darkcloud encouraged me to post another one. So here it is! The color of wings We both know you are the fallen angel with black wings, the color of sin What would mine be then? You said my wings are white, the color of innocence I guess my qualities just works out that way Just hearing you want to keep them the same Makes my heart happy "Don't you ever change" the voice whispers in my head For you, the wings on my back will never be tainted My innocence and purity draws you towards me Like a moth to a flame But then again, I’m just like the same way myself I can barely see them right now They aren't out yet But I know when I'll see them Is it the sign of terror in my way? Maybe Either way, I will still love you My feelings for you doesn't separate where we belong in realms Perhaps we will be shunned from other angels And create one special place just for the two of us You saw how devoted I am to you Every detail I did is to get closer, making you feel distinctive from the rest "Ideas of a child, heart of an adult" Those words uniquely made for me Form from your lips Is like how the wind shaking the tree branches gently I felt like I was moved Because I could never identify myself like how you did A/N: One talk, one poem done. Cool huh?
:wow: You have a knack for this... Very interesting, yet a little frightening, play with words. There's definitely a note of fear, yet it's obvious to see courage in this piece. Well done.
I mean the way you say the 'two of you' are attracted to each other, like 'moths to a flame'...It might be me, but it sounds like even though those two love each other, to get together would mean the death of the two of them, but at the same time neither cares about that, only each other. That's what I meant by 'frightening': not sure how this will end up.
I'm a n00b in this kind of thing and he has experience. I probably will stop this until we hang out together.
Dawn, your two poems are beautiful. I could never write like that. Besides, I think it nearly reminds me of two certain angels, whose wings are white and black. If you read my poems, they're about my old life and missing someone. They're not as good as yours.:luv::o
