The completed Organization

The Completed Organization


Organization members 1-12 were sitting in the throne room…Each sitting on different heights of seats… Roxas had just been first introduced to the organization…Xemnas spoke first…
“Roxas…you have no heart…at such a young age,†Xemnas spoke…
Roxas nodded…
“He might be too young for this organization Xemnas,†a woman spoke…All organization members had their hoods on, except for a red headed boy named Axel…
“Larxene, he is fine the way he is…Just to see a small boy already loose his heart sounds sad…†Roxas heard a boy with a sitar say…
“I say just let him in…It won’t hurt,†a guy with guns spoke out…
“Welcome Roxas…you are a fellow member…Roll call!†A man yelled with a claymore. Each called out their identity.
“Number one Xemnas!â€
“Number two, Xigbar!â€
“Number three, Xaldinâ€
“Number Four, Vexenâ€
“Number five Lexaeusâ€
“Number Six Zexionâ€
“Number seven Saixâ€
“Number eight Axelâ€
“Number nine Demyxâ€
“Number ten Luxordâ€
“Number eleven Marluxiaâ€
“Number twelve, Larxeneâ€
Roxas gazed at everyone, trying to remember names…
“Axel…I’m leaving you in charge of showing him around…Got it memorized?†Xemnas asked teasingly
“Gotcha!†Axel said… Axel then teleported from his seat to the floor…
“Ho-How did you do that?†Roxas asked…
“Oh, the corridor?†Axel asked. Roxas nodded in shock…
“Don’t worry, you’ll get the hang of it…†Axel said taking his arm leading him out of the throne room…
Axel gave Roxas a tour of the castle…showing him everyone’s room, then Roxas’s new room…His room was too white…the light got his attention… He saw a closet full of hoods, a bed with a black spread sheet, and a computer set…
“Thanks Axel…†Roxas said…
“Ahh, no problem,†Axel said…Demyx came walking in…
“You found your room! Awesome! Well, hurry up! Xigbar’s making breakfast…!†Demyx said… He walked out of the room…
“What does Xigbar make?†Roxas asked…
Axel looked at Roxas…
“Trust me, stick with cold cereal…He tries to make pancakes, but on some, they are burnt and in some others you can taste the dough…†Axel said…
“I’d rather eat cold cereal then,†Roxas said…Axel started laughing…
“Finally someone who agrees with me…†Axel said.
The two walked down stairs into the kitchen and saw Xigbar making the pancakes.
“Hey Xiggy…Roxas and me are gonna take some cold cereal. Is that okay with you?†Axel asked.
“No problem…†Xigbar said…
Axel got out a box of Frosted Flakes…
“Pick out a box,†Axel said… Roxas saw in the cabinet at least 20 boxes of cereal…He grabbed the Peanut Butter Crunch…
“There is finally someone who likes peanut butter!†Axel said…
“Hehe,†Roxas snickered. Once the two got their cereal, they sat down at a table in the dining room…
“So how do you like the organization?†Axel asked…
“It’s kind of confusing…†Roxas said as he ate his cereal…
“I know the feeling…It was pretty tough here for me when I first joined…So, how’d your somebody loose their heart?†Axel asked…
“I...uh…don’t know who my somebody is,†Roxas said…Axel just looked at him…
“You don’t know who your somebody is?†Axel asked as he dropped his spoon
Roxak his head no…
“Your somebody is the Keyblade bearer...†Axel said…
“Sora?†Roxas asked… Axel nodded.
Axel picked up his spoon and started eating more…
“Don’t tell anyone else that you didn’t know your somebody…they will tease you about it…†Axel said…
“Sure…†Roxas said nervously… Once the two got done eating, Axel asked Roxas a question…
“Roxas, have you ever been to Twilight Town?â€
Roxas shook his head no…
“Then let’s go!†Axel yelled happily…

 

Really Awesome! you need to enter this in the Story of the week!

 

I AGREE!!!!!!! You should. I think its good!

 

Cool! This story seems very interesting!! Great job!Can't wait for the next chapter!!

 

Like what the first two said. It is so good!

 

Yeah! Enter it, Enter it!

 

I'll think about it...

 

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Once again, my story line! :(

Ah, too bad for me. I'll learn to deal with it.

Yeah, you wrote it pretty good, I must admit. :D Keep it up!

*maybe you should check out my story and see how I went about doing it =)*