The Darkest Castle

OOC- ok.


BIC- john the whistles igh and umps onto his freind and rides back to academy to meet the students and take a nap in tree for a while

 

There were orcs in the school handing out broshurs for the Dark army.

 

BIC- hmmm. john rides behind orc and whistles medium and the dragon growls to get orcs attention. John: may i see one of those?

 

"Oh corce," the orc said, "lovely dragon what breed is it." The Orc handed him a broshur. It talked about the miltery leader ship and training.

 

it is dark.

 

OC: yes it is the Dark army

 

well. not really.OOC- wait? huh

never mind laughs

 

"So do you plan to go into the army young man," the Orc asked.

 

Hmm im thinking about it sir.

 

"Well let me know when you make a desion," the orc said.

 

ok. thank you. gives low whistle hops of and draws out sword.

 

OC: here are some things to work on for you us "these" "" to show that some one is speking or make your speeking bold or under line cause it's hard to tell when your talking and when your doing things

 

OOC- oh sorry so like this . Example. " sir i dont feel like joining"?

 

"Alright. Well take care," the orc said.

 

" I will sir." draws out other sword and walks closer to orc

 

The orc starts talking to other studnets.

 

Thinks" hmm not yet i will another time" and and puts away sword and goes to a tree to climb

 

OC: alright write me a long paragragh on what he's going to do next.

 

OOC- right



BIC- John wakes up and whistles high and jumps onto dragon and pics up that orc that gae him flyer and takes him to training field times him to Johns practice dummy and tortures orc and finaly lets him go and then goes back to tree to sleep

 

OC: why were you so mean to the orc he didn't do any thing he was even nice