WAS AFRAID OF THE WORST. WITH HIS MIND AND KAIRI IN HARMONY SAID, "I DO!" SHE PUT THE RING ON AND KISSED HIM. THEY ROLLED DOWN THE BEACH AND INTO THE WATER. SORA AND KAIRI WERE SO HAPPY, THEY FORGOT ABOUT DESERT, AND LEFT BACK HOME. THEY WERE GOING TO TELL THEIR FRIENDS AND FAMILY. WITH THEIR DAMP CLOTHES ON, THEY LOOKED AT EACHOTHER. SORA'S SWEAT WAS REPLACE WITH HIS SMILE. HE WAS READY TO BE WITH HER. NOW, THEY CAN BE WITH EACHOTHER FOREVER. THE END!!! please rate and coment
Aren'tthey a bit to young??? But all in all 4/5 I bet you'll become a great writer some day there is so much detail in the sory. Don't mind the spelling mistakes I get loads of them.....even in tests T-T
don't know really. at my high school, kids are pregnat by 14. sad really, but i'm getting off the subject now most engaged couples take years to actually marry and it takes alot of time to prep too.
